Purvir FF-. moh moh k DHAAGE✨✨|INDEX updated| - Page 21

Originally posted by: Harinivas

Can I request you to post an index on the first page

Index updated on 1st page😳

Such a lovely story

Look forward to you writing more and more

Thanks so much

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Thank you🤗💖

Will try ki jaldi update Karu 😆

Jaldi jaldi karo... Wait hii nahi ho raha idhar .. 😉😁😁

I think I m last one to comment..Kuch jyada hi late ho gayi m

Chalo ek MS to liya..Manne to laga tha y lull aadmi ek no. K kanjoos h🤣

R y kaisa crowd h rewari k miya biwi romance kar rahe h darshak banke dekh rahe h...Koi hollywood movie chal rahi h kya🤣

Waise mukhiya bhi kaafi besharam ho gaya h..Koi lihaz hi na h bade buzurgon ka...Sabke saamne shuru hogaya😎🤪

R tu bhi wo wali technique lagati na jo saba ne lagayi thi V'day wale din..Ek min m dress sukh jaati🤣

Geele kapdo m le gaya car m..Seat geele nahi hui kya..Mere gharwale to bahar fek dete mujhe..Car gandi karne k liye🤣🤪

Kaha leke ja raha h waise?

Bawari k maike to nahi le ja raha ..First night k liye🤣

R gear change kyu?

Isme bhi koi mystery h chupi hui kya?😆

Originally posted by: sargamif

I think I m last one to comment..Kuch jyada hi late ho gayi m

Koi na Aapka ek comment sabke comments par bhari pad jaata he 🤣

Chalo ek MS to liya..Manne to laga tha y lull aadmi ek no. K kanjoos h🤣

R y kaisa crowd h rewari k miya biwi romance kar rahe h darshak banke dekh rahe h...Koi hollywood movie chal rahi h kya🤣

Or nhi to kya Apne mukhi mukhiyain Hollywood k hero heroin se Kam he k 🤣

Waise mukhiya bhi kaafi besharam ho gaya h..Koi lihaz hi na h bade buzurgon ka...Sabke saamne shuru hogaya😎🤪

Tabhi to usne gaana bajaya saari night besharmi ki height 🤣🤣

R tu bhi wo wali technique lagati na jo saba ne lagayi thi V'day wale din..Ek min m dress sukh jaati🤣

Kya baat Kar rhe ho Di me itti technologically advanced nhi Hu 🤪

Geele kapdo m le gaya car m..Seat geele nahi hui kya..Mere gharwale to bahar fek dete mujhe..Car gandi karne k liye🤣🤪

Ye revari gao he or Vir uska mukhiya yha Kuch bhi ho Sakta he 🤪

Kaha leke ja raha h waise?

Abe next part bhi abhi bata du kya

Bawari k maike to nahi le ja raha ..First night k liye🤣

Haaww aapko pata chal gya ab to jagah badalni padegi 😲

R gear change kyu?

Isme bhi koi mystery h chupi hui kya?😆

Iss mystery ko jaane k liye GM activate Karna padega

Varna jaisa suppa kehti he maan lo 🤣

Heya forum vasiyo😆

Me bhul gyi thi last part bacha he so updated it finally

It's a little long 😳 so happy reading ❤️

Part 9~Human touch ,

We need that touch from our loved ones as much we need air to breath.~

The wait was worth it!...they finally reached, there was fog everywhere then Pur saw a vast lake whose edge was marked by grasslands , the moon was at its best today and stars in the sky,so close that she wanted to grab them with her baby hands , shinning even brighter than her diamond ring Which Vir had gifted her once. The surface of the lake formed a silvery mirror reflecting the glittery blanket along with a soft cool breeze making her hair swift by her side. Pur is left awestruck by the serenity of the place..the translucent white curtains hanging from the trees , born fire in the front n a bed of roses leading them inside a magnificent tent, vir's arrangements felt like jewels onto the enchanting natural beauty...

Vir: pichli Baar tanne yha laaya tha to meri or Sakshi ki yaado se milvaya tha...par iss Baar tanne khud se milvane laaya Hu...tere Saath nayi yaade banane k liye laaya Hu...

Pur didn't knew how to handle this side of him n she blurted: yeh saari arrangements Aapne kiye he ?

