Purvir FF-. moh moh k DHAAGE✨✨|INDEX updated| - Page 8

Originally posted by: sargamif

To y part hai tera vir ke naam..😆

Haan coz VPS is love chahe Kitna hi Nalla panti kare vo 😆 or vaise bhi Pura OS Vir k naam hi he pehle do part to promos ki Tarah misleading banaye he 🤪

Itna to viru show me bhi nahi roya jitna use sabne os me rula diya🤣🤣🤣🤪

But,acha likha h🤗

Aaj Aapne zyada phoonk liya laage he manne 🤪

Very disappointed😆

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

ps: manne laga aap yeh kahoge sapola hospital kaise pohocha 🤔

Aaj Aapne zyada phoonk liya laage he manne 🤪

Very disappointed😆

🤣🤣🤣

Phoonkna mera shok r meri zarurat h🤪🤪

Ab jaise bhi gaya sapola chala gaya..y imp h

Waise kyu gaya🤔

Originally posted by: sargamif

🤣🤣🤣

Phoonkna mera shok r meri zarurat h🤪🤪

I c🤣🤣

Ab jaise bhi gaya sapola chala gaya..y imp h

Waise kyu gaya🤔

Vir ne kuut Diya #sapole ki kutai mission part 1 successful 🤭

Yeh Mere purane soche hue OS se uthaya he jisme Vir sapole ko kut ta he par Likha nhi 🤭

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

aap batao kyu jaayega 😉

Vir ne kuut Diya #sapole ki kutai mission part 1 successful 🤭

Yeh Mere purane soche hue OS se uthaya he jisme Vir sapole ko kut ta he par Likha nhi 🤭

R maine jab pada to maine socha usko covid hua h to hospital gaya hoga...Baad me kutai hogi uski🤣

Originally posted by: sargamif

R maine jab pada to maine socha usko covid hua h to hospital gaya hoga...Baad me kutai hogi uski🤣

Baad me to Vir maar hi daalega usse 😈

Heya fam m updating part 4.1 (since it's a long chapter had to break it in 2 parts. Part 4.2 will be updated shortly 😊

Disclaimer: repetition- only sapola is -ve rest all positive (jali kitti bhi jale but for me she is a fun loving villain n I hate the statement "AURAT hi AURAT ki dushman Hoti he " 🤷)

Part 4.1~rise and fall

Vir gently kisses pur's hand n then places it on his foreheadhead n sobs to eternity.....

Suddenly Vir notices a hand on his shoulder,he turns n sees Prakashi n quickly wipes away his tears "kaash yeh mumkin hota ki aanso pochne se Dard bhi puchh jaata" said Prakashi in a painful voice coated with love "main jaanti hu Tu abhi kya kahega, maa... Raat k 2 baj rhe he Tu abhi tak kyu jaag rhi he... Phir me kahungi Apne bete se Milne aayi hu... usse do Shabd kehne aayi hu lekin Tu manega hi nhi or manne daanthega bilkul kroor Singh ki Tarah!... " Prakashi smiles n seeing her loving smile Vir too smiles slightly through his painful expressions

Prakashi: " Tu manne yeh bata jab me tere Jeevan me aayi thi to kya tune manne ek hi din me apna liya tha kya ? Nhi...tujhe pure 5 mahine or 16 Din lag gye the manne maa kehke pukarne me! To kya Mene himmat chhod Di? Nhi !mene Roz tujhe subah pyar se uthaya, Apne haatho se khaana khilaya, Roz raatko tujhe apni godh me sulaya, Teri har baat suni or har mushkil se bachaya tujhe...agar me ussi Din himmat haar gyi Hoti jiss Din tune mujhe maa maan ne se inkar Kar Diya tha to Kya humara rishta Kabhi khil pata? Mera bhi bohot Dil dukha tha par mujhe yakin tha ki ek Din Tu manne swikar Kar hi lega or hum dono ne vo Kar dikhaya !!" The pain in Vir's eyes was slowly replaced by peace as he sighed in acknowledgement...

"Chot lagi he , ghaav gehera he, thoda wakt to lagega na...tujhe bas vo wakt dena he usko. kya tujhe sachme Lagta he purvi tanne chhod k chali jayegi?" Prakashi's sweet voice had calming effect on vir's salty tears n he stopped crying, "purvi tujhse sachha pyar Karti he! Yeh uska pyaar nhi to or kya he hum usse molkki Bana Kar laye the yha phir bhi usne humesha hum sab ko kitta Khush rakha sachha pyar khud ki nhi balki dusro ki Khushi dhundhta he unki jinse vo pyar karte he or purvi ne bhi yhi Kiya he usne apni Khushi tere pariwar me dhundhi... kyu ? Kyoki vo Terese ghanna prem Karti he...bechari aaj tak keh hi nhi paayi vo to yeh maan k Bethi he ki Tu uska Kabhi nhi ho Sakta! Par kya yeh sach he ? Kyoki manne laage he Tu to bohot pehle hi uska ho chuka he ? " Prakashi's each word was urging Vir to confess all that he has in his heart

Vir: Haan maa ! Manne khud pata na Chala yo sab kab ho gya , baawri ne mujhe phir se jeene ki ummeed Di par ab vo khud mujhse dur he vo bhi MERI khud ki nasamjhi k Kaaran.

