Hey guys ! Since there were so less stories being written on Shivi recently, I thought I'll try to pen something .I am not a writer like the lovely OS/SS/FF writers in this forum and this is just a teeny tiny attempt . Here goes an amateur attempt . Please forgive me if there are a lot of typos and grammatical errors ,I just went with the flow and the thought I had . Hope you guys like it .The story starts from the precap scene . I am a sucker for scenes where shiva worries or cares for shiva , so if anyone can provide me links to read such stories also please do share .
~He Cares~
Suman starts questioning why there are two rasois .
Suman : Mujhse kuch bhi chipane ki himmat bhi mat karna , agar mujhe pata challa na kuch kaand hai tu tho gaii .
She said it directed to Dhara . Raavi overheard what was happening and didn't want Dhara bhabhi to be in trouble so thought of an idea to calm Suman kaki .
Raavi : Suman kaki , woh do rasoi iss liye hai kyunki main khana banana aur rasoi sambhalna sikhna chahti hoon !
Suman : Tho iss Rasoi mein kya aag nahi jalta ? Ya khana nahi pakhta?
Raavi realised she's probably going to get stuck but thought that if she messes this up then everyone is going to murder her .
Raavi (In mind ) : soch raavi soch warna dhara bhabhi aur shiva tujhe kacha chaba jayenge muft mein Suman kaki bhi .
Raavi : Woh kaki kya hai na jab Dhara di mujhe kaam karte dekhti hai tho turant mujhe help karne aa jati hai.Tho issiliye main kuch din khud se rasoi banana sikhna chahti thi . Aur zyaada nahi bas practice hai na tho shiva pe azmaungi. Backup pe taur par bhabhi is rasoi mein thodi cheeze karti hai agar maine kharab Banaye tho.
Shiva ( in mind ) : ye mami ki behen ki beti tho ! Mujhe zabardasti zyaada lasoon ya zyaada namak waala khana banake khilayegi. Lekin situation ko filhaal tho sambhal ke rakkha hai ye chipkali ne . Bas maa iske iss jhoot pe bharosa karde , warna bhabhi maa ke gusse ka shikaar ban jayegi.
Just then Prafulla came wanting to overhear what's happening . Looking at her suman thought this to be a perfect opportunity to annoy Prafulla further .
Suman : Waise tho main kaam karne yaha prafulla ko layi hoon . Lekin agar tujhe sab kaam khud karna hai tho koi baat nahi karle . Bohot saara pakwaan sab ke liye akeli bana payegi na ? Ye Prafulla tho 2-3 logo ka khaana banane ke soch se aadhi ho gayi thi phir ye anita ne achha khana banaya .
Raavi started thinking how she would manage but was ready to take the responsibility head on , if she had taken Shiva's responsibility when dhara bhabhi had scolded them in the room this was just food , but a lot of it . No doubt dhara bhabhi had said to take care of her rasoi ( for her and Shiva )but looking at the situation she knew she had to prepare for everyone all by herself.
Suman contemplated the situation further and thought to take full advantage of the situation because she wanted her shiva to be happy in his newly married life. She spoke up further .
Suman : Aur ek baat sun shiva ki madat le sakti hai tu , koi problem nahi .
Raavi : Nahi nahi kaki . Ye kaam mein madat kam aur kaam zyaada badayega. Pehle hi thoda khaana khud kha jayega .
Everyone except Dhara laughed at Raavis joke , Raavi realised and remembered what bhabhi had mentioned in the room in the morning .
Raavi : Par kaki khaana banne aur serve hone ke baad woh meri help kar sakta hai bartan done mein aur sab kuch clear karne mein .Hai na Shiva ?
Shiva gave her a stern look but soon softened it and said .
Shiva : Karunga ! Tu khaana banana shuru kar tera kaam khatam hote hi sab saaf safai main kar dunga .
Suman : Mera pyaara beta!
Raavi got tensed thinking about all the work she had to do , she had to cook for Suman kaki , Mami , Anita di , Gombi , Dhara Bhabhi , Dev , Rishita , Krish and Bhukkad number one Shiva.
She had made food earlier but with Dhara Bhabhis help or mamis help . Cooking for 2-3 people was one thing and cooking for 10 people including herself was a lot . She worked for non stop 4-4.5 hours to prepare a delicious meal for her family. She made Paneer tikka , Aloo Mutter, Jeera Rice , Dal , Chappatis , Veg Kadhai and also Kheer and gulab jamun for meetha . By the end of it she was so exhausted that she felt she needed to just sit or lie down .
