PurVir SS - Longingness part 3 on pg 12 - Page 11

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sri šŸ¤—

Loved It ā¤ļø

Vir's desperation is such that he can go to any lengths & in your story it was the end result, his lip kiss bruised poor Purvi that she was bleeding...Oh My God, Sri! Brilliant, Wild Wild Romance. ā˜ŗļø

Aur yeh sab baccho ke rehte 🤣

& That finishing peck, did he actually lick the blood out of her lips. Im in awe with your imagination. šŸ‘

Purvi telling Vir that S ko shaq ho gaya, didn't he realize what he had just done. 🤣


Please keep writing!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is so cute update !smiley27smiley42And at the last..Mukhiji is turning quite naughty..šŸ˜‰šŸ˜³


Such an adorable update yaar..smiley42 SS was a perfect combo of their wild romance along with their cuteness and gentleness.. Loved it..šŸ¤—šŸ˜³

Kaash humein aisa kuch milta..šŸ˜’šŸ˜³

Edited by darkchocolates - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Sri..thanks for the tag


I ABSOLUTELY love the dailoguesā¤ļø So apt . I wish they would show some intense dialogues and body language in the show between Purvir now that Mataji is prakat


Will there be more parts?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Part 3


Purvi makes him hide in the washroom....and she opens the door....


P. Mukhiyayni ji aap is waqt..sab thik hai na..


Sakshi notices purvi smudged lipstick and her bleeding lip...and is now more restless thinking that what would have happened that purvi is in this condition...


P. Mukhiyayni ji...boliye...


S. Wo hum mukhiji ko dhoond rahe the...


P. Mukhiji kamre me nahi hai...


S. Isiliye to dhoond rahe hai Purvi...


P. Ha...walk pe gaye ho...


S. Iss waqt...


P. Ji mukhiji kabhi kabhi chale jaate hi aise ..aap araam kijiye...wo aa jayenge...


Sakshi wanted to ask about her condition but stops herself doing that bcoz if something is going on between them then she have to be clear about it before question her so sakshi tries to enter the room so that she can look for.mukhi but purvi sneezes...to stop her entering the room...


P. Mukhiyayni ji aap jayeye so jayiye...dekhiye humme sardi hai aur agr aap yaha raho to aapko bhi ho sakti hai wais bhi aapki tabiyat kharab hai...


Sakshi nods in yes and she leaves... Purvi closes the door and asks mukhi to come out...


M. Sakshi gayi...


P. Haa, par lagta hai unhe shak ho gaya hai...


M. Key...par kaise


P.hume kaise pata...acha ab aap jaldi nikaliye...humne bola hai ki aap walk pe gye ho...to aap kuch aur bolna taki unhe yeh na lage ki hum aapko ache s jaante hai unse bhi zyada...


M. Tujhe duniya bhar ki chinta hoti hai par humari na...


P. Humari chinta na hoti to aapko kamre me ghusne bhi nhi dete...


M. Haa to wahi kiya tha tune wo to mein zabardasti aa gaya...


P. Acha thik hai...ab jayiye...bache uth jayenge...


M.ja raha hun...aise kyun bhaga rahi hai...


Mukhi ia at door staring purvi with a smile and purvi is about to clos the door...


M. Ruk ruk..


Saying mukhi pecks her blood stained lips and vanishes leaving her to shy..



That's it guys...this is my take on desperation of mukhi....

Haayee sri di.. ļæ¼ļæ¼ļæ¼ļæ¼ā˜ŗļøšŸ¤—ā¤ļø

Desperate mukhi is..ā˜ŗļøā¤ļø

Haha didiji..🤣🤣..shakal dekhne laayak hogi jab usne pur ko VAISI haalat mai dekha hoga..(kaash show mai bhi kabhi aisa ho..).,..

kya bhagaya hai pur ne..🤣....par usko shak ho gaya hai..ļæ¼ļæ¼ļæ¼ļæ¼šŸ˜†

Mukhi ka dailogue "Aise kyu bhaga rahi hai"....🤣. Mujhe vo dialogue yaad aa gaya viru ka dhakka kyu de rahi hai bahar hii phenk degi kya.. šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ™ˆšŸ™ˆšŸ™ˆ

Last part to.. . ļæ¼ļæ¼ļæ¼ā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļøā¤ļø

Please please jaldi se update karo.. ā¤ļæ¼ļæ¼ļæ¼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks for the tag Sri šŸ˜›

Part 3 is so lovely šŸ‘ŒšŸ¼šŸ˜

The kiss at the end ā˜ŗļø

Do update šŸ”œ 😳

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