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Posted: 4 years ago

55.

Raghav woke up early the next morning. Hi head was throbbing, he had barely slept, and he’d had a few too many drinks last night. He saw Pallavi sleeping peacefully and remembered Mandaar’s face, also asleep peacefully, at the hospital. He had to figure something out, he couldn’t let Pallavi leave him. But even if he hid the truth of Mandaar from Pallavi, even if Mandaar never woke up from his coma…would he be able to spend his life lying to the woman he loved? If he did, he might never be able to look at himself in the mirror again.

When he went downstairs he saw Farhad waiting for him. Farhad had been working for Raghav for years, so he could tell immediately when something was bothering Anna.

“What’s happened Anna? Is everyone okay? Akka?”

“Everything is…not okay.”

Farhad looked questioningly at Raghav.

Raghav took a deep breath, “come with me, we have to go to the hospital.”

Thirty minutes later, Farhad and Raghav were standing outside of Mandaar’s room, the doctor had said there had been no change since yesterday, but he was hopeful.

Farhad looked at Raghav, he had never seen him this distraught in his life, even when Amma and Keerthi had been avoiding him.

“Anna—“

“Don’t you dare give me some crap about how this is Allah’s will or that everything happens for a reason. This is literal proof that God not only pays attention to me, but has an active interest in bringing me misery.”

“Anna, calm down. Technically, Mandaar was declared dead two years ago, so this does not automatically have any effect on you and Pallavi, right? It’s not true that she’ll go back to the Deshmukhs, she wouldn’t—“

“Of course she will. I don’t know how much she loves me Farhad, but I know that she loves her family more than her own life, including Mandaar. He was her first love, even if their marriage lasted less than a day, the happiness Pallavi got from that house is ten times what I can give her, no matter how many diamonds I smuggle into this country. That Saanki Baba will do whatever it takes to get his daughter back. So even if Pallavi loves me, my family, our life more than Mandaar and the Deshmukhs, her being the honest and self-sacrificing woman she is, will accept.”

Raghav punched the wall, drawing odd looks from passing by nurses. As he slid onto the ground, his back against the wall, his head in his hands, he couldn’t get the image of Pallavi’s smile out his head. The way she laughed, how she took care of Amma and Keerthi, and him. The way her brows furrowed and nose scrunched up when she was angry at him. He silly sense of humor. He smiled and looked up.

“God forgive me, but I’m going to take the path of self-interest. I love her. I can’t let her go.”

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh what is he gonna do now ...shift him elsewhere ? So that no one comes across mandhar ??

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56.

Raghav stood up and grabbed the doctor he saw yesterday by his collar as he approached Mandaar’s room.

“You will keep me updated on his condition daily, if he so much as moves a pinky finger, I want to know about it. You will also tell me if anyone else comes to visit him.”

The doctor was shocked, “But, why? Who is he to you?”

“Just do as you’re told, my secretary will give you my number.” Raghav turned and made his way to the hospital exit.

Farhad watched him leave and prayed with everything he had that this recklessness wouldn’t come back to hurt Raghav.

Back at the Rao house, Pallavi was furious. Not only had Raghav left without saying a word to her, he had ignored her call. She took a deep breath and tried to focus on the saree designs she was working on. So what if Raghav was back to being Gamandi Rao, why should she turn into one of the clingy and cringey wives she had seen represented so many time in Hindi soap operas.

But when Keerthi came in the room a few minutes later to see if Pallavi needed any help, she lost all semblance of cool. “Keerthi, do you know if anything is wrong at Raghav’s store, or with any of his employees…or if he’s in some sort of problem?”

“No, he hasn’t mentioned anything to me or Amma, why?”

“He’s in a weird mood.” Pallavi sighed, “And I don’t know what to do.”

“Pallavi, Raghav is always in a weird mood. If there was an advertisement for mood-swing medication, the pharmaceutical companies would hire Raghav to be their representative. Someone probably parked in his parking spot or insulted his hair or something.”