She yelled out Shiva's name .
Raavi : Shiva!
Shiva entered the kitchen , the smell of all his favourite dishes were hitting his senses left right center but he wouldn't give his mami ki behen ki beti the satisfaction of knowing that her food smelt delicious .
He entered the kitchen and saw Raavi extremely tired . She was sweating so he came towards her and wiped her sweat with her duppata . He looked how pretty she looked even when she had worked for so long . Getting himself into his original Avatar he yelled .
Shiva : Ae mami ki behen ki beti , chilla kyun rahi thi? Aur tu itna pasina pasina kaise ho gayi hai ?
Raavi : Kyunki maine mera kaam kar diya hai . Main khana table pe rakh rahi hoon , tab tak tu saaf safai kar .
Shiva : Ae tu mujhe order mat de samjhi , main sirf ye maa aur dhara bhabhi ke wajah se kar raha hoon . Warna main teri madat kabhi nahi karta.
Raavi : Dekh shiva main na bohot zyaada thak gayi hoon , tujhse ladne ki taakat 0% ki bhi nahi hai tho please ye samet aur khaana khane aaja .
Shiva saw Raavis eyes and realised she didn't even say Bhootnath , gadheda or pisaach and realised she was extremely tired . He started thinking how she must've managed but thought of ignoring it . He started clearing the mess and washing utensils and was done with most work when some water fell on the floor while he was almost done washing them , he didn't realise and went to eat food at the dining table after he finished washing .
They went out and everyone ate a hearty meal . Shiva also loved the food made by raavi but as usual he didn't want to let that chudail know that her hands were as magical as his bhabhi . Everyone appreciated the food Raavi made .
Suman : Raavi beta khana bohot mast bana hai ! Shiva beta teri saari favourite cheeze kya mast banati hai ye. Hai na ?
Shiva : Achha hai maa ( he said not making any eye contact ) .
Raavi gave a weak smile at his reaction.
Rishita was annoyed with this .Raavi was yet to eat her food as she was busy serving everyone .
Shiva called out softly to Raavi (so that noone heard what he called her): Ae chipkali tu baith idhar aur khaana kha . Subah se breakfast bhi nahi kiya.
Dhara overheard Shiva and was happy to know that he cared for his wife even when he called her chipkali .
Raavi realised her one jhumka was missing and said to everyone.
Raavi : Main abhi aayi,shayad mera jhumka kitchen mein ghir gaya hai .
Shiva : Main bhi aata hoon mera shayad phone kitchen mein reh gaya ( shiva lied wanting to make this mami ki behen ki beti eat first)
Krish said teasingly : Haan haan shauk se jao lekin wahan kitchen mein bhi snowfall mat kar dena.
Shiva hit him on the head and rushed to the kitchen . He had to make his chipkali eat stat she looked like she would hit the floor any second.
Raavi reached the kitchen and found her jhumka in the corner and was about to turn when she felt dizzy all of a sudden, she continued walking and stepped on the water on the floor and slipped and before she could scream she lost her consciousness due to over exertion and hit her head on the floor .
Shiva heard the thud and ran towards kitchen only to find raavi on the floor.He ran the short distance and held raavi in his arms and she had little blood coming from her head.He got tensed looking at her that way. He splashed some water on her face and started patting her face to wake her up to no avail .
Shiva : Raaviiii! Please uth ! Aankhein khol!! Dekh tu mujhe alag tareeke se pareshan kar aise nahi samjhi. ( He removed his vest and held it against her head where she was bleeding to keep some pressure and again tried sprinkling some more water on her face but raavi wasn't opening her eyes )
His eyes filled up , he was extremely worried if she was hurt badly . He screamed out for his brothers and bhabhi. They all came running .
Rishita : Ye kya? tumne raavi ko maar diya .
Prafulla : Tune jaan Bhuj ke meri bachhi ko giraya na .Meri bacchi ko kuch hua ne .....
She wan interrupted by Suman
Suman :Prafulla kabhi tho soch samjh ke baat kar, chal tu yaha se .
Shiva : Aeeee chupp tum dono( He said looking at Rishita and Maami) . Raavi ko kuch nahi hua hai samjhe .( He ignored them completely and turned to Dhara bhabhi ) Bhabhi hum doctor ko bulaye kya ? Mujhe bohot tension ho rahi hai.
Gombi : Shiva main abhi doctor ko call karta hoon .
