ShiVi TS: Shiva Ki Raavi (Last Part on Page 12, Updated 02/05/2021) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Hi Aaliya! I like going by ML here.

Nice try.😆I don't want to torture people. 😆 Aur waise bhi itni mehnat se toh yeh forum active hua hai. Agar meine likha na toh sab bhag jayege😆.

Can't wait to read the next part.

Haha I'm sure you're exaggerating 😆 you should let us decide how good your writing is.. going by your comments I think you will be a good writer 🤗

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Haha I'm sure you're exaggerating 😆 you should let us decide how good your writing is.. going by your comments I think you will be a good writer 🤗

Not at all. The only thing I'm good at writing is corporate BS. 😆

Yeh Wala mamala mera nahi hai. Per dekhungi. Agar kabhi himmat hui aur time mila, toh pehla wala tumhe dedicate karungi. Phir tamatar aur chappals kha lena sabke.😂😂

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Not at all. The only thing I'm good at writing is corporate BS. 😆

Yeh Wala mamala mera nahi hai. Per dekhungi. Agar kabhi himmat hui aur time mila, toh pehla wala tumhe dedicate karungi. Phir tamatar aur chappals kha lena sabke.😂😂

Yahaan bade shareef log hain.. koi chappal nahi marega 🤣

But on a serious note, it would be great if you could try and come up something some day ❤️

AHHHHHH amazing update, please update the third part soon, I'm so impatient 😆

I always love how shiva will fight with raavi endlessly but he will also fight for her - bad boy persona 2.0

Someone needed shut Rishita's mouth, I'm glad Shiva took a stand for Raavi

Also loved the scene of Raavi lusting over Shiva hehe

Can't wait to see what happens in the next part!!

go Shiva Go!!! the way he told Rishita off at the end!!!👏👏😈

What a beautiful update, I enjoyed it a lot !!! the way they both just started seeing each other differently and driving each other crazy

Amazing update👏

Raavi's idea to expose Shiva was hilarious, loved the bickering😆

Raavi's resolve was lost after seeing shirtless Shiva😉

Loved the way Shiva shut Rishita's mouth, he was on fire👏

Shiva took stand for Raavi ❤️

You expressed Ravi's changed feelings for Shiva beautifully❤️

Waiting for next

Exciting!! Please update the next part soon like tomorrow 😆

I love it. Very well written!!

hillarious shivi🤣..humaey next part milega?

What an amazing story 👏

It is funny, sweet yet talks about Raavi's pain, all emotions so beautifully written. LOVED the way Shiva took a stand for Raavi and their bond so much ❤️ I really wish Dev had more of a backbone and was just a little bit more vocal, both here and in the show. His silence has come at a heavy price 😭

Can't wait to read further and see where Shiva and Raavi go from here