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Chapter 1

P - Farhad... get ur Anna's files he need for today. The way he is sleeping, he is surely to miss the meeting today.

He was listening everything but kept his eyes closed.

Saree ka dukaan starts lectures from the morning itself. Better to keep eyes closed only.

P - Raghav... get up u have that important meeting. U will be late. Get up u sleepy head.

She got to him and tried to wake him up. He waiting for this very opportune time grabbed her hand and pulled her to bed.

R - So who is in bed now so late in the morning?

P - Raghav Rao leave. Somebody will come. I have some respect. Leave.

R - No way. First tell me who is the sleepy head?

P - Is this even a question? U.

R - Fine. I m not leaving u then.

P - Raghav.. Farhad will be here any minute. Leave me and get up.

R - No issues. We will ask him this question.

P - Raghav....

R - So who is the sleepy head?

P - Me. Happy? Now leave.

R - No and who is the most intelligent smart person in whole world?

P - Now this is getting too much.

R - Answer fast... Farhad will be here any minute.

P - U... U my lord... U r the best. Happy now leave me.

F - Anna should I come a bit later.

P - Farhaddd.... Ragahv leave.

And she shook him and got up from the bed.

Raghav smiling at her.

P - U really enjoy this right?

R - Ofcourse... I am Raghav Rao I can do anything.

She was smiling and then Smile replaced with grim.

P - U love me?

R - What? What kind of question is this?

P - Answer me. Do u love me?

R - Ofcourse I love u my dear wife. Y r u asking this?

P - Then y u let me die Raghav?

R - What?

P - Tell me... y u let me die?

R - No No... not again... can't be... not agai...

And he woke up screaming, soaked in sweat. Words were getting muffed up in his throat. Pain crippling him. The breath was heavy. Life leaving him to promise land of lasting death.

Can’t die. U need to wait for me. I will come.

He unclutched the photo in his hand. The breath seems to become easier. The pain bearable. He found his voice and shouted to that photo almost begging.

R - I didn't do it Pallavi. I didn't do it.

Constable - No.152... stop screaming or again a week isolation chamber.

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Chapter 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156747492

Chapter 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156758789

Chapter 4 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156760151

Chapter 5 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156760446

Chapter 6 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156769106

Chapter 7 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156773416

Epilogue : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156775970

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Other OS / FF :

RaghVi OS : Its Done

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156723459


RaghVi FF : Karma

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/156700295

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow....this was deep ❣️

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Damn it went from ❤️ to 😲

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The way it turned in last few lines...gosssssshhhhhh

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Gosh !! That escalated way too fast 😲

Fluff to angst .....

Wow 😯

Good job ✨

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Woah that gave me chills😲

Keep writing👏

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The quick transition in the os was superb and smooth.

It went from a cute morning between husband and wife to him screaming in the nightmare that too in jail.

Hats off to you.

i literaaly went from Aww😍 to whatt😱

Keep writing

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Woah ! My emotions went from / 😲/ 😒

Amazing OS 👏

Very well written !

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It really gave me chills. Wow. Keep writing more

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Chapter 2

The pain needs to burst out if u have to live and Raghav had to live. He didn't want to but he has to find him. He need to find and show him what hell looks like. Death can't be the way out for him after what he did.

When I find u and I will find u... believe me, u will pay for each second I have to live without her. U have to pay for her each smile I missed. U have to pay for her each touch I owed. U have to pay. U have to payyyy....

And with each promise the wall kept feeling the shiver. Each punch was shaking the very base of the cell. The furiosity flowing as blood from his hands. He can't feel anything. How can he anyways.

Y? Y.. I didn't listened to her... She told me... She told me multiple times.

The punches keep banging the walls. The blood keep dripping but he wants this. This pain, he deserve each part of it and more. And the wind blew, photo touched the ground.

R - Nooooo...

He picked that up. Cleaning it like crazy. Its all he have. Its all he ever can have.

R - U won't even let me in pain now too. Y u have to be to be this good. U hated me right? U hated me still u... Y don't u let me in pain even when... even when my feelings were taken away from me. My happiness was taken away from me. U were taken away from meee.

The tears dropped on the photo. His pain was flowing through her eyes.

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