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Posted: 4 years ago
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“Here.. Lets start.”

R - Don't u try putting ur cheap Saree with my clothes. Its branded clothes, not like ur third grade ones.

"Well that was unexpected. Can use it though."

P - Don't dare to say my things cheap. Anything I have and do cannot be cheaper than what u did to marry me.

It was quiet.

"Nothing? More I guess."

P - And nothing needs to have to be near u. Neither my clothes nor me. Leave everything else ur own family don't want to be with u.

"U can't. Not now. Not when its about h... Its good. Hold urself."

R - My family don't want to be with me like urs do? Tell me it was ur aai- baba who threw u out of the house by listening to all those cheap lies which I said.

"A bit more. Need to do it."

R - They don't believe u. They don't believe their daughter.

"Final blow. I am Sorry."

R - Oh... I forgot. U r not even their daughter. U r an orphan they married there son to give her a fam..

A tear. Her eyes.

"No u can't. Not now. For him. But y suddenly he changed."

"No. Can't do it. She don't deserve this. Her eyes. That tear."

And he punched the mirror by the side. Blood flowing profusely.

P - Ragh...

"No. U can't. Why u have to? U can't do this to u. U can't do this. But how can I..."

P - Farhad... Farhad...

F - Yes vahini.

She stares.

F - Sorry... Yes Pallavi Ji.

P - Check ur anna. He broken such a beautiful glass. Get something to clean the glass.

F - Anna.. what happened? Ur hand. Let me get the first aid.

He shakes his hand when Farhad tried to put ointment. She saw it. She moves towards broken glass to pick and looked him in the eye.

R - Farhad clean the wound.

She gets up.

P - U have already ruined my day. Don't show me ur face atleast now. Really its getting too suffocating to live here. I should better leave.

She turned and went to her room.

A tear dropped which was trapped for so long on both eyes. She wiped it. He wiped it.

P - (On call) It will be done.

R - (On call) It will be done.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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rula diya😭 dil me kuch toh hone laga hai❤️

beautiful shot👍🏻

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ImHemangi

rula diya😭 dil me kuch toh hone laga hai❤️

beautiful shot👍🏻

Thanks a lot for not asking to continue.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thanks a lot for not asking to continue.

ayyo🤣🤣
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thanks a lot for not asking to continue.

are dear you don’t know my “plz continue “ made so many people happy and you have written a beautiful short novel story there👏👏👏


Thank you🤗


N i m sorry but i can’t stop asking you to continue😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ImHemangi

are dear you don’t know my “plz continue “ made so many people happy and you have written a beautiful short novel story there👏👏👏


Thank you🤗


N i m sorry but i can’t stop asking you to continue😉

I prefer writing open ended short stories so that any one can add things on the basis of what they think. Completing a story with multiple parts is not my thing.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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this was so heartwrenching but good... i am guessing emotions are quite high today in the forum--

this was beautiful--the end especially leaves so many possiblities to think of

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