ShiVi TS: Shiva Ki Raavi (Last Part on Page 12, Updated 02/05/2021) - Page 6

This was amazing🥺♥️Loved it so much♥️😍

Another lovely post Aaliya! 🤗

Bahaut Garmi hai na yahan? Aur Dil mein dhak dhak bhi? Shiva defending Raavi's honor was just 🥰 loved how he said that's their relationship is only their business and no one else's. He gets my heart everytime he shows concerns for Raavi. First with the box and then with garmi. I liked how Raavi tried to honor what she thought was his request (believing that he doesn't like people taking things for free) and Shiva allowed her in his heart as a family by telling kaka to give her something to drink. ❤️ That whole scene had its own charm. And the best part is both are attracted to each other and they know it. Marriage definitely suits this guy. Lovely piece.

Definitely write more, please!

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

AHHHHHH amazing update, please update the third part soon, I'm so impatient 😆

I always love how shiva will fight with raavi endlessly but he will also fight for her - bad boy persona 2.0

Someone needed shut Rishita's mouth, I'm glad Shiva took a stand for Raavi

Also loved the scene of Raavi lusting over Shiva hehe

Can't wait to see what happens in the next part!!

Thank you! Will take a few days unfortunately.. i have written less than half 😆

Originally posted by: ms.ObseSSeD

go Shiva Go!!! the way he told Rishita off at the end!!!👏👏😈

What a beautiful update, I enjoyed it a lot !!! the way they both just started seeing each other differently and driving each other crazy

Thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update👏

Raavi's idea to expose Shiva was hilarious, loved the bickering😆

Raavi's resolve was lost after seeing shirtless Shiva😉

Loved the way Shiva shut Rishita's mouth, he was on fire👏

Shiva took stand for Raavi ❤️

You expressed Ravi's changed feelings for Shiva beautifully❤️

Waiting for next

Thank you so much

Originally posted by: Namita-M

Exciting!! Please update the next part soon like tomorrow 😆

I love it. Very well written!!

Thank you! Unfortunately it will take a couple more days.. have written less than half of the next part 😆

Originally posted by: chinnu_kaku

hillarious shivi🤣..humaey next part milega?

Thank you! Next part in a couple of days for sure

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

What an amazing story 👏

It is funny, sweet yet talks about Raavi's pain, all emotions so beautifully written. LOVED the way Shiva took a stand for Raavi and their bond so much ❤️ I really wish Dev had more of a backbone and was just a little bit more vocal, both here and in the show. His silence has come at a heavy price 😭

Can't wait to read further and see where Shiva and Raavi go from here

Thank you so much! I agree about Dev.. hoping he shows some growth in the show soon

Originally posted by: mirai07

Loved it ❤️ Sweet and amazing ❤️

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Foxii

Superb!! Shiva bajaaoed Rishita Perfectly 👍🏼♥️

Raavi is hilarious with her bet.

Shirtless Shiva had to make her loose control.

Super cute and Hot

Seriously give us the third part soooon :)

Thank you!

Have written barely half of the third part.. will take a couple more days i think 😆