Dhara : Anita tu maa aur mami ko unke kamre mein leke jaa .Shiva ye kaise hua ?
Shiva : Bhabhi woh bohot thaki hui thi , shayad woh slip hui ya behosh hui mujhe nahi maloom. Maine jab awaaz sunni tho main bhaag ke kitchen aaya .Kabse usse uthane ki koshish kar raha hoon . Bhabhi ye theek tho ho jayegi na ( His eyes spoke volume when he said that . Dhara realised his Shiva truly loved Raavi but it was just second nature for him to fight with her).
Dhara : Tu tension mat le . Tu Raavi ko tum logo ke kamre mein lekar jao , doctor aate hi honge
Shiva picked her in his arms looked at her with concern and rushed towards his room .The doctor had arrived . Shiva wasn't ready to leave Raavis hand so the doctor had to move to other side to check her .
After checking her he said that she was just exerted and needed rest and food and gave her an injection and did dressing for her forehead and that they didn't need to worry .
Dhara : Shiva jab isse hosh aa jayega tho tu usse khana khilayega na ?
Krish : Bhabhi ye bhi kya sawaal puch liya . Dekho tho Shiva ko . Mooh tho bilkul murja gaya hai .Jab Raavi bhabhi isse ladegi na khana khake rest karke tab dekhna naye phool ke jaise khilega ye.
Shiva : Tujhe tho main baad mein dekh lunga
And threw a small pillow at him. They all left the room except Dhara
Dhara : Shiva , main Raavi ke saat baithu ? Tu thak gaya hoga na ? Tu thodi der so jaa .
Shiva : Nahi bhabhi mujhe bilkul neend nahi aa rhi . Main hoon iss gadhedi ke paas . Aap tension mat lo.
Dhara : Tension khud itna le raha hai aur bol mujhe raha hai ki main tension na loon . Shiva aaj maine pehli baar teri aankhon mein woh pyaar dekha , woh darr aur wohi chinta dekhi jo tu humme se har ek ke liye mehsoos karta hai . Usse thoda zyaada pyaar .
She teased him .
Shiva : Bhabhi aap bhi na . Kuch bhi soch lete ho .
Dhara : Achha bachuu , tho haath ek second ke liye kyun nahi choda raavi ka .
Looking at Shiva getting awkward Dhara thought of changing topic . Meanwhile Raavi started gaining consciousness but the duo didn't realise .
Dhara : Accha ye baat bata main tho apne Shiva ko bohot acche se jaanti hoon . Woh kissi ajnabee ko bhi musibat mein chodke na aaye , tho Raavi ko tu gundo ke beech bilkul nahi chod ke aaya hoga . Uss din ki kahani tho mujhe bata she asked sitting .
Raavi had gained consciousness but listening to their conversation decided to stay mum .
Shiva : Bhabhi aapko lagta hai main uss chipkali ko akele chodta ?
Dhara shook her head indicating no .
Shiva : Jab woh haraami usko haath lagaya na bhabhi mann tho kiya usski haddi pasli ek kardu aur wahi gaad doon .Lekin uss chipkali ke wajah se bas uski haddi pasli ek ki . Usko akele chod ke mujhe issliye jaana pada bhabhi kyunki aise 5-6 log tey , aur main iss gadhedhi ko unke aas paas nahi rakhna chahta tha . Paile unse nipatna chahta tha bhabhi .Woh mami ki behen ki beti bass mujhe kamjor bana rahi thi , koi bhi uske saat galat karne jaata tho main unki dulayi nahi kar paa raha tha. Tho socha tha sabse nipatne ke baad isko lene aunga , lekin ye gadhedi hai na ek number ki , galatfehmi paalna tho iski dusri hobby hai .
Bhabhi woh sab chodo na , ye theek ho jayegi na ?Ye abhi tak uthi kyun nahi . Doctor ne tho kaha tha aadhe gante mein hosh aana chahiye ,hum usse wapas se phone kare kya .
Listening to Shiva speak about Raavi with so much care made Dhara melt .Raavi also couldn't hold her emotion , a tear escaped from her eye . She realised she cannot make her Bhootnath so stressed so she though of opening her eyes slowly .
Seeing her open her eyes Shiva got as excited as a kid who had been given his favourite lollipop .
Shiva : Tu theek hai na ?
He saw that she was attempting to sit so he helped her. Dhara thought she needs to leave soon so that the couple can have some time to themselves .
Dhara : Raavi tujhe kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai ?
