RaghVi FF - No. 152 - Page 5

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

U r in for a ride.

I'm so ready for this

When i said that I'm so ready for this at noon I didn't think I will be this ready, it was an emotional read but I didn't feel his pain as I expected. I don't know if that's because i read all chapters together or a fast read. You have written it so well, I'm kind of surprised that you let her alive at the end, really thought she was dead.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

When i said that I'm so ready for this at noon I didn't think I will be this ready, it was an emotional read but I didn't feel his pain as I expected. I don't know if that's because i read all chapters together or a fast read. You have written it so well, I'm kind of surprised that you let her alive at the end, really thought she was dead.

Thanx.

Can't say. I dont get emotional with stories so that I can very well agree with if u didnt felt the pain. I too liked this story though.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thanx.

Can't say. I dont get emotional with stories so that I can very well agree with if u didnt felt the pain. I too liked this story though.

I can add alot of things after that "Can't say".

I do get emotional with stories so I most of the times read the last part when I read online.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I can add alot of things after that "Can't say".

I do get emotional with stories so I most of the times read the last part when I read online.

things Like???

What I have read its more like if u relate to or keep urself with characters then it effects u but as a writer and critic I guess to be objective one should avoid it.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

things Like???

What I have read its more like if u relate to or keep urself with characters then it effects u but as a writer and critic I guess to be objective one should avoid it.

Can't say you were ready to read it.

Can't say it was an emotional read.

Can't say you didn't feel his pain

Can't say if it was because you read it together

Can't say if it was because of fast read

Can't say if I have written it so well

Can't say you were surprised

Can't say if she was alive or dead

So what did you mean when you said, can't say?

That's true. I agree. And I do connect myself with characters when I read because, I dont read as myself.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Can't say you were ready to read it.

Can't say it was an emotional read.

Can't say you didn't feel his pain

Can't say if it was because you read it together

Can't say if it was because of fast read

Can't say if I have written it so well

Can't say you were surprised

Can't say if she was alive or dead

So what did you mean when you said, can't say?

That's true. I agree. And I do connect myself with characters when I read because, I dont read as myself.

Can say I m speechless.

" I don't know if that's because i read all chapters together or a fast read." Can't say was for this.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Can say I m speechless.

" I don't know if that's because i read all chapters together or a fast read." Can't say was for this.

K.

I read that from an objective front that's why didn't feel anything.

Here I am!

Started with this; fine, finished with this.

Will let it ruminate overnight and share more. For now, wanted to mention that knowing that it is written by you, I was constantly on guard - looking for details - and anticipating a twist every now and then. I need to find a way to tone it down and let myself by consumed by the writing.

Not sure if your other stories are intense & with a little suspense too - I chose this as I heard of it in the conversations earlier.

I found similarities other than your writing style; for instance, 'fairytale ending' 'words hurt' or something similar...and this had far lesser of those deep sentences like 'Her 'life' was offered for her life'. I promise, this is the last time I compare between the two works; I had to get it off my chest.

More on this, in few hours...

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Here I am!

Started with this; fine, finished with this.

Will let it ruminate overnight and share more. For now, wanted to mention that knowing that it is written by you, I was constantly on guard - looking for details - and anticipating a twist every now and then. I need to find a way to tone it down and let myself by consumed by the writing.

Not sure if your other stories are intense & with a little suspense too - I chose this as I heard of it in the conversations earlier.

I found similarities other than your writing style; for instance, 'fairytale ending' 'words hurt' or something similar...and this had far lesser of those deep sentences like 'Her 'life' was offered for her life'. I promise, this is the last time I compare between the two works; I had to get it off my chest.

More on this, in few hours...

A little flavor of mystique will be in all my writings but it won't be as extensive as in nightmare. I think u won't be able to ignore comparisons as in all writing style will be quite similar. Stories varies but it is easy to mix up those mainly the three which r in same universe nightmare, 152 and karma. Light is AU so it hv distinct story points.

There will be less drastic lines in other FFs maybe because those r bit more fast paced. Can be wrong on reason but thats what I feel. Will wait for ur review nd if u will be reading other two also I would suggest Light and then karma.