PurVir SS - Longingness part 3 on pg 12 - Page 8

Haaye Sri..this was too good.💯❤️

PurVir ka conversation was so well written👏

Show mei bhi hona toh aisa hi chahiye par let's see lord saba kya deti hai hume🤷😂

Baaki your story toh definitely is a hit🔥👍

Kudos!🤗Waiting for the next part 😊

Sri🤗

Purvinder Singh??🤣

the dori scene is so intimate , hot with their conversation about haq☺️

When is the next update?

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Part 2

M. Key hua ib shaant kyun ho gayi..ib gussa na aaraha...

P. Aap se hum kya zyada der gussa reh sakte hai kya...

M.acha ...humesha manne daudati hai apne peeche...

P. Aap khud aate hai...humne kab kah aapko aane ko...

M.thik hai to phir mein chalta hu....

Mukhi was about to break the hug but purvi tightens her clutch...

M.arey jaane de manne...tu to na chahiti na mein aau...

P. Arey wo to hum bas mazaak kar rhethe...aapko wo bhi samajh aata...

M. Acha bohut mazaak soojh rahi hai tanne...

Saying while caressing her back he unties her dori...purvi hell shocked and breaks the hug and outs her hand on her back...

P. Yeh kya kar rahe hai aap...bache yahi hai...

M. Tu to aise bol rahi hai jaise bach na ho to kuch karne deti manne...tu to kamre me andar hi na aane derhi thi..

P. Aap na bohut besharam ho gaye hai mukhiji...

M. Teri sangat ka asar hai....

P. Aapse bat karna bekr hi...hum baandh lenge ..

Purvi tries to tie the dori but she cnt ...mukhi says that he will tie but purvi was not allowing...mukhi got pissed and he pulled her agin to him...she banged on his chest ...they were facing each other mukhi slowly her hair on her back to a side so that he can tie the dori ... purvi couldn't control herself and pecked his cheek ....mukhi was shocked by her action...and purvi hid her face into his chest...

Mukhi took a while to get back to his senses...he touched his cheek and smiled and lifted her face from and cupped her face...purvi eyes were closed...she can't face him after her desperate action...vir spoke softly..

M. Aankhen. Khol bawri...

P. Nahi hum nahi kholenge...

M. Khol...tune kuch galat nahi kiya...yo to tera haq hai...

Purvi had tears when he said tht she has rights on him...

P. Aap humse gussa to nahi hai na...

M. Pagal ho gayi hai key...main tujhse kyun gussa hunga...

P. Wo humne...

M. Tune jo bhi kiya wo tera haq hai bawri...mujhe acha laga ki kamse kam tu apna haq to dikha rahi hai mujhpe..

Saying mukhi kisses her teary eyes one by one...then he pecks her forehead....all this while purvi has closed her eyes...he leans forward to claim her lips...but stop in middle and tells..

M. Agar tanne koi parshani hai to mein yahi rok dunga par...

P. Aapka haq hai mukhiji...hum aapka haq aapse nahi cheenenge...

Mukhi feels happy for the right she gave him on her...he claims her lips....purvi slides her one hand into his hair and clutches his hair tightly and one hand on his neck burying her nails into his skin....which gears his emotions to deepen the kiss..he clutches her hair tightly pulling her more closer and is other hand all over her bck....he bites her lower lip to enter and even purvi bites his lip in revenge and finally purvi allows him in and they deepen their kiss....soon they savour each other taste....they broke the kiss due to lack of oxygen and touches eachother forehead and starts breathing heavily....they smile seeing eachother...

There is knock on the door which brings them out of their world...

P. Abhi koun ho sakta hai...

M. Manne kaise pata...dekh...

Purvi is about to open the door...but mukhi stops and asks her to see from the peep hole first nd then open...she does the same and is shocked ....

