ShiVi TS: Shiva Ki Raavi (Last Part on Page 12, Updated 02/05/2021)

Quite apt. Could imagine this happening.🌹🌹🍫

Nice story😊

It was perfect, Shivi will behave like this only😆

Raavi's vow for revealing Shiva's truth is for wrong reason

Let's see how the actual truth will affect Raavi😉

Waiting for next

Soooo good! ♥️ Loved all the conversations 😍

You should write more, Aaliya!

Grilledcheese! 🤗 Sorry, I never picked up on your name (or what you like to go by) from our discussions in EDT.

So glad we've discovered another writer! 🥳

This was wonderful. Lol Shiva ko Raavi ka Chippali se darna Kya pata chala gaya, usse toh jaise Raavi ko chup karane ka khazana mil gaya😆

“Ey, chipkali ki aulad! Mujhe na bohot neend aa rahi hai. Kal subah jaldi uthke dukan jana hai mujhe. Toh main abhi sone waala hun. Tujhe jo karna hai kar. Khud se baatein kar, ya phir deewar par chipke huye apne rishtedaaron ko dhoondke unke saath gappe laga. Lekin muh se ek aawaz nikli na, toh tujhe kaat khaunga. Tu toh jaanti hi hai, jungli bhalu hu main"🤣😆

"Lagta hai isska ek time pe ek hi cheez kaam karta hai. Muh chalati hai toh dimaag bilkul off. "😆😆

I couldn't stop laughing at these dialogues/thoughts. Lol how do you come up with it? Haha, you guys are up there with PS writers!

I could totally visualize scared Raavi with hand over her mouth to stop it from speaking. 😆I'm glad Raavi's made that resolve. Use sirf yeh nahi pata ki Shiva ka asli roop ayega bahar zaroor, par gharwalon ke samne nahi uske samne. ❤️ Love the title. Looking to see what awaits in the next part!

Such a lovely story.. Plz update soon.. It's quiet endearing

Aaliya, what a fabulous start. Looking forward to the next parts.

Cute one..haha loved it❤❤

This is wonderful:)

Did I miss anything... is this a secret writers club, you guys are phenomenal ♥️♥️♥️

Shiva had fun teasing Raavi.

Excited about the Ending, in what problem will Raavi get herself to be rescued by her Bhootnaath ♥️

I am in love with this TS. I can't wait to read more parts.

Can I just say - your grasp of the Hindi language and ability to turn it into comedy is mind-blowing. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I envy you 😭

But also damn, I wish Shiva had shut her up by kissing her 😉

Can't wait to see what is in the next part!