Vir: Haan to or kon karega tera tau!..bas idea yogi Ka tha... He too blurted

Pur sensed his annoyance n decided to tease him "hmmm...Hume to pehle hi lag rha tha daal me Kuch kaala he ! Itna romantic idea aapko aa jaaye...aisa nhi ho Sakta!...aap Kaha... Umar Jo ho gyi he aapki!" grins after mocking him "humare tauji bhi na bilkul romantic nhi the !"

Vir grabs her tightly from waist "Umar hogi tere tau ki vo bhuddha romantic na tha to usme MERI k Galti!" He snapped n removes hair strands from her face "Tu manne or mere pyar ko jaane hi kitta he ...aaj tujhe pata chalega tera JAWAAN pati kitta romantic he or kya kya Kar Sakta he" his husky voice sent chills down her spine melting her down into a puddle...Vir said innocently "k hua tanne?" Giving a mischievous smirk , then he cupped her face n planted a kiss on both her cheeks, pur's eyes were closed in anticipation as she felt relaxed again n looked at Vir with all the love she had as he moved forward to taste her rosy lips...

Pur: achoo !achoo! (Pur jerked a whole while Vir cringed at first)

Vir(concerned): baawri, Tu baawri hi rahegi! Ib jaldi se tent me jaa tere kapde rakhe hue he...

Pur goes inside the tent but is amused "yeh to vhi dress he Jo revati or Sudha ne milke Hume gift Kari thi!....oh to yeh bhi Aapne Kiya he !" Her happiness elated Vir as he gave an acknowledging smile n Pur went inside...

===========After some time============

Vir is sitting on the car's bonnet laying his head backwards on the glass when he sees Pur coming out....

{Kya Mohabbat Hai

Kya Nazaara Hai

Kal Talak Ye

Dil Tha Mera

Ab Tumhara Hai}

Vir had never seen such a mesmerising figure in front of him, in a sea green saree she looked angelic with her face flushed n glowing ....

{Kya Tamanna Hai

Kya Ishara Hai

Hamne To Pal Pal Tadap Ke

Pal Guzaara Hai}

He drank in her beauty , without blinking even for a sec. as she trailed her path through the bed of roses...

{Dekho Dekho, Dekho Dekho

Ab Karo Na Mujhpe Yu Sitam

Jaan Meri

Jaa Rahi Sanam

Jaan Meri

Jaa Rahi Sanam}

Pur comes in front of him turning crimson due to his intense stare, both gulp as thier hearts were pounding way faster than they could imagine, Pur lowers her gaze which made Vir grin as he enjoyed the extent of his effect on her...

{ Music....

Kya Ladakpan Hai

Kya Jawaani Hai

Ab Tumhare Naam

Saari Zindagani Hai}

Pur too sits on his side n both Lie in each other's arms enjoying the stunning views, pur's infectious smile gave him immense pleasure as he stared his moon ....

{Kya Haqeeqat Hai

Kya Kahaani Hai

Saamne Mere,

Mere Sapno Ki Rani Hai}

Pur looks at Vir with immense gratitude n entwines Thier hands n touches thier foreheads....

{Ab Saha Na Jaaye Mujhse

Doori Ka Ye Gham

Jaan Meri Jaa Rahi Sanam

Jaan Meri Jaa Rahi Sanam}

Pur reads the need n desire in his eyes n shyly breaks free from his embrace but Vir holds her hand n gets off from the car....

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

(Laal ishq plays in BG)

~~~eyelock~~~

{Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq

Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq X2

Ishq-ishq, Ishq-ishq.}

{Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa X 2

Raha na main phir apne jaisa

Ho raha na main phir apne jaisa}

Vir entwines Thier hands n kisses her middle finger...Pur felt shots of electricity zap through her spine making her weak in her knees n her breath got stuck in her lungs only...then he glides his hands up to reach her shoulders n undoes her bun...

{Mera naam ishq, Tera naam ishq

Mera naam ishq , Tera naam ishq

Mera naam ishq, Tera naam ishq

Mera naam, Tera naam

Mera naam ISHQ!

Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq

Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq X 2}

Pur tries to run away but Vir catches her n kisses on her eyelids , while pur's eyes were closed in anticipation of his love, then Vir snuggles in her slender neck kissing the skin around her ms...Pur too couldn't control her needs now n stepped on his toes n further pushes him inside.... moaning in pleasure

