Raavi's love as poetry

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey everyone!

Here's a poem/nazm that feels like something Raavi would think or write after having fallen for Shiva (in a world where the CVs might've paid attention to the beautiful progression ShiVi could've had but that's an entire complain in itself so some other time!)

I am a tad bit short on time for today, but I'll be back tomorrow and elaborate why and how these words make so much sense to me in context of whenever Raavi will be head over heels for Shiva. So, for elaboration/ more context, please wait for a day or two until I can get back to it!

In the meantime, please feel free to mull over the nazm and share your thoughts about it. I genuinely enjoy the fanfics and OSs here, but I also really like the idea of discussing the ship or the scenario in the context of other forms of literature!


Maghroor Hi Sahi Mujhe Acha Bahut Laga - by Mohsin Naqvi

Maghroor Hi Sahi Mujhe Acha Bahut Laga,

Wo ajnabi to tha mager apna bohat laga,

Rootha Howa Tha Hans To Para Mujh Ko Dekh Kar,

Mujh Ko To Is Qadar Bhi Dilasa Bahut Laga,

Sehra Mein Jee Raha Tha Jo Darya Dili K Sath,

Dekha jo ghaur se to woh pyaasa boht laga

Wo Jis K Dam Qadam Se Thin Basti Ki Ronaqain,

Basti Ujar Gai To Akaila Bahut Laga,

Lipta Howa kohr Mein Jaise Khizan Ka Chand,

Mele Libas Mein Bhi Wo Pyara Bahut Laga,

Raisham Pehan K Bhi Meri Qismat Na Barh Saki,

Khaddar Bhi Us K Jisam Pe Mehnga Bahut Laga,

Mohsin Jab Ayne Pe Meri Saans Jam Gai,

Mujh Ko Khud Apna Akas Dhundla Bahut Laga


Also if anyone likes reading it in Urdu itself, here's a link!

Maghroor hi sahi


Loads of love,

L

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is beautiful! ❤️

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Absolutely beautiful

Loved it dr

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Sehra Mein Jee Raha Tha Jo Darya Dili K Sath,

Dekha jo ghaur se to woh pyaasa boht laga

So Poignant ❤️
Reminds me of “Water, Water everywhere, Not a drop to drink”

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wah!

This is so beautiful. ❤️

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