Riansh/ Rihaan ss story note page 3/ discontinued

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey guys a sneek peak for you guys, i will incorporate few things starting from the deal. And few changes in my own direction.


Prologue


Vy- If you want Vansh to live, come back home.

R- I will give you the heirloom but you won't touch the business.


Xxxxx

V- You are not my Riddhima.

R- It is you who is unable to recognize me.


Xxxx

D- I am sorry but someone poisoned her. The baby is dead.

R- I hate you Vansh.

Xxxx

R- Here are your family heirlooms. Be happy with your pathetic family and this business.

Vy- Your nothing but an orphan Vansh. This dadi of yours adopted you. Me and Riddhima are the true Raisinghania's.

Xxxx

Vy- Sis, where is our princess.

R- She is playing in the sand as usual.


Ps- Guys it is a humble request don't pressurize me to write quickly, it takes time to think and write in the phone. I will only start writing this, if i get good comments and after i finish Noori. Thanks and do tell how the sneak peek is.


Also do you want another love interest for Riddhima.?


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing ❤👏

Make Vihaan love intrest of Riddhima.....🥺🥺♥️♥️♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice start 🤗

Pls make vansh redeem his sin

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Vihaan as her love interest. ❤️


Fed up with Vansh and his pride/family/ego.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Milalal27

Vihaan as her love interest. ❤️


Fed up with Vansh and his pride/family/ego.


Yesterday's episode pissed me off so much, yes what she did was wrong but what would he have done protecting whilst he was out cold on the floor. And he doesn't realize that if he is not even alive will family or business matter.


For me Riddhima's love is becoming the reason for her own misery. She clearly needs some distance from Vansh and that psycho family.

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Originally posted by: raveena0605


Yesterday's episode pissed me off so much, yes what she did was wrong but what would he have done protecting whilst he was out cold on the floor. And he doesn't realize that if he is not even alive will family or business matter.


For me Riddhima's love is becoming the reason for her own misery. She clearly needs some distance from Vansh and that psycho family.


Totally agree with your statement. She wants a little family, but he wants all of it. To rule as a Don, maybe he thinks he is Amitab Bachchan, invincible smiley37


He is a damn fool. Also his non-stop I ❤️you is 🤢

She should leave him now more then ever his family will never accepts her. Their concern is their name, status, pride, money, wealth.....

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Originally posted by: Milalal27


Totally agree with your statement. She wants a little family, but he wants all of it. To rule as a Don, maybe he thinks he is Amitab Bachchan, invincible smiley37


He is a damn fool. Also his non-stop I ❤️you is 🤢

She should leave him now more then ever his family will never accepts her. Their concern is their name, status, pride, money, wealth.....


I just fear Vansh will learn everything the hard way.

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Chapter 1 - Peaceful life and flashback


Riddhima was looking at a girl smiling and playing around with her friends near the beach, she recalls everything that has happened in life. She had to endure so much to make her child life's peaceful but she wouldn't change a single minute of it.


Suddenly she heard a voice behind her, he is back finally,

Vy- Sis, how are you?and where is my princess?

R- I am fine dear brother. Finally you got the time to come back.😒😒 and she is playing with her friends.

R- Baby!! Come see who has arrived.

My- Omi, you came. Myra still had problems to pronounce Vyom so she called him omi.

Vy- Yes my princess and i have brought gifts for you.

R- Vyom, i have told you not to spoil her.

Vy- Well don't blame me, blame your hacker husband. He would buy the whole world for his princess.

R- I will, and you everything okay between you and Sejal.

Vy- Yup, finally popped the question.

R- What? And what she said?

Vy- She needs time. Which i will give.

Myra- Mama, chalo na mere birthday celebration start hone wala hain

Vy- Chalo my princess.


Riddhima smiled ruefully, she couldn't believe a person like Vyom turned out to be her brother and someone who loved her more than the people she cared about.


FLASHBACK


Riddhima and Vansh had jumped from the cliff, they were running and hiding when Vansh told Riddhima to run, he had been hit by a bullet. Riddhima ran like crazy trying to find someone to help them.


Suddenly one of the Chang's men cornered her, and he was about to shoot her, when Vyom shot him, he smirked seeing Riddhima,

Vy- Tch, Tch look at you Queen, how much you have changed for love.

R- Thank you for saving me, but i need your help to save Vansh.

Vy- And why should i help you? I want him destroyed.

R- Because i am saying this and because i will give you 50 percent of my shares that dad left.

Vy- Sweet, but how about we sweeten the deal, i want some family heirlooms of the Raisinghania and you will help me get it or rather steal from Vansh.

R- Never. I won't steal from Vansh.

Vy- Alright then, it was nice knowing you sister.

R- Wait, fine i will help you get the heirlooms but i won't let you destroy his business. Deal?

Vy- Deal


He helped Riddhima to reach VR mansion, Riddhima informed Angre and asked him to find Vansh since she wasn't able too. What she didn't know was this deal will destroy her and the relationship she cherishes so much.


Ps- Hey guys, here is the first chapter. Tell me how is it? And what should happen next? And do suggest a title?

Edited by raveena0605 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey guys, tell me if you are not interested to read the story. I will discontinue it. So that i can focus on other stories.🙏🙏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's Awesome

Please Continue

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