~~~~music~~~~

{Rone De Aaj Hamko Do Aankhen Sujaane De

Baahon Mein Lene De Aur Khud Ko Bheeg Jaane De

Hain Jo Seene Mein Qaid Dariya Woh Choot Jaayega

Hain Itna Dard Ke Tera Daaman Bheeg Jaayega}

Vir was bout to bite her on her collarbone but Pur pushed him n turned her back towards him, Vir was left confused n on the contrary Pur was shocked by her behaviour, her whole body was shivering n numb at the same time, she had waited so long but still her mind was blank n heart in her mouth

Vir(concerned): baawri Tu theek he na ? N turns her to face him but found her eyes closed "aankhe khol baawri" his soft loving yet deep voice sent waves of weird sensations throughout her body

"nhi ! " Said Pur shivering... "Tu manne bata to k baat he" Vir got more concerned as he thought maybe she isn't ready...

Pur too didn't knew what was happening but decided to look at him due to his rising concern ,

She peeped in vir's eyes only to find love n concern but Vir was shocked to see naked desire reflecting in hers, she was getting turned on n all this was new to her ,so he hugged her as she buried her face in his chest

Vir: pata he baawri Mene Kabhi na socha tha k me phir se jee paunga , hass paunga par tune yo Kar dikhaya... Mene tujhse Kabhi na Kaha Tu mere liye kya he , humesha tujhe confused rakha kyoki manne khud se darr lagne laga tha , phir se pyar Karne se darne laga tha me k Kahi phir Mera pyar mujhse chhin na jaaye isiliye humesha yo diwar banake Rakhi...par ib me Jaan gya hu tera Mera Saath to Dil or Dhadkan Ka he....

{Tere Dil Mein Meri Saanson Ko Panaah Mil Jaaye

Tere Ishq Mein Meri Jaan Fanaa Ho Jaaye}

Pur is overwhelmed n purvir wipe off each other's tears, n taking vir's support Pur plants a kiss on his cheeks , gulps his tears, forehead n finally the bridge of his nose... Giving him the pleasure he deserves

{Ye kaali raat jakad lun

Ye thanda chand pakad lun X 2

Din-raat ke bairi bhed ka

Rukh mod ke main rakh dun}

Now both are ready for Thier unison, Vir takes her hand n plants kisses from her palm reaching out her shoulders n parts her hair to the side n kisses on her nape

{Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa

Raha na main phir apne jaisa

Ho Raha na main phir apne jaisa}

Vir traces his hands onto her Dori , undoes it n bites her back

{Mera naam ishq

Tera naam ishq X3

Mera naam, Tera naam

Mera naam ISHQ!}

Vir caresses her face gives a peck on her forehead, Pur was amazed by his gentle behaviour but at the same time his transformed blazing lava, she pulls him by his hair n grabs his lips, soon it converts into mouth kiss as they started tasting each other...

