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Posted: 4 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: AnokhiKaShaurya

Loved this ❤️

For a moment I thought they would do the kaand tonight. But Shaurya had to be a gentleman

Thank you 😳

Yes kaand karne ke sab chances the but Shaurya is a gem 😳❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: TR_19

Hottest OS I ever read man uffff anokhi kyaa shivers karega I am shivering while reading this.

Great writing 👍🏼 wow loved it .

It OS has to be the baap of all shakhi OS 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

😆 Thanks a lot 🤗❤️

I am glad you guys loved it so much❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Krazzy_Tintin11

This was really beautiful and passionate loved it so much.

Thanks a lot 🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Thanks dear 😳🤗


You're welcome🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#75

Rimiiii🤗🤗

Coming straight from Wattpad😳

I missed you a lot and missed writing comments on your"stories ☺️"even more


Yesterday,my board practicals got over and sutro se khabar mili that due to the massive increment in Covid and the upcoming elections,our offline pre boards have been cancelled!

To sum it up, here I am , searching hysterically for all the works by my dearest friends that outshined in my absence😆.Oh god,tough job.🤣


Kya hi likhoon mein , mere paas alfaaz nahi hain! Tum sirf yeh jaanlo that my body was burning and my desires were accentuating while I was reading this☺️!

Those earth shattering descriptions literally raised storms in my heart.Each and every moment has been woven so intricately , as if the reader himself is living in it!

Aur Rimi ki toh khasiyat hi hain, to build up a sensuous and seductive ambience driving all of us crazy as hell☺️☺️!

Writing erotic novels has become your expertise! But make sure to courier fire brigades to extinguish the fire in our hearts😆!

The sexual tension and surge of desires growing in their bodies,it was so good and such a pleasure to read!

And that line

" Her lips had a tint of maroon matte colour which he wanted to ruin so badly" ☺️

stands out in this delectable story! You successfully raised a havoc in my mind , so sexy!


And of course , how can I forget

" I wanted to take these off ever since I tied them" ☺️

Uffff! My BP!

Hayeeeeee,Rimiii, itna torture karogi toh kaise chalega!!! I'll penalize you for triggering me so profoundly!

Lastly, the part when they both decided to stop and take things slow and not act as horny hormonal Teenagers blew my mind! It's really difficult to hold back after such a fierce and fiery make out session but then, it makes us fall in love with the characters more , it proves how truthfully and honestly they love each other!


Everything , starting from the head to toes left me blushing and yearning for more!☺️ You can never disappoint me Rimi.

All your works have raised the bar of fanfictions and set a very high benchmark that's way too difficult to reach upto👏!


Thank you for this beautiful one ...

Aur haan, please kuch bhi likho toh mujhe tag / pm kar dena😆! Otherwise it gets lost and I find a tough time locatingit!!


Tataaaaa RIMI 🤗, Akshu naraz hain , usey mananke aati hoon❤️!

Edited by Ka_ta - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Rimiiii🤗🤗

Koyal 🤗 So nice to see your comment after long


Coming straight from Wattpad😳

I missed you a lot and missed writing comments on your"stories ☺️"even more


Kya matlab hai iska - ☺️😉🤣


Yesterday,my board practicals got over and sutro se khabar mili that due to the massive increment in Covid and the upcoming elections,our offline pre boards have been cancelled!

To sum it up, here I am , searching hysterically for all the works by my dearest friends that outshined in my absence😆.Oh god,tough job.🤣


Yes you have missed on a lot of things... better to catch up! 🤪


Kya hi likhoon mein , mere paas alfaaz nahi hain! Tum sirf yeh jaanlo that my body was burning and my desires were accentuating while I was reading this☺️!


Achha ☺️ Don't make me shy now 🤣


Those earth shattering descriptions literally raised storms in my heart.Each and every moment has been woven so intricately , as if the reader himself is living in it!


Yahi toh mera motive hota hai na Koyal ☺️


Aur Rimi ki toh khasiyat hi hain, to build up a sensuous and seductive ambience driving all of us crazy as hell☺️☺️!


Ohh really kya ☺️ * hides in sharam*


Writing erotic novels has become your expertise! But make sure to courier fire brigades to extinguish the fire in our hearts😆!


Erotic novels 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Theek hai next time se fire extinguisher laga ke post karungi aise OS 🤪


The sexual tension and surge of desires growing in their bodies,it was so good and such a pleasure to read!

And that line

" Her lips had a tint of maroon matte colour which he wanted to ruin so badly" ☺️

stands out in this delectable story! You successfully raised a havoc in my mind , so sexy!


When I wrote that line mujhe laga oh God.. mai kya likh rahi hu ... Koyal ka kya hoga 🤣🤣 It's sexy haina ☺️


And of course , how can I forget

" I wanted to take these off ever since I tied them" ☺️

Uffff! My BP!


Hehehe... ☺️

Hayeeeeee,Rimiii, itna torture karogi toh kaise chalega!!! I'll penalize you for triggering me so profoundly!


I deserve the penalty 😎🤣


Lastly, the part when they both decided to stop and take things slow and not act as horny hormonal Teenagers blew my mind! It's really difficult to hold back after such a fierce and fiery make out session but then, it makes us fall in love with the characters more , it proves how truthfully and honestly they love each other!


Yes... that's exactly what I expect the characters to do Romance is best when there is a sense of maturity to it ❤️


Everything , starting from the head to toes left me blushing and yearning for more!☺️ You can never disappoint me Rimi.

All your works have raised the bar of fanfictions and set a very high benchmark that's way too difficult to reach upto👏!


Omgeeee Itni tareef! I re-read your comments whenever I need motivation to write


Thank you for this beautiful one ...

Aur haan, please kuch bhi likho toh mujhe tag / pm kar dena😆! Otherwise it gets lost and I find a tough time locatingit!!


Tataaaaa RIMI 🤗, Akshu naraz hain , usey mananke aati hoon❤️!


Haan Haan I'll PM! Jaao Akshu ko manao! 😆❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#77

OMG yeh kya likh diya tumne, you re read my comments, okay I'm not in this earth right now☺️.

Imma on cloud nine ☺️

Welcome meri writer queen 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#78

Actually I'm also waiting to know weather shaurya will untie her Dori or not 🙈.......

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Posted: 4 years ago
#79

Absolutely brilliant piece! It literally has visionary effect. I am generally a silent reader. But this is so amazing that I had to cheer you, Rimi ❤️👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
#80

Wow awesome loved it ❤️

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