M. Key hua..saap Soong gaya key....arey bol...

P. Dheere boliye....sakshiji hai darwaze pe....

M. Key...hey bhagwan...lagta hi mujhe kamre me n pakr aayi hai ki kahin tune ti n dekha manne...Ib Key kare...

P. Aap chup jayiye....

M. Key...pagal ho gayi hai key...

P. Abhi koi raasta nahi hai...aapko yaha dekha to musibat ho jayegi....

Wow... Sri di.. This is pure beauty.. 🤩❤

Their nok jhok.. ❤

naughty purvir... Haayee... ☺️

Dori scene was .. 🤩🙈🤩🙈🤩🙈🤩

That dialogue.. Jaise bacche na hote to Tu manne kuch karne deti.. 😝🤣😝🤣😝🤣

When they said to each other that they have right on each other...that scene has all my heart di..❤❤❤❤❤❤ aur jab vir uski permission mangta hai....dil hii le lo aap..❤

 kiss.. 🤩🙈🤩🙈🤩🙈🤩

Are yaar ye saki chain se jeene na degi inhe.. 

Par ab mataji to aa gayi hai.. Ab kya karege purvir.. 🤭🤭🤭🤭

Maja aayega.. 🥳

Plz plz update soon di.. ❤

Originally posted by: RamonaG

Ok just read the 2nd part it's absolutely amazing 💯 loved it to the core ☺️

Thanks Romy...🤗

Srii Yar tabahai☺️

Humko ye EPISODE mangta🤣

Netflix pe dalo ya voot pe but yehi chaiye😭😆

Originally posted by: midniteangel

Sri I love it 😍😍😍😍😍😍 Thanks for d tag 🤗

Naughty mukhi aur mukiyani 🤣 I can totally imagine this scene with these dialogues 🤭😁😁

The part where u mentioned d rights they have on each other n mukhi asking permission has my heart ❤❤❤

Pls continue this!! I want to know what happens when saki comes in 😆

Thanks Mannu...🤗

Bohut hogay rotal mukhi Mukhiyayni ko dekh dekh ke ..thoda mast hona chahiye na...😆

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

This !❤️ Thank you so much Sri..It's pure beauty😳❤️

The dori scene..Hayee..The best way to tie it..☺️ And the kiss..

Saba iss SS ka 50% romance de de..Will declare her the best writer(for one day only)😆🤣

And please do continue yaar..Mujhe padhna hai Viru ki band kaise bajti hai..😭😭🤣🤣

Karungi karungi.... didiji ko abhi roast karna hai na...🤣

Sabato bhai kya pata kya degi bas acha scene de yeh nahi ki yeh log andar gye aur didiji pohuch gyi....

Originally posted by: Jaspreet96

Oo woww sri...its very good.

This is not like a story...but actual thing which can happen and which should happen in serial also...please.

U r amzing writer...do continue ahead....mukhi ko thodi der chupan chupayi khelne do saki ke sath...

The line where he said..bache na hote..toh konsa tu kuch karne deti...naughty mukhi😂

The dori wala part was🥰🥰😍😍

Mukhi ko thodi der aur shrarat karni chahiye thi..dori bandhte time..

Btw did he actually tied dori or he was more mesmerized by kiss and ussi mein kho gya??😅

Thanks jas....🤗

@bold wo jaanne ke liye wait and read..

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Sri

Lol this is what going to happen if they go by logic jo ki ye log use nai karte

This was awesome

After such a long time ☺️ Last apne chana wale scene ke time likha tha 😆😭

Nezu...🤗

Yeah i don't write after vaipri shaadi...😆

Originally posted by: Suppss

Didi apne to dil hi loot liya

desperate and naughty PurVir😆

aur dialogues to lajawab hai di !! I could imagine their expressions 🤣

P - besharam ho gye hai ap

V - teri sangat ka asar hai

Omggg 🤣🤣🤣 I was laughing at this !!

Mukhi ka uske piche piche ghumne, fir durr jana aur Purvi ka use paas khichna

V - bachhe na hote to tu jaise kuch karne hi deti manne 🤣🤣🤣

Baat to sahi kahi usne 🤣

Maza aa gya di !! Aage likho jaldi ❤️🤗

Thank you suppa....🤗