Pallavi considered this, Keerthi might have been right. But Raghav’s apology from last night was worrying her.

Later that night, well past 1:00 AM, after fifteen calls from Keerthi, Amma, and Pallavi, Raghav finally stumbled in drunk into the house.

Amma was furious, “Raghav, what the hell is wrong with you?”

Raghav shushed her drunkenly and stumbled up the stairs to his room, without another word.

“I’m sorry Amma, I’ll try to figure out what’s wrong with him.” Pallavi marched up the stairs.

Raghav was dancing drunkenly to music on the balcony when he saw Pallavi come in the room, her arms crossed.

“Oh no, seems like I’ve angered my beautiful wife again.” Raghav laughed.

“Not only me, but you’ve pissed off Amma and Keerthi too. What is going on?”

“Nothing, Saree ka Dukaan” Raghav replied, smiling but avoiding her eyes.

Pallavi tensed, he only called her that if he was trying to flirt poorly or if he was actually seriously angry about something to do with her.

“Raghav—“

“Pallavi, I have to ask you something.” His voice was suddenly serious, and he walked up close to his wife, taking her hands in his.

“What, what is going on with you?”

“How much do you love me?”

“Raghav, what kind of question is that? If you think now is the time for your silly attempts at romance you are sorely mistaken—“ Pallavi pulled away from him.

“No, I need to know. Say tomorrow, you could choose between thousands of saree shops with your name on them across the world…or me. Would it at least be a hard choice?” Raghav knew, despite being drunk, that he couldn’t actually bring up Mandaar, that would make her more suspicious.

“No, it wouldn’t be a hard choice.” Pallavi said flatly.

Raghav frowned, damn it, he thought.

“I would choose you in a heartbeat, now come here, you need a shower, you reek of whiskey.”

Pallavi dragged him to the bathroom and pushed him into the shower, turning on the cold water. Raghav gasped, but the pain of the cold water on his face was nothing compared to the joy he felt upon hearing Pallavi’s words, ‘I would choose you in a heartbeat’ she had said. She said it so nonchalantly, as if it really didn’t take her a second thought.

“Now stand here until you’re no longer wasted and then come to bed, and after today if you come home drunk, I will let Amma deal with you.” Pallavi said, frustrated.

Raghav grinned, “I like it when you’re bossy Mrs. Rao,” and then he took her wrist and pulled her into the shower with him.

“Raghav! Are you insane.?!” The cold water almost made Pallavi’s heart stop, but before she could even catch her breath Raghav’s lips were on hers. At first she was angry and shocked, but then she melted into the kiss. When they broke apart, Raghav didn’t look drunk anymore. He turned off the shower, and kissed his wife again, taking off the clip in her hair with one hand while his other hand pulled her close by her waist. In a flash Raghav had sat her on the bathroom counter and was undoing his shirt, his lips kissing down Pallavi’s neck and finding the top button of her kurtha.

“Promise me you’ll never leave me, Pallavi Rao.” Raghav whispered in his wife’s ear, eager for her response.

Pallavi was taken aback at the question and his boldness. But as she felt his fingers stroke the small of her back and his lips on her collarbone, she forgot about anything else. No matter what the problem was, she knew she was safe here, and she knew she would never leave him. She looked into his eyes and smiled, “I promise Raghav Rao.”

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Quite bold and beautiful this attempt but still elegant......

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Don't forget first child while attending " End of Hate" 😄

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Amazing updates as well

Poor guy is getting tortured

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i loved that raghav is opening even if in small measures.

please do continue

bye sumi

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57.

The next couple months were absolute bliss. Pallavi had never been this happy. Even though the days sped by so quickly, every moment with Raghav felt special. At times she felt like he was hiding something from her, but whenever she tried to talk to him about it, he changed the subject. Farhad had reassured her yesterday that it was just stress from work, but Pallavi could tell that something outside of work was wrong.

“Pallavi!” Raghav yelled as he came downstairs.