{Ye laal ishq

Ye malaal ishq

Ye aib ishq

Ye bair ishq x3}

Vir finally picks her up in his arms n carried her to their bed without breaking the kiss...

~~~Adhoori Saans Thi Dhadkan Adhoori Thi Adhooren Hum

Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hain Falak Pe Aur Ab Pooren Hain Ham~~~

https://youtu.be/DAM3O-wjvTs

https://youtu.be/iLa9hHLsH8o

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Heya forum vasiyo😆

Me bhul gyi thi last part bacha he so updated it finally

It's a little long 😳 so happy reading ❤️

Part 9~Human touch ,

We need that touch from our loved ones as much we need air to breath.~

The wait was worth it!...they finally reached, there was fog everywhere then Pur saw a vast lake whose edge was marked by grasslands , the moon was at its best today and stars in the sky,so close that she wanted to grab them with her baby hands , shinning even brighter than her diamond ring Which Vir had gifted her once. The surface of the lake formed a silvery mirror reflecting the glittery blanket along with a soft cool breeze making her hair swift by her side. Pur is left awestruck by the serenity of the place..the translucent white curtains hanging from the trees , born fire in the front n a bed of roses leading them inside a magnificent tent, vir's arrangements felt like jewels onto the enchanting natural beauty...

Vir: pichli Baar tanne yha laaya tha to meri or Sakshi ki yaado se milvaya tha...par iss Baar tanne khud se milvane laaya Hu...tere Saath nayi yaade banane k liye laaya Hu...

Pur didn't knew how to handle this side of him n she blurted: yeh saari arrangements Aapne kiye he ?

Vir: Haan to or kon karega tera tau!..bas idea yogi Ka tha... He too blurted

Pur sensed his annoyance n decided to tease him "hmmm...Hume to pehle hi lag rha tha daal me Kuch kaala he ! Itna romantic idea aapko aa jaaye...aisa nhi ho Sakta!...aap Kaha... Umar Jo ho gyi he aapki!" grins after mocking him "humare tauji bhi na bilkul romantic nhi the !"

Vir grabs her tightly from waist "Umar hogi tere tau ki vo bhuddha romantic na tha to usme MERI k Galti!" He snapped n removes hair strands from her face "Tu manne or mere pyar ko jaane hi kitta he ...aaj tujhe pata chalega tera JAWAAN pati kitta romantic he or kya kya Kar Sakta he" his husky voice sent chills down her spine melting her down into a puddle...Vir said innocently "k hua tanne?" Giving a mischievous smirk , then he cupped her face n planted a kiss on both her cheeks, pur's eyes were closed in anticipation as she felt relaxed again n looked at Vir with all the love she had as he moved forward to taste her rosy lips...

Pur: achoo !achoo! (Pur jerked a whole while Vir cringed at first)

Vir(concerned): baawri, Tu baawri hi rahegi! Ib jaldi se tent me jaa tere kapde rakhe hue he...

Pur goes inside the tent but is amused "yeh to vhi dress he Jo revati or Sudha ne milke Hume gift Kari thi!....oh to yeh bhi Aapne Kiya he !" Her happiness elated Vir as he gave an acknowledging smile n Pur went inside...

===========After some time============

Vir is sitting on the car's bonnet laying his head backwards on the glass when he sees Pur coming out....

{Kya Mohabbat Hai

Kya Nazaara Hai

Kal Talak Ye

Dil Tha Mera

Ab Tumhara Hai}

Vir had never seen such a mesmerising figure in front of him, in a sea green saree she looked angelic with her face flushed n glowing ....

{Kya Tamanna Hai

Kya Ishara Hai

Hamne To Pal Pal Tadap Ke

Pal Guzaara Hai}

He drank in her beauty , without blinking even for a sec. as she trailed her path through the bed of roses...

{Dekho Dekho, Dekho Dekho

Ab Karo Na Mujhpe Yu Sitam

Jaan Meri

Jaa Rahi Sanam

Jaan Meri

Jaa Rahi Sanam}

Pur comes in front of him turning crimson due to his intense stare, both gulp as thier hearts were pounding way faster than they could imagine, Pur lowers her gaze which made Vir grin as he enjoyed the extent of his effect on her...

{ Music....

Kya Ladakpan Hai

Kya Jawaani Hai

Ab Tumhare Naam

Saari Zindagani Hai}

Pur too sits on his side n both Lie in each other's arms enjoying the stunning views, pur's infectious smile gave him immense pleasure as he stared his moon ....

{Kya Haqeeqat Hai

Kya Kahaani Hai

Saamne Mere,

Mere Sapno Ki Rani Hai}

Pur looks at Vir with immense gratitude n entwines Thier hands n touches thier foreheads....

{Ab Saha Na Jaaye Mujhse

Doori Ka Ye Gham

Jaan Meri Jaa Rahi Sanam

Jaan Meri Jaa Rahi Sanam}

Pur reads the need n desire in his eyes n shyly breaks free from his embrace but Vir holds her hand n gets off from the car....

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

(Laal ishq plays in BG)

~~~eyelock~~~

{Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq

Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq X2

Ishq-ishq, Ishq-ishq.}

{Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa X 2

Raha na main phir apne jaisa

Ho raha na main phir apne jaisa}

Vir entwines Thier hands n kisses her middle finger...Pur felt shots of electricity zap through her spine making her weak in her knees n her breath got stuck in her lungs only...then he glides his hands up to reach her shoulders n undoes her bun...

{Mera naam ishq, Tera naam ishq

Mera naam ishq , Tera naam ishq

Mera naam ishq, Tera naam ishq

Mera naam, Tera naam

Mera naam ISHQ!