Me sirf baawri Ka nhi tera bhi gunhegaar hu tune mujhe pala , bada Kiya, iss gao Ka mukhiya banaya or Mene kya Kiya...

Teri itte saalo ki mehnat par paani pher Diya, purvi k Saath Mene Teri bhi bohot bezathhi ki he manne maaf Kar de maa..

Vir pleads with his both hands joined but Prakashi consoles him " kisne Kaha MERI mehnat bekar gyi mujhe to tujh par aaj or bhi zyada Garv ho rha he Vir! Har Kisi k pass itni himmat nhi Hoti ki vo apni Galti maan Kar usse sudharne ki koshish kare or maafi bhi maange or tune yo dono kaam Kar dikhaye he ! Tu VIRENDRA he! tera naam hi Teri pehchan he ! Tere Baba chahte the Tu nayak bane sirf iss gao Ka nhi balki iss samaj Ka joki Tune bakhubi Kar dikhaya he bas humesha MERI Salah Yaad Rakhiyo Kabhi haar na maanne ki! "

Prakashi's words rose a new hope within Vir and he now knew what had to done to restore both his baawri's honour n Thier relationship, Vir touched Prakashi's feet n deep gratitude n Prakashi kissed him on his forehead , made him sleep and went to her room praying for peace and happiness in her family....

