24/03/21 A Jeeva Shiva SS part16 p. 33 epilogue p.34 - Page 23

Originally posted by: shiva02

wow another twist again. 

let samrat be ok soon and want to see sam-sai bond

Yes, I'm hoping for their bond too❤️❤️❤️

I read chapter 11,12, 13 in a go......very very interesting......

You are an amazing writer...... you are expert in writing mysteries....👏 

It's good that Virat and Pakhi came out of guilt...

And kaku is scared of vineet...😆

What!😳 .....Virat and Pakhi are not the reason  for Samrat's condition......then what's the reason??? 

Seriously......you have left in a cliffhanger....

Please give next update soon.....eagerly waiting....

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

I read chapter 11,12, 13 in a go......very very interesting......

You are an amazing writer...... you are expert in writing mysteries....👏 

It's good that Virat and Pakhi came out of guilt...

And kaku is scared of vineet...😆

What!😳 .....Virat and Pakhi are not the reason  for Samrat's condition......then what's the reason??? 

Seriously......you have left in a cliffhanger....

Please give next update soon.....eagerly waiting....

Yeah. Virat and Patralekha had to come out of that guilt. Negative emotions kept inside do more damage than good.

I love Kaku for being scared😆

Yeah. They are not the reason. I wonder what's the reason🤔

❤️❤️❤️

Omg.... Samrat me vineet KO toh dhoka Nahi Diya na??? 😂😂😂

Loved the suspense that you have build around samrat and his health...

Nice that virat and Pakhi are being lil sensible around the whole situation now...

Continue soon!!!

Happy writing!!!

Loved it...I hope all is well now... dr vineet seems to have found out the real reason for Samrat’s mental health...I guess it’s not related to Virat or Pakhi...thank you so much for update... please update the next part soon...can’t wait for it...👍🏻

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Omg.... Samrat me vineet KO toh dhoka Nahi Diya na??? 😂😂😂

Loved the suspense that you have build around samrat and his health...

Nice that virat and Pakhi are being lil sensible around the whole situation now...

Continue soon!!!

Happy writing!!!

Thankyou🤗

They should be. Otherwise I'll kill them off in my story😡😆

Thankyou once again🤗❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Mahibeejay

Loved it...I hope all is well now... dr vineet seems to have found out the real reason for Samrat’s mental health...I guess it’s not related to Virat or Pakhi...thank you so much for update... please update the next part soon...can’t wait for it...👍🏻

I hope we get to the real reason pretty soon🤔

Thankyou for reading❤️❤️

Lovely update!!!

Even though I am still hoping for vineeet An samrat 🤣🤣

It is soo painful to have a childhood with so much of not positive thoughts and joint family and feeling ignored and of no consequence..... I fell for samrat..... 

The family were there yet never there.... That kind of absence is quite painful.... 

Samrat will get better now... An the family should also behave decently now.... Have better communication...

Continue soon!!!

Happy writing!!!

omg!!!!these chavans have f****ed up lives of their children. two kids who were supposed to love each other, they have turned them competitors. waiting for more.❤️❤️❤️