Shivi FF: Distance Makes Us Stronger Part V Pg 16, Update 2/5 - Page 13

Loved the update, Krish is so perspective 😂

Can't wait to see whether Raavi will find Dream Shiva is the true one 😂❤

Awww this was beautiful! Loved how you described the dress ♥️♥️🙈

I loved it as usual. ❤️ You wrote it beautifully.

Krish is the jaan of Pandya parivaar. He's the perfect catalyst for ShiVi. It was aw-dorable when Krish helped Shiv in catching a glimpse of the lehenga.

Shiva was so sweet in this chapter. His tender naive love towards Raavi....❤️

It was a perfect choice to utilize Krish to show Shiv's perspective.

Waiting for the next chapter.

Eager to read the climax of the mystery behind real n dream Shiva.

Loved it, filler chapter or not, it was entertaining as always.

Krish is the cutest, poor fellow, the only secret of Shiva is known to everyone but Raavi🤣

She really is Airheaded.

Flashback was beautiful ♥️

What a beautiful update !! I loved this part so much. Krish's POV is kind of entertaining because its true, he is the one to always notice everything 😆. I loved that you went back a little to explain ShiVi's story

Cute update!!!

Avi, it was sweet!! Loved it. Looking forward to the next update!!

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

I loved it as usual. ❤️ You wrote it beautifully.

Krish is the jaan of Pandya parivaar. He's the perfect catalyst for ShiVi. It was aw-dorable when Krish helped Shiv in catching a glimpse of the lehenga.

Shiva was so sweet in this chapter. His tender naive love towards Raavi....❤️

It was a perfect choice to utilize Krish to show Shiv's perspective.

Waiting for the next chapter.

Eager to read the climax of the mystery behind real n dream Shiva.

Lol, I don't want to put your hopes up to high... I'm not a mystery writer and I think you'll be very underwhelmed by how she finds out 😆. I just didn't want her to find out in the room because I didn't know how to transition from the shirtless scene to Raavi becoming mad...

Originally posted by: Foxii

Loved it, filler chapter or not, it was entertaining as always.

Krish is the cutest, poor fellow, the only secret of Shiva is known to everyone but Raavi🤣

She really is Airheaded.

Flashback was beautiful ♥️

Thank you! The flashback was a last minute addition, and I didn't know how it would be received...

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Lol, I don't want to put your hopes up to high... I'm not a mystery writer and I think you'll be very underwhelmed by how she finds out 😆. I just didn't want her to find out in the room because I didn't know how to transition from the shirtless scene to Raavi becoming mad...

I love the way you write this ShiVi story. It has been amazing so far and I know you can pull the next chapter off. 😊

I'll be waiting. Do update soon. 🤗

Clueless Ravi ❤️

Angst filled Shiva 👍🏼

Matchmaker Krish 👏

Loved it ❤️

I hope you update when you have time to do so!

Till then,

🤗