RanVeer OS: Midnight Date! - Page 2

Originally posted by: Rish27

Love that you wrote some missing pieces of the story. Veers following her, how he is worried about her and his reaction to birju-rani conversation.

Love to think veer was amused inside even though he had a serious face. 🤣

As usual very funny and entertaining. Love your fanfiction. ❤️

Thank you so much Rish! ❤❤❤❤❤

I too enjoy writing on RanVeer way too much!! 🙌🏻😋❤

Haha Veer is definitely a funny guy if not serious😋😁❤

Thank you so much Dishi for writing this ❤️

Your OS is way more entertaining than the ME 🤩

Love how you accurately portray each character 👌

This was really beautiful Dishi!

I loved it how Veer mentioned that date thing and Rani, our tubelight answered the actual date to him lololol🤣😜

Keep writing, I loved it❤❤❤

Originally posted by: Yaso1.0

Thank you so much Dishi for writing this ❤️

Your OS is way more entertaining than the ME 🤩

Love how you accurately portray each character 👌

Thankyou for reading and liking yaso 😋❤🙌🏻

ME was definitely very boring 😒😒 with just a few good scenes in it 🤧😋

Thankyou once again!!! 🤗🤗🤗😤

Originally posted by: mahiii12

This was really beautiful Dishi!

I loved it how Veer mentioned that date thing and Rani, our tubelight answered the actual date to him lololol🤣😜

Keep writing, I loved it❤❤❤

Thank you so much Mahii❤❤❤

They are cute. Period! ❤😋🙌🏻

Cvs should not ruin them by forcing romance 🤧

Yes of course!!!

Dishi if possible do missing pieces

in the Kabaddi scene when he comes

in the Panchayat entry scene after he did the LHF (Leave her forever)

Veer looks grey in those parts as they have not shown him understanding and coming it looked as if he was pushed and pulled to come there.

Noone can push and pull Veer till he does not mind

both had Vikram in front as the cool advisor and Birju as the aggressive advisor

You will do justice to all 4 VeeRani and Vikram and Birju, you can spice it with Kiara thodi si

Originally posted by: Shimmer_sault

Dishi if possible do missing pieces

in the Kabaddi scene when he comes

in the Panchayat entry scene after he did the LHF (Leave her forever)

Veer looks grey in those parts as they have not shown him understanding and coming it looked as if he was pushed and pulled to come there.

Noone can push and pull Veer till he does not mind

both had Vikram in front as the cool advisor and Birju as the aggressive advisor

You will do justice to all 4 VeeRani and Vikram and Birju, you can spice it with Kiara thodi si

Great idea shaila!! 🤩🤩🤩🤩

I will pen it out then and make our Veeru's part crystal clear 😋🙌🏻❤

Love it Dishi!! Just got a chance to read it!! 😍😍😍

This was perfect. I imagined it in my head like this only 😆

You are too good with these OSs Dishi 🤗

Originally posted by: flamingoAK

Love it Dishi!! Just got a chance to read it!! 😍😍😍

This was perfect. I imagined it in my head like this only 😆

You are too good with these OSs Dishi 🤗

Thankyou so much AK!! ❤❤❤❤❤

This was going on in my mind so i had to let it out😁😋🙌🏻

Glad we are like minds😋😉

I love your way of writing stories as well😋❤😍🥰

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Thankyou so much AK!! ❤❤❤❤❤

This was going on in my mind so i had to let it out😁😋🙌🏻

Glad we are like minds😋😉

I love your way of writing stories as well😋❤😍🥰

Thank you my darling! ❤️❤️ You’re too kind 😆😘😘