PurVir SS - Longingness part 3 on pg 12 - Page 7

Beautifully written Sri 👏❤👌

I could actually visualize the hug

Can't wait to read more 😳

Ok just read the 2nd part it's absolutely amazing 💯 loved it to the core ☺️

Sri I love it 😍😍😍😍😍😍 Thanks for d tag 🤗

Naughty mukhi aur mukiyani 🤣 I can totally imagine this scene with these dialogues 🤭😁😁

The part where u mentioned d rights they have on each other n mukhi asking permission has my heart ❤❤❤

Pls continue this!! I want to know what happens when saki comes in 😆

This !❤️ Thank you so much Sri..It's pure beauty😳❤️

The dori scene..Hayee..The best way to tie it..☺️ And the kiss..

Saba iss SS ka 50% romance de de..Will declare her the best writer(for one day only)😆🤣

And please do continue yaar..Mujhe padhna hai Viru ki band kaise bajti hai..😭😭🤣🤣

Oo woww sri...its very good.

This is not like a story...but actual thing which can happen and which should happen in serial also...please.

U r amzing writer...do continue ahead....mukhi ko thodi der chupan chupayi khelne do saki ke sath...

The line where he said..bache na hote..toh konsa tu kuch karne deti...naughty mukhi😂

The dori wala part was🥰🥰😍😍

Mukhi ko thodi der aur shrarat karni chahiye thi..dori bandhte time..

Btw did he actually tied dori or he was more mesmerized by kiss and ussi mein kho gya??😅

Sri

Lol this is what going to happen if they go by logic jo ki ye log use nai karte

This was awesome

After such a long time ☺️ Last apne chana wale scene ke time likha tha 😆😭

Jab saki aye that sad viru music starts playing in my mind

😭😂😭😂😭😂😭😂😭😂😭😂😭😂

Didi apne to dil hi loot liya

desperate and naughty PurVir😆

aur dialogues to lajawab hai di !! I could imagine their expressions 🤣

P - besharam ho gye hai ap

V - teri sangat ka asar hai

Omggg 🤣🤣🤣 I was laughing at this !!

Mukhi ka uske piche piche ghumne, fir durr jana aur Purvi ka use paas khichna

V - bachhe na hote to tu jaise kuch karne hi deti manne 🤣🤣🤣

Baat to sahi kahi usne 🤣

Maza aa gya di !! Aage likho jaldi ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Jab saki aye that sad viru music starts playing in my mind

😭😂😭😂😭😂😭😂😭😂😭😂😭😂

Saki aygi na jab to Vir ke paseene chhut jayge 🤣 yo bhootni fir piche piche aa gyi, isko neend me bhi chain na hai 🤣

Wild imagination sri.😳

Interesting. Loved the dori scene and teary eye kiss scene and also when he seeks for permission before lip kiss. Gentelman vir😎

Aisa agar 50%sach me ho jaye to mazaa aa jaiga. Bechara vir ab kahan bhagega😆

Waiting for next part sri