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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 49


Feisty and Hilarious Update


Oh wow Maan decides its best that Geet thinks of him as a villian

poor guy but he is the one stalking her , actually its cute and its funny at the same time

but I'm enjoying this Maan once again

Geet ... Uff !!! Attitude and Feisty Queen isn't she , giving Maan a hard time but yes

this is the person he felt most comfortable with , he was always drawn to her feisty side

I liked her concerned friends then the next moment they all surprised seeing Geet getting into

Maan's car as if two lovers had a spat and she was just ignoring him

another cute moment when Geet tries ignoring Maan by putting the music loud

but again its only her attitude that makes him want to be with her

Geet going to Maan's place where he lives alone and he will be cooking pasta for her


I'm now eager to see them having some fun and a good time together

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Posted: 4 years ago

49

nice update

geet's friends shock when geet sit in maan's car whom they saw following geet

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Posted: 4 years ago

Made for each other 😁 🤭

Can't stay away not want to commit with each.

Kya specimen jodi hai 😋

Ab akele rehne mein darr lagta hai Geet ko Maan ke saath.

Hope for some progress in their relationship.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Congrats to all the winners


Part 49

Captivating update..... terrifically written.

so Maan followed her....

he cannot stay away

of cos she noticed this.

great that he asked her out?

as expected she agreed

well Maan is indeed waiting for her

so her friends are surprised seeing Maan there

not surprised that they accuse him of been a stalker

at least she assures them

hate how she ignores him

wish she would behave maturely

seems like Maan is just happy having her with him

what is with these two?

great that he is making dinner for her

oh so she is now scared as he stays alone.

gosh her oh...oh.....oh...

Maan is oblivious of what is going on in her mind!

did she forget that he stayed with her?

hope that they have a serious discussion

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nice update dear

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

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Posted: 4 years ago

She was alone with him for days. So whats the big deal now?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Confused maaneet

Cont soon


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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 49)

Winners: Kkiran, Taahir004

Runner Ups: Creampuff,Umadevi 97

Special Mention: ferdouz

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): maangeet.gmmg,shah10, NeenaDd

Congratulations to all the winners

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Part 50

M-I live alone

G-oh okay

Kuch der baad phir se chamka, ki if he lives alone that means she is going to his place where they will be alone

G-oh...oh...OH!

Geet 50 baar “oh” bolke chup ho gai, ab Maan ko samajh nahi aa raha kya samjhe

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Dono pohonche

Maan lives in a tiny yet posh glass apartment

Typical bachelor's pad

M- Sit. Make yourself comfortable

Maan folds his sleeves

Paani leke aata hai

G-Its cold. can you warm it up?

Maan paani ko microwave mein daalta hai

G-Do you have green tea too?

Maan drawers dhunndne lag jaata hai

G-While you are at it, you have something to eat? I am hungry

M-I am making pasta

G-Yeah yeah. Sorry. Make it quick

Maan apron pehen leta hai

Geet apni green tea leke balcony pe khadi ho jaati hai


She is acting like such a queen

Maan ne socha thoda help karegi cooking mein

M-Geet

She turns

G-Yes?

M-Are you ang-pissed off at me?

G-Absolutely!

She says with a dry smile

He walks to her

M-Darling! I had my reasons

G-Don’t! Make your pasta. Quick!

Maan chup chap retrieves his steps

Awkward silence for a while

Darling? What's up with the sudden spike in flirting skills Mr. Khurana? Iska bhi course tha kya rehab mein?

Geet thinks in her mind

M-You look beautiful

G-Agreed

M-emmmm

G-What?

M-Would you like some wine?

G-I am having green tea

M-Oh yeah


Pasta boil ho raha hai

He is grating some cheese

Plate up karta hai

Geet aake baithti hai dining table par

She starts to take a spoonful

Tabhi Maan bol padta hai

M-I want to say something

He holds her hand

She exhales a heavy breath

M-Geet...

She looks up at him

M-I missed you

She gulps

G-I missed you too

She looks down

G-How was the rehab?

M-I am clean

G-I was worried about you

M-I am sorry. I failed you…but I wanted to be a better man.I...wanted to answer the question you asked me. I didn’t contact you because I still can’t answer the question you asked me. I don't want to break your heart, Geet

She nods

G-Yeah, I know

Both of them remain there for ...maybe which felt like an eternity in silence while holding hands

The doorbell rings after a while

Geet gets up in an impulse to open the door

As she opens the door, she finds a beautiful young woman in stylish clothes and accessories standing

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kkiran

I have heard people fall in love, go blind in love this is a first I am going to hear they are going to go deaf out of love. --🤣Like I feel bad for the volume button these idiots going to break that and thier hearts. --absolutely! They can even change thier middle names to idiot(matching matching) lol Sachi main both banda bandi natak kar rahe hai. One side I will be the bad guy and not contact her but at the same time let me make it obvious I am stalking her so smooth. -- ab bande ko kya pata tha stalking itni obvious ho jayegi Geet at this point I feel even if Maan tells you again about his love for him you might challenge it and its going to make you feel worse because you keep running from the feelings instead of embracing them. --well, running away from feelings toh uski hobby hai, she is PT usha of that Like come one now enough with denial lets eat pasta and kiss and confess :)--hehehe that's a good idea....lets see if they pay any heed to your suggestion😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 49

Omg what a priceless & humerous update !! 👏👏👏-- Glad you liked it

Maan is stalking geet & trying to look inconspicuous 🤣🤣I can totally picture him trying to hide behind plants & columns etc 🤣🤣-- exactly this happened, he was hiding behind a column trying to look inconspicuous

He can’t talk to her but he can stalk her ..... yeah that is totally not creepy 😆--yeah, thats his logic and in his mind its totally not creepy, or maybe he hasnt even thought about that angle since urge to see Geet was so strong

Loved the line maan was caught like a deer in headlights ❤️👍🏼- Thanks❤️. I am still working on my vocab though

Their conversation is awesome, geet confronting maan & acting angry but maan giving his “stupid Wala smile “ ( loved that line too) & geet agrees to dinner --notice she wanted to say FU but said Fine--karna tha inkaar magar ikraar tumhi se kar baithe😆

Their whole conversation is Iike a misaligned train wreck 🤣🤣--hahahah couldn't have put it better

Maan talks & geet either ignores him, hikes up the music or gives curt one word answers ..... is she trying to show that she is upset with him ??? She is just being rude but it seems like maan does not mind & is not phased by her behaviour b/c with geet he can always expect the unexpected....., life definitely is not dull with her 😆--ahhhh so true. If he starts minding these things then honestly he never would have liked Geet

Hmmm a dinner date at maan’s place where he will be making her pasta 😃

Sounds very promising ...... can’t wait

But neither can geet “ oh, oh , oh , oh , oh , oh , oh ................. “ 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣--Yes, one Oh is one realization in her mind

Such a funny update di , very creative !!

Thank you 🤗-You are welcome. Your comment always brings smile to my face🤗


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