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Part 51
Both of them remain there for ...maybe which felt like an eternity in silence and holding hands
The doorbell rings after a while
Geet gets up in an impulse to open the door
As she opens the door, she finds a beautiful young woman in stylish clothes and accessories standing
Lady-Heyyyyy Ma- Geet? Its Geet right?
She asks while walking inside
Geet just manages to nod in confusion
Lady-Maan, you didn’t tell me she is here
Maan is also paused in his position
He manages to stand up
Geet looks at Maan for answers ki, ye ladki kaun hai? How does she know me? Is she his new gf?
M-She....she is my cousin-Mona. Mona, this is Geet
Mona-Your?
G-Friend
Geet answers on his behalf
Mona-By the way, it seems I came at the right time
She says glancing at the laid table
Mona-Maan, you jerk! You never told me Geet is here
M-Yeah...she is here for work...seminar...doctor stuff
Mona-Great!
M-Why are you here?
Mona-Why? You don’t want me here?
Mona asks mischievously while Maan is signaling her to leave
G-No. You are most welcome
Geet answers on his behalf
Mona-Thank you Geet. You are the sweetest. But I came here to request cum invite this jerk for the family wedding we are having. All the cousins are going to xyz island. it’s a destination wedding. Come on! You jerk
M-I told you I am not coming
Mona-Your mom won’t be there
M-Doesn’t matter
He says looking away
Mona-Geer, why don’t you come too? it would be so fun! Spouses are invited too....I mean friends too,else this unsocial guy won’t come
G-Thanks Mona. But I am leaving after my seminars
Mona plate leke pasta khaane baith jaati hai signaling Maan and Geet to take a seat and join
Mona-Oh come on! You know naa Maan has hots for you
Maan’s ears turn red
Geet looks down
Mona-Aww look at him blushing
She says pulling his cheek
Mona-Trust me, it would be so great ...the island is beautiful...you guys can have a lovely vacation and maybe you could also...
Maan stuffs a spoonful of pasta into his cousin’s mouth before she could finish
M-Mona, I think it’s time for you to leave, hai naa?
Mona-Okay
Mona-See ya, Geet.
She hugs Geet and leaves
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Maan aake baithta hai table par
Both are fiddling with their forks
M-Well....that was awkward
Geet smiles awkwardly
G-I thought she was your girlfriend
M-Oh no no no. I am not dating
She nods
M-Are you dating?
G- No...I mean, a lot of work…
M-Good. Yeah…yeah...I mean work ...work is good
She nods
5 min silence.
Bass cutlery ki awaaz
M-I see, you have got a new look
G-Yeah, I have got a roommate she taught me about makeup
M-Yeah great. ...sexier
Then looks at Geet for her reaction
G-Yeah
M-Do you want to go for shopping some day?
G-No
M-Okay
Geet finishes her food and helps with the dishes
G-I should be leaving now. It was nice seeing you...and knowing that you are fine
M-But it’s raining...there's a storm
She looks outside
G-So you don’t want to drive me back?
M-I do...I can...you can even stay here...I will drive you back,first thing tomorrow...tomorrow is a weekend anyways
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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