“Kya hai, why are you screaming, it’s 8AM.” Pallavi was getting breakfast ready before Amma and Keerthi came downstairs

“I need my beautiful wife’s opinion on something, blue tie or red?”

Pallavi looked at the two ties, “Blue. Why are you wearing a tie, did someone at your store tell you to stop dressing like a gangster from the 1980s?” She laughed as she started to tie the tie for him.

Raghav took her wrists in his hands, “Pallavi Rao, if I am such a gangster, then you’re no less than a gangster’s wife. Always lecturing me, jab dekho gussa main rehthi ho.” He smiled, and kissed her cheek.

Pallavi grinned, “haas ji, good to know you’ve figured it out finally, mujhse bachke rehna, samjhe?” She smoothed the tie and said, “done, so now tell me why you’re wearing the tie?”

“We have that anniversary party for one of my friends tonight, you didn’t forget right?”

“Oh right, what time are we leaving from here?”

“8PM, I want to see you dressed and ready at 8PM, you better not call me from your showroom at 8 telling me you’ll be home in twenty minutes.” Raghav warned her.

“And you tell me that I’m always angry,” Pallavi laughed and turned around back to the table.

Before she could Raghav pulled her close by her waist, “Mujhe bathaa hai, Saree ka Dukaan, ki yeh Don ka roop, tumko bahut pasand hai.”

“Kuch bhi, chodo mujhe, Amma aur Keerthi abhi aajayenge nashtha ke liye.” Pallavi moved to remove his arms from around her.

“Kya baath hai Bhai, Bhaabi, so much romance, so early in the morning?” Keerthi came down the stairs and Raghav let go of Pallavi, looking embarrassed as Pallavi laughed, going back to setting the table.

That night as Raghav was driving back home to pick up Pallavi from the party, his mood was finally calm. Over the past two months, the pace he had felt, the safety, he never wanted to lose it. Having Amma and Keerthi with him was amazing enough, but Pallavi sleeping next to him every night, it gave him a new reason to wake up in the morning. The doctor from the hospital had been calling every day, but the update was the same, Mandaar hadn’t woken up.

When he walked into the house he expected to have to yell for Pallavi to come down, because, like every woman, even Saree ka Dukaan took way too long to get ready. But Pallavi was standing in front of him, waiting patiently. She looked goddess-like. In a pale blue sari, with her hair flowing down her back like a waterfall, her face splitting into a smile when she saw Raghav.

“So, do I look like a proper gangster’s wife, or do you want me to change?” Pallavi asked, grinning.

Raghav walked towards her, he took her hand and brought it up to his mouth to kiss it, “you, Pallavi Raghav Rao, look like an absolute goddess.”

Pallavi smiled, then Raghav pulled her close to him, his hand clasping hers, the other finding her waist, “In fact, I’m thinking my friend, I’m not that close to him, we could just skip the party…”

“Very funny, Raghav,” she pushed him away and walked to the door, “we’re going, come on.”

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58.

The first and only mistake Raghav made that night was leaving his phone in the car before going into the party with Pallavi.

At the party, Raghav’s friends gushed over Pallavi, and he watched as she charmed them easily. As the party dragged on, Raghav found Pallavi and pulled her to the dance floor.

Pallavi smiled as Raghav took her hand and led her around the floor. During the whole dance, their eyes never moved away from each other. Raghav wanted this night to last forever, the smile in Pallavi’s eyes, her fragrance, he wanted her with him forever.

In Raghav’s car, his phone blinked and buzzed, there were over 10 missed calls and 20 texts.

When the dance was over Pallavi went back to their table and sat down, “Ab kya hua Saree ka dukaan, you don’t like dancing with me?”

Pallavi decided to tease Raghav, “Nothing like that, coming here, I just realized how stupid I’ve been not to take advantage of having such a rich husband,” she put her arms on his shoulders as he sat down, “I think I I’ve been way too easy on you, I expect way more designer jewelry from now on, or—“

“I will smuggle the whole world’s diamonds into India if I have to to keep you happy.” Raghav said, kissing her cheek.