Ye laal ishq, ye malaal ishq

Ye aib ishq, ye bair ishq X 2}

Pur tries to run away but Vir catches her n kisses on her eyelids , while pur's eyes were closed in anticipation of his love, then Vir snuggles in her slender neck kissing the skin around her ms...Pur too couldn't control her needs now n stepped on his toes n further pushes him inside.... moaning in pleasure

~~~~music~~~~

{Rone De Aaj Hamko Do Aankhen Sujaane De

Baahon Mein Lene De Aur Khud Ko Bheeg Jaane De

Hain Jo Seene Mein Qaid Dariya Woh Choot Jaayega

Hain Itna Dard Ke Tera Daaman Bheeg Jaayega}

Vir was bout to bite her on her collarbone but Pur pushed him n turned her back towards him, Vir was left confused n on the contrary Pur was shocked by her behaviour, her whole body was shivering n numb at the same time, she had waited so long but still her mind was blank n heart in her mouth

Vir(concerned): baawri Tu theek he na ? N turns her to face him but found her eyes closed "aankhe khol baawri" his soft loving yet deep voice sent waves of weird sensations throughout her body

"nhi ! " Said Pur shivering... "Tu manne bata to k baat he" Vir got more concerned as he thought maybe she isn't ready...

Pur too didn't knew what was happening but decided to look at him due to his rising concern ,

She peeped in vir's eyes only to find love n concern but Vir was shocked to see naked desire reflecting in hers, she was getting turned on n all this was new to her ,so he hugged her as she buried her face in his chest

Vir: pata he baawri Mene Kabhi na socha tha k me phir se jee paunga , hass paunga par tune yo Kar dikhaya... Mene tujhse Kabhi na Kaha Tu mere liye kya he , humesha tujhe confused rakha kyoki manne khud se darr lagne laga tha , phir se pyar Karne se darne laga tha me k Kahi phir Mera pyar mujhse chhin na jaaye isiliye humesha yo diwar banake Rakhi...par ib me Jaan gya hu tera Mera Saath to Dil or Dhadkan Ka he....

{Tere Dil Mein Meri Saanson Ko Panaah Mil Jaaye

Tere Ishq Mein Meri Jaan Fanaa Ho Jaaye}

Pur is overwhelmed n purvir wipe off each other's tears, n taking vir's support Pur plants a kiss on his cheeks , gulps his tears, forehead n finally the bridge of his nose... Giving him the pleasure he deserves

{Ye kaali raat jakad lun

Ye thanda chand pakad lun X 2

Din-raat ke bairi bhed ka

Rukh mod ke main rakh dun}

Now both are ready for Thier unison, Vir takes her hand n plants kisses from her palm reaching out her shoulders n parts her hair to the side n kisses on her nape

{Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa

Raha na main phir apne jaisa

Ho Raha na main phir apne jaisa}

Vir traces his hands onto her Dori , undoes it n bites her back

{Mera naam ishq

Tera naam ishq X3

Mera naam, Tera naam

Mera naam ISHQ!}

Pur cups his face n Vir gives a peck on her forehead, Pur pulls him by his hair n grabs his lips, soon it converts into mouth kiss as they started tasting each other...

{Ye laal ishq

Ye malaal ishq

Ye aib ishq

Ye bair ishq x3}

Vir finally picks her up in his arms n carried her to their bed without breaking the kiss...

~~~Adhoori Saans Thi Dhadkan Adhoori Thi Adhooren Hum

Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hain Falak Pe Aur Ab Pooren Hain Ham~~~

https://youtu.be/DAM3O-wjvTs

https://youtu.be/iLa9hHLsH8o

Woow lovely❤❤❤ piya you really write tooo good😍😍

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

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The songs are adding to the hotness created by your plot 😍😍🥵🥵

This part was worth waiting !! Too good yaar

Loved it ❤️

Ab holi FF ki baari 😝😝

Piyuu...Dear this an amazing piece of writing 👏

Hot! Hot!

Im blushing profusively! My imagination is going wild! Worth the wait Piyu 🤗

You always bring out the passionate side of mukhiji which is a bliss to read. He just knows how to convince her witt with his softy touches.

Mukhi always fastens my heartbeat & you made such a hot story that I'm feeling breathless.

So finally PurVir poore ho gaye ☺️

Im sure their tent session would've been more sensous to imagine 🤣

Toh yeh idea yogi ka tha... Cracked me up...lol 😂😂😂😂

After their wedding Mukhi will not leave any corner of his home to romance his Mukhiyani ☺️

Originally posted by: Sampada001

Woow lovely❤❤❤ piya you really write tooo good😍😍

Thanks a load to all 🤗

Mene 1st page pe index update Kara he aap dekhlo usme se coz beech me kya bakwaass he aapko bhi pata he 🤣