ShaKhi OS || Strings & Knots || 16+ - Page 6

Originally posted by: rikara94

Are Koi fire brigade ko bulao yaar 🔥🔥🤣😂

Rimudi aag lga di tune☺️

Jyoti 🤣🤗❤️

Oh god first those strings and then that knot...ufffff☺️☺️

I know 😎☺️

You know i laughed, when she said, 'aap har kam mujhse main kyon karte hain'

I was like, come on yar☺️ ek toh tum ladki, upar se hot and beautiful☺️ banda kaise control kare😆

Anokhi bhi na ... samajhti nai hai 😆🤪

But still he tried to control himself...dekho toh Puri party mein usko tadta raha😆 and anokhi is all aware...not bad han🤪

Vo khud usko taadne me lagi thi 🤣

Anokhi ko toh nahi pta but i know two reasons behind his words 'yoh needed it' while giving the coat🤪 ek toh usko sardi lg rahi thi🤭 or ek he don't want anyone the beautiful lady of his 🤭

You got it right 🤣

Shit yar...they couldn't kiss🧐but anyways

Built up 😊🤪🤣

Those message convo☺️

You my eyes widened in shock when she asked 'Where' oh god bandi badi bold nikli😆

Saamne vaala banda itna Hot ho.. toh bold hona hi padta hai 😳🤪

Or toh woh btane ke liye special usko room mein bhi aya🤩

And the onwards moments are just fire🔥🔥 aag lga di tune🔥

Thanks ☺️❤️

The way he caged her between his arms and wall☺️that kiss☺️ brushing his lips on her neck☺️ that passionate kiss☺️ and him, giving her the access to touch his bare chest☺️everything wass🔥🔥🔥

Bas karo mujhe sharam aa rahi hai ☺️😎

It has that much intensity, I myself started feeling weak when he whispered 'I want to take these off ever since I tied them'☺️ ☺️

Awwwww sachhi kya.. same here ☺️

And last pe i too was about to say same thing when she called him sir.. i was like abhi bhi sir? And look he also spoke the same thing😆

Yup 😆 khayal milte hain hum sabke 🤣

Ab bas mujhse or nahi kaha ja raha kuch bhi☺️

It was phenomenal Rim🤩🤩 beautiful description as always👏

Thanks jyo 🤗❤️

Oh han ek cheej kehna bhool gyi😂😂 he is so jal kukda han? Dekho kaise relief mila jab he got to know about ahir's engagement 😂 i mean toh kabhi nahi jata function pe lekin uske liye gya😂😂😂🤭

Haan 🤣 bas Ahir raaste se hata nahi ki banda chance pe dance maar liya 😳🤪

Originally posted by: Anusha_24

Omg 😳❤️ its amazing

It's so good 😛

I'm gonna read it multiple times now it was so good totally loved it 🔥🔥🙈😍

It's hot and what not 🙈🔥

Not getting words to describe how amazing it is good work 👏🥳

Awww thank you so much 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: deepshiii

Haye☺️kitni zyada garmi hai yahan pe🥵 My screen and my eyes are burning🔥 This is so amazingly written Rimi☺️ I’m in love with this. This is too hot to handle I’m in lala land imagining more than I should😆☺️ As enchanting as shirtless Shaurya and backless Anokhi🤪

Enjoyed reading this one. Do write more Rimi🤗❤️

Heehee 😆 I'm feeling shy now 😎☺️🤣

I had been in that shirtless and backless land since 3 days toh baaki sabko bhi bhej diya 🤪

Thanks a lot 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Wow...that was just wow🤩...nope i wasnt bored at all...was so worried it was going to end so thnx for keeping it looooong😉...truly awesome...captured their feelings so well...awww....really loved it💖💖💖

Thanks a lot! 🤗

I am touched 😳❤️

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

Omg!! It was on some other level...Beautifully written dear...

Thanks a lot 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Siddiquie

haan main buddhu hoonTum likhi ho,phir bhi na samjhi main ki it is DANGER to not read in akele mein🤪🤣

Thanks😕Apan fan hain tumhare writing ke,fans ko thank you nahi bolte😳

Fan ho? 🤣

Chup kar! You're my Tadpole 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Siddiquie

haina Bechari Ammi🤣BF na hone ke daant se toh bacch jaongi🤪but tumhare write ups padhne ki daant se kaise bacchoon 😭🤣🤪

Sunn galti se bhi... I repeat.. galti se bhi unko padha matt dena🤣🤣 meri image kharab ho jayegi 😎🤪

Originally posted by: Lavi_dovey

I need ice cold water and AC and everything chilled to cool down myself.

This is soo HOTTT 🔥 🔥

Uff...... Their sizzling chemistry is soo much evident in your words. I'm still stuck in their romance.🤪But why did they stop....😔

It was totally amazing. Enjoyed it sooo soo much.

Do write more for our greedy hearts, plz.😊

Love!!🤗

Thanks for your lovely comment dear 🤗

I'll surely write more ❤️

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

☺️☺️☺️

I hate you again yaar🤣😳

No words😳

Krishu 😳 tune padha? 😡

Is this your new technique of res ?😳

Originally posted by: Tashaf_arshi

☺️☺️☺️☺️

Uffff....

Mujhe Shaurya ka bas ek dialogue pasand nahi aaya

"Shaurya- We need to stop".

1 dialogue or Anokhi ke sari mehnat me paani fir gaya or mere armano pe😳😆

Oh God you gave me a heart attack 🤣 I thought oh no maine kya likh diya aisa objectionable dialogue 🤣

Maine bhi dil pe patthar rakh ke likha yaar 😭

I want to wait before writing mature stuff 😉🤪