Lost Fire-a Bhavani Ashwini OS

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"jab kuchh pata na ho to apni zuban band rakhni chahiye," Ninad glared at a teary-eyed Ashwini.

"Mujhe to chup kara denge par sach ko khud se kaise chhupayenge? Main sab janti hu," she looked at him and Bhavani.

"Vahini. Ise yahan se jane ko boliye warna pata nahi main kya kar baithunga." Ninad looked at Bhavani who sat there with a hand on her head.

"Kisi ko kuchh bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Main khud ja rahi hu. Mujhe kisi ke beech aane ka shauk nahi hai," Ashwini left in tears.

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Ashwini held a photograph in her hands and tears were making the image blurry for her.

Just then she heard footsteps and she immediately put the photograph back in the drawer and wiped her tears.

"Tumhein sach mein lagta hai ki mera aur Ninad ka rishta devar aur Vahini se kuch zyada hai?" There was no anger in her voice.

Ashwini looked away, "jaise ki aapko pata hi nahi."

Bhavani came and sat beside her, "Ashwini. Tum meri pasand ho. Ninad ke liye tumhein maine pasand kiya tha."

"Kyun?" Ashwini cried out, "isliye ki har din main apne pati ko kisi doosri aurat ke naam ka jaap karte huye dekhun?" Her anger merged with pain made Bhavani's eyes pop out.

"Ashwini?" There was anger in her voice now.

"Jhooth nahi bol rahi hu main. Sab dikhta hai mujhe."

"Tumhein sab kuch nahi dikhta." Bhavani grabbed her hand and made her stand up and despite her struggle.

"Vahini chodiye mujhe" Ashwini struggled but Bhavani made her stand up in front of a mirror.

"Sab dikhta hai? Ye kaun hai?" She pointed at the mirror.

"Kis tarah ka mazak hai ye? Ye main hu."

"Ye tum ho? Ye tum nahi ho. Jis Ashwini ko main Ninad ke liye lekar aayi thi, wo aag thi. Ha tum uss jangli mulgi ki tarah badtameez aur muhfat nahi thi, par tumhein jeena aata tha. Yaad hai kaise ladi thi tum apni sauteli ma se jo ye bardasht nahi kar pa rahi thi ki itne bade Ghar ke sath tumhara rishta judne wala tha, uski sagi beti ka nahi. Main to reject karne wali thi lekin us din tumhari aankho ki chingari ne mera mann jeet liya. Agar mujhse shikayat hai to lado mujhse. Aise ro dhokar apna haq maangogi to lagega bheekh maang rahi ho. Bheekh mat mango. Shikayat mat karo. Us Ashwini ko mere saamne laakar khada karo jiske sath ladne mein bhi maza aye. Tumhein dekhkar to mujhe sirf taras aata hai" Bhavani smirked.

Ashwini looked at her with an expression Bhavani hadn't seen for long.

"Vahini, talaq ke kaagaz main jald hi lekar aungi."

Ninad heard this as he came inside.

"Kya kaha tumne?"

"Wahi jo aapne suna" Ashwini turned her face to Bhavani, "aapke devar mujhe iss layak nahi lagte ki unke liye lada jaye. Mera haq kya hai main decide karungi. Ye admi ya azadi."

Ashwini left the room leaving Ninad shocked while Bhavani smiled seeing the lost fire in her back.

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Ainveyi. Jo mann mein aaya likh diya🤷😅

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Posted: 2 years ago

What an amazing start to AshKu ki prem ki kahani.🤣❤️Main ab har jagah prem dhoodhungi kyunki show meiin toh nahi milne wala.❤️

But on a serious note, there needs to be a powerful lady in the family, jiske saamne Kaku ki bhi nahi chalti, some sort of relative, who can empower Ashwini. Sai toh phir bhi choti hai.


Amazing OS. Loved it❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Devikadish

What an amazing start to AshKu ki prem ki kahani.🤣❤️Main ab har jagah prem dhoodhungi kyunki show meiin toh nahi milne wala.❤️

But on a serious note, there needs to be a powerful lady in the family, jiske saamne Kaku ki bhi nahi chalti, some sort of relative, who can empower Ashwini. Sai toh phir bhi choti hai.


Amazing OS. Loved it❤️

aage aage dekho hota hai kya😉

JK😆

Yes. There should've been someone but alas🤔

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Cheeku ka beej is growing creative!!👏😆

Loved it!💗💗💗

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Originally posted by: sairat07

Cheeku ka beej is growing creative!!👏😆

Loved it!💗💗💗

Cheeku ka beej has sprouted🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago

Kya bat hai cheekukabeej👏

Kha se late hai aap aise ideas👏

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Kya bat hai cheekukabeej👏

Kha se late hai aap aise ideas👏

thankyou thankyou ❤️❤️

Are yaar. Likhne kuch aur baithti hu, likh kuch aur daalti hu🤣

Serious likhne baithti hu, comedy ho jati hai.

Comedy likhne baithi to serious ho gaya🤣🤣

Edited by cheekukabeej - 2 years ago
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This is gold

Awesome Cheeku, absolutely fantastic ❤️

Ninu ko talaak milega, free mein, lo Aai ne saara hisaab barabar kar diya 🤣

Par I know Cheeku, kuch toh abhi hai yaha pe, photo kiska tha,I know, Cheeku ka brain wouldn't have suggested Ninu ka photo, toh waiting for it😉

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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

This is gold

Awesome Cheeku, absolutely fantastic ❤️

Ninu ko talaak milega, free mein, lo Aai ne saara hisaab barabar kar diya 🤣

Par I know Cheeku, kuch toh abhi hai yaha pe, photo kiska tha,I know, Cheeku ka brain wouldn't have suggested Ninu ka photo, toh waiting for it😉

thankyou thankyou ❤️❤️

Cheeku ke beej ka dimag itna seedha chalta hi to nahi hai

Hamesha tedha hi jata hai🤣

Sometimes I feel like I've made 'weird' the new normal🤣🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago

Waah

Cheeku ka beej is on role. One OS after another. Wo bhi sare ek se badhkar ek👏