Raavi : Main theek hoon Shiva aur Bhabhi . Pata nahi kab chakkar aaya aur shayad paani pe peher gira aur main fisal gayi.
Dhara : Koi baat nahi . Main cheez ye hai ki tu abhi swast aur aaram se hai . Maami tujhse milna chahti thi lekin humne unhe bol diya ki tu rest kar rahi hai . Main bhi nikalti hoon.Tu apna khayaal rakh. Kuch bhi chahiye tho Shiva hai yaha .
She looked at Shiva and spoke now .
Shiva raavi ka khayal acche se rakhna . Khana main garam karke laati hoon aur idhar chod dungi theek hai ?
Shiva : jee bhabhi .
Dhara left the room and sent food through Krish after hearing it .
Raavi : Ae Bhootnath ! Itna sad face kyun banake behta hai ?
Shiva : Tujh jaisi paagal maine life mein nahi dekhi
Raavi : Ae main kyun paagal! Tu paagal !
Shiva : Agar kaam akele se nahi ho raha tha tho meri help le leti , bhook lagi thi tho paile khana kha leti . Khana banana tha , serve karna tha aur baad mein behosh hone ka iraada tha?
Raavi : Tujhse khaana banane ki help leti to tu khatam kar deta na .
Shiva : Gadhedi serve tho kar hi sakta tha na . Tujhe kuch ho jata tho . Meri yaha jaan nikal aayi tujhe behosh aur khoon se latpat dekh ke .
Raavi took the opportunity and picked their entwined palms between their chest and asked him.
Raavi :. Tujhe itni parva hai meri?
Shiva was lost in her eyes filled with mischief. This was the Raavi he craved for day in and day out .
As usual Krish came to interrupt their moment .
Krish : Ahem ahem . Murjaya hua phool khil gaya . Raavi bhabhi aap kaise ho ?
Raavi got away from Shiva and replied .
Raavi : Bilkul theek .
Krish : Ye lo dhara bhabhi ne khana garam karke bheja hai .Oye shiva apne haatho se khila dena bhabhi ko . Kaafi kamjor hai na woh issiliye.
Both Raavi and Krish smirked while Shiva gave them an irritated look .
Shiva took the tray and kept it on their bed and started feeding Raavi silently .After eating a morsel Raavi questioned.
Raavi : Tu silent mode pe kyun hai ? Warna tho mujhe pareshan karte rehta hai .
Shiva : Kyunki paile tujhe khilaunga phir tujhse ladunga . Aur pehle bol raha hoon ye naazuk kali mat Bana kar . Tujhe tho aaj itna khilaunga na ki log kayenge ye hui na Shiva Pandya ki patni .
Raavi started laughing hearing Shiva's words , she felt immense happiness being referred to as Shiva Pandya ki patni. In between all Shiva didn't miss a chance to feed his wife , he was doting over her as if she was extremely fragile .
Raavi spoke again .
Raavi : Accha sun na . Tujhe nahi lagta hum bohot ladte hai , iss baar kuch alag try kare ?
Shiva looked at her confused but continued feeding her . After finishing yet another morsel she continued with her discussion.
Raavi : Dekh main jaanti hoon humara rishta jaise shuru hua usse bohot saari kadwahat aa gayi hai . Pati patni wala rishta nahi tho hum dost ka rishta tho nibaa sakte hai na .
Shiva fed her the last morsel and narrowed his eyes at her.
Shiva :Tum aur main dost ? Chipkali aur Bhootnath ,? Gadhedi aur gadheda ? Mami ki behen ki beti aur Pisaach?
He started laughing thinking how it would work .
Raavi ( replied irritated ) : Theek hai 100% dosti nahi kar sakte kyunki tujhe tho mujhse dushmani bhi nibani hai lekin .50 -50 try kar sakte . Parivaar ke samne ek dusre ke saat dosti aur room mein phir dushmani .Balance bhi ho jayega.
Shiva : Koshish kar sakta hoon sab ke liye . Par agar tune ulti sulti kuch harkat ki tho rokh nahi paaonga . Tho puri guarantee nahi de raha .
Raavi : Teri koshish hi kaafi hai .
She said while hugging and kissing him on his cheek .
Finally Raavi felt that she was not in a dead end relationship. Shiva felt butterflies in his stomach with her hug and kiss. He thought he would give this relationship a chance and try to be an ideal husband just like his Gombi was to Dhara Bhabhi .
That day they both realised they would be there for each other no matter what . They both had someone they could trust on and someone who cared for them.
~The End ~
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