24/03/21 A Jeeva Shiva SS part16 p. 33 epilogue p.34 - Page 22

Arey yaar this is wrong dude...U r increasing suspense...What happened between Samrat and Vineet???...Anyways it was a wonderful update!!!(but as always with some suspence👍🏼)...Besides this Bhavani's reactions were nice😆

I know u must be busy but please try to update soon💜... It is becoming more interesting than ghum😳

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Ofcourse I am praising you... I like so many writers and os ff in this forum... But as I always say your are so different an out of the box... No one can beat you on that😊

Originally posted by: sairat07

Arey yaar this is wrong dude...U r increasing suspense...What happened between Samrat and Vineet???...Anyways it was a wonderful update!!!(but as always with some suspence👍🏼)...Besides this Bhavani's reactions were nice😆

I know u must be busy but please try to update soon💜... It is becoming more interesting than ghum😳

Thankyou so much🤗

Let's see what happened🤔

Yeah, Bhavani had found a new favorite🤣

Better than Ghum😳😳😳

Oh my God. I'm gonna blush❤️❤️

If CVs don't kill me before that🤔

Absolutely treat to read loved it so very much ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: maahi11

Absolutely treat to read loved it so very much ❤️❤️

Yes you are going to give us heart attack🤣 how smartly u end the chapter now we have to wait for next chapter till then hamare dimag ki oh my mata hogi🤣

You are awesome yaar in increasing suspense😉

Kaku ko Sai ke sath ek aur special mila unki bolti band karane ke liye🤣

Family comedy bhi mila humko😆

Jokes apart beautifully written i love it❤❤❤

Originally posted by: Tasu06

Yes you are going to give us heart attack🤣 how smartly u end the chapter now we have to wait for next chapter till then hamare dimag ki oh my mata hogi🤣

You are awesome yaar in increasing suspense😉

Kaku ko Sai ke sath ek aur special mila unki bolti band karane ke liye🤣

Family comedy bhi mila humko😆

Jokes apart beautifully written i love it❤❤❤

Yeah. I am😉

Kaku ki bolti band karne wale log hamesha mujhe achchhe lagte hain.🤣

Tried to make it little wholesome.❤️

Thankyou so much dear❤️❤️❤️❤️

wow another twist again.

let samrat be ok soon and want to see sam-sai bond

Originally posted by: shiva02

wow another twist again.

let samrat be ok soon and want to see sam-sai bond

Yes, I'm hoping for their bond too❤️❤️❤️

I read chapter 11,12, 13 in a go......very very interesting......

You are an amazing writer...... you are expert in writing mysteries....👏

It's good that Virat and Pakhi came out of guilt...

And kaku is scared of vineet...😆

What!😳 .....Virat and Pakhi are not the reason for Samrat's condition......then what's the reason???

Seriously......you have left in a cliffhanger....

Please give next update soon.....eagerly waiting....