Pallavi laughed, and then her phone rang.

It was Baba, he sounded in distress, “Pallavi beta, please abhi ki abhi ghar aa jao.”

Before Pallavi could ask what was wrong, Baba had cut the phone.

“Raghav, Baba called, he needs me home for something. Let’s leave, come.”

Pallavi got up and started walking to the exit. As soon as Raghav heard Pallavi’s distress and Baba’s request, he could feel that something was wrong.

They drove quickly to Deshmukh house, in the hurry, Raghav didn’t check his phone. As the car screeched to a halt, Pallavi got out of the car and started to run to the front door, only as Raghav was opening his car door did he see his phone buzzing. After hearing the first voicemail, Raghav’s heart fell into his stomach. The good mood he was in, the happiness he had spent months trying to save up for himself, dissipated.

When Pallavi opened the front door of Deshmukh House, the sight in front of her almost made her faint. Mandaar.

“Pallavi, Pallavi, you’re here.”

In the main hall of the house the whole family was present. Aai’s and Baba’s eyes were teary, and in the middle of everyone, was Mandaar. Pallavi also noticed a man who looked like a doctor, given the bag he was carrying.

“What—What’s going on.” Pallavi felt weak, everything was spinning in front of her, but she steadied herself.

Milind Kaka pulled Sulochana to another room as soon as he realized she was about to open her mouth to say something.

The man, who turned out to be a doctor started speaking before Mandaar or anyone else could, “your husband was in an accident two and a half years ago, well, this is shocking news I know, but Mandaar has been in a coma for the past two and a half years. He just gained consciousness a few hours ago. I told him that it would be better if his family come to the hospital, but he refused.”

Before the doctor could say anything else, Mandaar ran across the room and hugged Pallavi. She didn’t return the hug, it felt like her body had stopped working. “Pallavi, where were you, Aai said you were probably in the shop, but come on, don’t work this late. Anyway, forget all of this. Forget everything, I just wanted to see you. After seeing Baba, hearing about his health, and the rest of the family after—after the accident, what you did for them, I don’t think anyone else in the world could have done that.”

The tears in Mandaar’s eyes were genuine, as soon as he had woken up, his first thought wasn’t his parents, it wasn’t his brother, it was his wife. He was so lost in the happiness of seeing her again that he didn’t even notice that the mangal sutra she was wearing wasn’t the one he had put on her at their wedding.

“Mandaar, you’re…how.” Then Pallavi realized what she was seeing, what she was hearing, wasn’t a dream. It wasn’t even a nightmare. It was reality. And the relief was massive. Mandaar was alive, the pain that Baba and Aai had to go through was over. But as Mandaar hugged her again, Pallavi’s relief turned to dread, and Baba could see the change plain on her face. Pallavi turned around to see Raghav in the doorway. His face showing his pain as clear as day.

Mandaar started to ask who Raghav was, but then Baba interrupted, “Mandaar, beta, this is just the owner of our store, the new owner, he must have just come to drop Pallavi home. Sharda, why don’t you take Pallavi and Mandaar to the kitchen, Mandaar, beta, you need to eat.”

Before Pallavi could say a word, Aai was pulling the two of them to the kitchen table and started serving them food. Sharda knew what was happening was wrong. Her daughter, Pallavi, was happy with Raghav. She had found peace in her new marriage. But upon seeing her son with her again, and now Pallavi sitting next to him, she was blinded by her love.

Baba stopped Raghav from coming in the house, “My son has been in a coma for two years, he is weak, he’s still ill. Whatever decisions have to be made, we can make them tomorrow. You should leave here.”

“Rambo Baap, are you crazy. Pallavi meri biwi hai. I am not leaving without her.”

“Keep your voice down,” Aai left the kitchen and came back in the hall. “Vijay ji is right, we can decide what to do tomorrow when my son’s health is better.”

Raghav was not planning on going anywhere, however. He stood firm in the doorway, refusing to let Baba close the door on him.

