PurVir SS - Longingness part 3 on pg 12 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Nezu...🤗

Yeah i don't write after vaipri shaadi...😆

Acha esa kyu

Originally posted by: Anahita_143

Haaye Sri..this was too good.💯❤️

PurVir ka conversation was so well written👏

Show mei bhi hona toh aisa hi chahiye par let's see lord saba kya deti hai hume🤷😂

Baaki your story toh definitely is a hit🔥👍

Kudos!🤗Waiting for the next part 😊

Thanks dear....🤗

Let's c saba mata ne kya plan kiya hai...😆

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Acha esa kyu

Pata nahi itna mann phir nahi kiya jitna aaj hua mera yeh scene likhne ka ..🤪

Thank you pallu,shree sappu and jiya....

@jiya agra mera bas hota go zaroor daalti Netflix pe...🤣

Just read the 2nd part... Its superb👍🏼☺️

Mukhiji toh ab besharm ho gaye😂🤣😂😜🤪

Pls di continue..... Eagerly Waiting for your next update..

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Thanks Mannu...🤗

Bohut hogay rotal mukhi Mukhiyayni ko dekh dekh ke ..thoda mast hona chahiye na...😆

Haan ab bohot hogaya hain!! Aapka story ka censored version show mein mile toh I'll b soo happy 😆

Par writer saba hain, uska koi bharosa nahi.. Mukhi going to purs room can be sakis dream also 🤣

Sri..I'm hooked to your story. Such a bliss

Brilliant piece by you, 👏

I couldn't stop myself visualising every word from your story.

This part really cracked me up -

P. Yeh kya kar rahe hai aap...bache yahi hai...

M. Tu to aise bol rahi hai jaise bach na ho to kuch karne deti manne...tu to kamre me andar hi na aane derhi thi..

& My most favourite part - Their liplock, their first love bite . ❤️

Goosebumps☺️

Sakshi ji will faint on spot, if she would notice!

Please Continue...

Awesome 2nd part Sri 😍😍😍

Haayee they hugged, Viru playfully opened her dori🥰🥰🥰 and they kissed too ☺️☺️☺️...show mein nahin milega par yahan milgaya💃💃💃

Aur didi aa tapki 🤪😆

Awaiting 3rd part one 😎😎

Thks Sri❤🤗

Sri thanks for tagging me 🤗

Mast update hai😁 Vir ke dialogues have me in splits 🤣🤣🤣

Ab kahan chupega Mukhi? Phir bed ke neeche?🤣

The kiss ❤️ Itne bold PurVir show mein kab milenge

Jaldi next likho...weekend mein tumhara hi Sahara hai

Good to see romance happen in your SS Srilata lovely romantic writing