Ps: VIRENDRA means brave noble leader

~~~Part 4.2 (the fall)~~~

M extremely sorry for late update n this was the most challenging part of this entire series for me since a lot has been done for vir's redemption so my story is a collection of those with some of my inputs n it's aftermath (sach bole to mere dimag me Kaam karna band Kar diya tha itte achhe ideas Dekh k😆or aage ki story atak gyi thi)

N a big shout out to SARGAM DI it's coz of ur encouragement n ideas I was able to carry on with vir's redemption or I would have straight away skipped that part so bada waLa thank you🤗

Yeh part thoda lamba he 😆 so happy reading

After 2 infinitely long days the Panchayat had taken place this time too whole of the revari village was called but a slight change... whole family was there too along with the KIDS , Vir had called them especially since he wanted to clear off the image of a man degrading a woman from their mind, for them to understand that THIS....GOES AGAINST EVERYTHING THIS WORLD STANDS FOR

The day was very long as this time it was none other than the mukhiya, the same person who was once looked upon as God for his just behaviour was on trail , speculations done, with all his might Vir did all which was possible to restore his wife's honour n he was successful too purvi regained her lost dignity but the question was as such "will she forgive me?" Asked Vir to himself n looked at MS n Prakashi with hesitation n confusion while they nodded Thier head in a yes! N Vir was relieved....

While everyone was going back home Vir cornered Pur in the Panchayat office.....

With anxious voice mixed with a few dozes of fear n hope Vir asked:bata baawri kya tanne manne maaf Kar diya ?

Vir's heart was pounding with anticipation as purvi said "Humne mukhiya ji ko maaf Kar diya he or hum pure Dil se aapka shukriya ada Karte he Aapke Kaaran Hume humari khoyi hui dignity n respect mil gyi" A ray of hope ignited his heart n soul but soon cold winds blew it off as pur said her next few words to Vir

" Hum aapko maaf to Kar sakte he par ab aap par bharosa nhi Kar sakte " her voice was cold as ice as she was crushing her own heart along with vir's

Vir: Ye.....h Tu k keh rhi baa....wri !?!

Pur(controlling her outburst) : Aapne humara bharosa itti Baar toda he ki vo ab jud nhi Sakta

Vir grabs her hand n holds it tightly "nhi baawri bas ek or koshish Karle aaj k baad tujhpe Kabhi Shaq na karunga yo Mera vaada he ! Vir cups pur's face "Please mujhe khud se dur na Kar! Ek Baar bas ek Baar Mera bharosa Kar!!"

Pur said with a trembling voice " mu...khi ji.....hum aap par bharosa karna chahte he par Kar nhi paa rhe he !!"

{Tune Jo na kaha plays in BG}

{Dard pehle se hai zyaada

Khud se phir yeh kiya wada

Khamosh nazrein rahe bezubaan}

Vir removes his hands from pur's face with utter shock , his face turned cold n expressionless n looked down as looking into her eyes would only cause more devastation....

{Aab na pehle si baatein hain

Bolo to lab thar tharatein hain

Raaz yeh dil ka

Na ho bayaan}

Tears couldn't stop flowing from pur's eyes, her ever so expressive eyes only expressed pain... Unbearable pain Of separation , guilt n

Heartbreak...as she looked at vir

{Ho gaya ke aasar koi hum pe nayi

Hum safar mein toh hai

Humsafar hai nahi}

Vir dared to look at her n purvir share a deep eyelock trying to convey how much they love the eo , how much they want the eo, how much they need eo , to what extent they were broken seeing the other like this but both were helpless in the hands of circumstances

{Lamha beet ta huwa

Dil dhukata raha

Khamakha bewajah khwaab bunta raha

Tune jo na kaha

Main woh sunta raha

Khamakha bewajah khwaab bunta raha

Jaane kiski humein lag gayi hai nazar

Is shehar mein na apna thikana raha}

Vir takes a step backwards, then another step he couldn't hold himself now , it was too much to withstand while Pur runs down the road to the car , sits inside n cries her heart out with stuffing her dupatta in her mouth so that none could hear the sound of her heartbreak....

Driver(trembling): mukhi ji sab aapka wait har rhe he...

Vir: Tu mukhiyain or baaki sabko Ghar pahucha de , me aa jaunga or Kisi ko Kuch nhi batana !

{Durr chahat se main apni chalta raha

Bhuj gayi aag thi

Daag jalta raha}

Everyone left the Panchayat office leaving a dejected Vir , he had never felt this kind of hopelessness as he sat down on the stairs ,

{kya tujhe sachme Lagta he purvi tanne chhod k chali jayegi? purvi tujhse sachha pyar Karti he!

sachha pyar khud ki nhi balki dusro ki Khushi dhundhta he unki jinse vo pyar karte he }

Prakashi's words started echoing in his mind crushing his tiny heart even more

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Evening- at terrace purdha having a confrontation

Su: purvi Tu pagal ho gyi he kya ! Yeh Kya Kiya tune , mukhi ji Ka Dil Tod Diya ek Baar phir ! Unhone kya Kuch nhi Kiya tujhse maafi maangne k liye mukhiya he vo iss gao k, aaj tak unhone sirf dusro ki sunvayi ki he or aaj khud apni sunvayi Karane k liye bohot himmat chahiye Hoti he purvi ! Pure gao k saamne tujhse or Teri Amma se bhi maafi maangi , Tu mukhiyain Ki izzat maangti thi tujhe mukhiya Ka adhikar Diya , Tu apni bezathhi Ka insaaf chahti thi mukhi ji ne apni izzat tere pero me Rakh Di , apni pagdi !

Tu bhul gyi uss mukhiya k Aasan pe aaj tujhe bitha k vo khud haath Jode tere saamne khade the kya yeh sab karna aasaan he !?!

Tujhe to Yaad bhi nhi hoga jab Tu bimar hoke bed pe padi hui thi Mukhi ji ne kitta dhyan rakha he tera , Inn do Dino me hum sab ne tera mood better Karne ki itti koshish Kari , Kabhi tujhe bahar leke gye ghumane or juhi or Manas ki Di hui dress yaad he tujhe ? Or Jo hum sab college k dosto ne get together Kiya tha abhi restaurant me, tujhe film dikhane or garden ghumane bhi leke gye, tera fav khaana banvaya ! Kisliye ? Mukhi ji ne Kaha tha Hume taaki Tumhara mann shaant ho ! Tujhe yeh saari koshishe dikhayi nhi de rhi kya ? Mene dekha he mukhi ji ko tere liye tadapde hue vo tujhse sachha pyar Karte he purvi tujhe samaj kyu nhi aa rha !!" Sudha stops for a while as she needed to breathe

Meanwhile Pur erupted: pyaar!! Konsa pyaar?

Pyaar bharosa karna sikhata bharosa todna nhi or ek Baar tute to Seh bhi le koi Baar Baar ?! Hum mukhi ji se khud se zyada pyar karte he par hum darte he...unse, unke gusse se , unke Baar Baar maafi maangne se, unke Karib aane se Kahi vo phir humse dur na ho Jaye!

Sudha: to iss darr se Tu khud ko unse dur Kar legi ??tujhe andaaza bhi he iss sab me mukhi ji ko kitti chot pohoch rhi he !!

(Pur is in hypertension mode)

Pur: hume pata he Sudha par humare pass or koi chara nhi he agar ek or Baar mukhi ji ne humara bharosa toda to hum Seh nhi paayenge Sudha or unke Bina jeene Ka to hum soch bhi nhi sakte !

Though Sudha is mad at Pur she still tries

Sudha: ummeed ek jalta Diya he purvi Jo jalane wale ki Shraddha se jalta he. Shayad aaj tuhje MERI baat na samajh Aaye par ek time par tujhe MERI baato Ka Sahi matlab samajh aayega Or tab Tujhe pachtava hoga sabke Dilo ko chot pohochane Ka khaass Kar mukhi ji k.

Kya isme sirf mukhi ji ki galti he ?? Iss sawal Ka Jawab tujhe khud hi dhundna hoga or jaldi isse pehle Der ho jaaye !

Sudha leaving , Pur is lost n confused about her own decisions n behaviour....

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It's night n Pur is still at the terrace thinking n speculating what Sudha said with a lot of questions n confusion, fear n resentment, was it the cool breeze or her fear of loosing herself to Vir that sent chills down her spine n she wrapped her arms around herself....consumed in her own line of thoughts she didn't notice Vir coming coming only till he wraps his shawl around her, She finds Vir staring at her n stares him back , Usually he was like a storm n she was it's eye(calm eye around which the storm revolves) but today the situation reversed, he was calm as a forest whereas she was the same forest ragging in a wildfire, words were not needed for them to tell how much they longed for eachother

Vir: manne tanne Kuch batana he PURVI...

Pur was stunned, "the only time he called me by my name was when I was shot what could be the reason" She thought n then said hesitantly

"Ka..hiye "

Vir places A pack of notes on the side table next to the resting chair leaving Pur stunned

Vir: (hesitantly) yo te..ra MOL! ji...sse Tu chukana chahti thi ..... issi pal se me tujhe iss molkki Bandhan se aazaad karta hu ! Ib Tu aazaad he mujh....mujhse , iss dard se or mere pya...(he takes a pause n thinks where the roads Of destiny had led them where the moment which would have been a walk of fragrant roses ,turned into thorns) aazaadi mere pyar se....

Pur to herself :"What a pity! The moment I waited for soo long had arrived but like how! Now I don't even know for what I should cry for.... him confessing or him leaving me !"

It was a heartbreakingly beautiful moment where vir finally confessed his feelings for the sake of protecting the Pur from this harsh world.... coz he knew with them being together in this state would only cause much more pain to both of them....