In the kitchen, Pallavi wasn’t eating, and eventually Mandaar looked up from his food and realized she hadn’t been listening to him either.

“Pallavi, I know you’re freaked out. This kind of stuff only happens in movies. You know, when I got up and decided to come back home, because I had to see you, to see Aai and Baba and Nikhil, I realized how unbelievable this would be to you all. I even felt ashamed, that because of my stupidity that night, my family spent two years, *two years*, without any information about me or what happened. But listen to me, I will prove to you that I won’t be this stupid again. You watch—“

“I’m married.” Pallavi blurted.

“What? Yes I know we’re married, silly.”

“No, Mandaar. I remarried. A few months ago, and—“

Mandaar stood up, “but, but why? How could you leave my family like that?”

Pallavi tried to figure out what to say, “Mandaar, it was—it’s a long story, I can’t explain.”

Mandaar walked out of the kitchen and rushed to Aai and Baba, “Why did you let her marry someone else? How could you do that?”

Pallavi rushed behind him, “Mandaar, no, it’s not Aai or Baba’s fault, I—“

“You shut up, I don’t want to hear another word from you,” Mandaar’s happiness at returning to his family melted into anger, “you left my family in my time of need. Remember before we got married, I asked you for one thing, to treaty my family as your own. But you couldn’t do that. Well fine, then leave.”

And just as Baba had thrown Pallavi out of the house months before, Mandaar took Pallavi’s hand and started to drag her to the door.

In a split second everything changed, Raghav ran in and grabbed Mandaar by the collar and pinned him against the wall. “Teri himmat kaisi hui, *MERI* biwi ko haath lagane?”

“Raghav, no let him go!” Pallavi tried to pull Raghav off of Mandaar, but Raghav’s anger was not to be controlled tonight.

“Aaj ke baad, Mr. Mandaar Deshmukh, you will not see, nor touch my wife, Pallavi Raghav Rao, ever again. Ardhamaindha.” Raghav let go of his collar and Mandaar almost slid down the wall.

“Raghav Rao, the jeweler? This is who you married Pallavi, This man was a kamina three years ago, and he’s still a kamina today. What, did you get tired of taking care of my middle class family and decide to upgrade?” Mandaar spat out.

Before Raghav could punch him, he saw Pallavi close her eyes, and he jumped to catch her as she fainted. “Pallavi, Pallavi get up, what’s wrong?” Then he saw blood coming out of her nose, and without paying attention to anyone else in the room, he carried her out of the house and to his car. He was driving to the hospital like a madman, Pallavi, still passed out in the seat next to him. No matter how many times he yelled her name, Pallavi didn’t wake up. His knuckles were white on the steering wheel, he would personally destroy each and every member of the Deshmukh family if anything happened to his wife.

After she had been admitted, Raghav paced the hospital room for what felt like hours, and then he realized he should probably call Amma and Keerthi. He told them, and then Farhad, to rush to the hospital.

When the doctor came out of Pallavi’s room, Raghav rushed to her, “What’s wrong with her? Does she need blood, I have the same blood type as her, I can donate. She has a very rare blood type, doctor. Is she awake? Can I see her?”

“Mr. Rao, calm down. Your wife is fine now, her nosebleed stopped, it seemed it was just because of stress. I’ll have more information for you soon, but for now you can sit with her.

Pallavi didn’t wake up that night. Amma, Keerthi, and Farhad were waiting outside all night, coming into the room periodically to see if Raghav needed anything. But Raghav didn’t say anything, he just sat there, holding his wife’s hand, waiting for her to wake up. Willing her to wake up. Praying to any god he hoped would listen to wake his wife up.

The next morning, Pallavi woke up to Raghav sleeping on a chair next to her bed. His hand in hers. She smiled.

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I am having mixed emotions after reading this. I'm happy that Pallavi announced that she is remarried without hesitating, angry at Mandar for not giving her a chance to explain just like his family did and worried seeing Pallavi hurt.


Please update soon.

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