~~~Piya o re piya (sad) plays in BG~~~

{In Faaslo Ka Ye Faisla Kyun Dil Ne Mere Kar Liya

Khud Hi Na Jaane Kaise Jeeyega Hoke Ye Tumse Juda}

Tears flow from pur's eyes like a flooding river but she didn't knew what those tears meant more whereas Vir was trying to leave but his legs refused to do so

Vir: "sachha pyar khud ki nhi balki dusro ki Khushi dhundhta he" yo maa be mujhe bohot pehle Kaha tha par iska matlab aaj samajh Aaya he manne ! Mene thare se sachha prem Kiya he purvi bas Kabhi mere pyar pe Shaq mat karna...

{Main Waari Jaawan

Main Waari Jaawan

Saath Ho Ke Ho Ya Ve Kasoor Re

Naadaan Se Dil Ki Har Khwahish Roothi

Sapne Huye Hai Saare Choor}

Pur clutches his waistcoat trying to stop him but Vir is adamant n frees himself n begins to walk away when Pur again holds his hand

"Nhi!....nhi! " were the last words Vir heard from pur's mouth as he again frees his hand n walks away from the terrace wiping his tear filled eyes n Pur breaks down on floor in utter shock...

{Piya O Re Piya

Piya Re Piya Re Piya

Piya O Re Piya

Piya Re Piya Re Piya}

Vir shuts the door of his room n sits there only n breaks down while Pur places her head on the floor holding vir's shawl close to her chest n cries profusely...

~~~~~~~instumental music~~~~~~~~

"Shhhhhh" juhi covers a bitterly crying Manas' mouth N hugs him ....both juhi n Manas run down the stairs crying bitterly...

BG song used

https://youtu.be/WGxve2c8rTg

https://youtu.be/Fm23HC3Rcac

Okay..So u posted it..Finally

I'll read it in a while😉

Originally posted by: sargamif

Okay..So u posted it..Finally

I'll read it in a while😉

Vi abhi processing me he kal to Pakka ho jayega😆

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

abhi Panchayat pe pohoche nhi he vo part 4.2 me aayega 😆

Vi abhi processing me he kal to Pakka ho jayega😆

Ohh..Waise maine bhi aj ek ff likha h😆

Originally posted by: sargamif

Ohh..Waise maine bhi aj ek ff likha h😆

To Pur 🤰ho gyi 😂???