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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 51


Hilariously Awesome

I enjoyed this update so much


Oh at the door was Mona , Maan's cousin

so its good that he has not rushed into any relationship

but I had a feeling now that he was clean than surely its only

Geet that can be his partner

both Maan and Geet were practically walking on egg shells

around each other

so he has spoken about Geet to Mona again it shows he surely

cares deeply for Geet and perhaps he has not realized it he is already in love

with Geet

hope she agrees to stay the night

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 51)

Winners: Creampuff, Taahir004

Runner Ups: Kkiran, ferdouz

Special Mention: Khwaishfan,sanum23

EarlyB ird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): Kkiran,NeenadD, aparna3011

Congratulations to all the winners

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Please share the story with your friends on IF or any groups to popularize it. The reader base is getting really low. Please help me out


NOTE: I got an new idea. So readers please suggest any scenes you wish to have in this story. We can surely have a discussion and include it. Please participate

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Part 52

Geet finishes her food and helps with the dishes

G-I should be leaving now. It was nice seeing you...and knowing that you are fine

M-But it’s raining...there's a storm

She looks outside

G-So you don’t want to drive me back?

M-I do...I can...you can even stay here...I will drive you back,first thing tomorrow...tomorrow is a weekend anyways

She looks up at him, meeting his eyes

G-You want me to stay here?

M-I do

G-Why?

M-I can’t see you leave.....I thought I would be okay...but I am not

G-But...but you'll break my heart

M-Is this not breaking our hearts?

He says his body moving closer to hers

She closes her eyes

He pecks her on the lips once, to see her reaction and then it turns into a deep all hell loose kiss

G-Water! Water! I am thirsty

M-Oh sorry-sorry

He gives her water

M-You look beautiful

She wanted to say, ‘you told this already’ but just smiles instead

Both of them don’t want to ruin the moment by saying ki what next

G-What am I supposed to change into? I can’t sleep in these

M-You can wear my clothes

G-Your clothes? How would they fit me?

Maan ek t-shirt aur pajama nikaal ke deta hai Geet ko

Geet pehenti hai

M-See! It looks great

She glares at him

Maan ka t-shirt Geet se thighs tak hai

Pajama toh itna bada hai ki , strings bhi nahi tie ho rahe

G-The pajama is slipping! I am not wearing a bra...you can see my headlights!

M-No...emm...I am not able to...but since you mentioned...I mean...I will get you something else

Pajame ki jagah boxer leke aata hai

M-This will fit you

G-Boxers????

M-Wear them. They will fit

G-Okay. I will wear them if you wear them

M-I am wearing them

Maan removes his trousers

Geet blushes hard hiding her eyes

Both start laughing

G-Shameless!

M-As if you don’t like it

Maan says mischievously

Geet sits on the sofa laughing

G-You look ridiculous in shirt and boxers

Maan laughs too

M-We both look ridiculous

He points at the mirror

She giggles

G-We do

Geet sofe pe pasar gayi

Maan andar se comforter leke aaya aur Geet ko diya; aur khud bhi Geet se chipak ke pasar gaya

M-This feels so good! I hate adulting

G- What’s your definition of adulting?

She asks curiously

M- Being responsible and stuff…thinking what will happen in future. In short, thinking about the relationship will not work so not being together

G-uhmmm

She goes into deep thoughts for a moment and then says:

G-This is sinful

M-Is it?

She nods

G-You know in India, there would be a scandal

M-Then nobody has to know about this there. Shhhh!!!

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kkiran

Nakhra toh dekho madam ka! Oh Oh Oh kart ghar to paunchgayi nahi toh mujhe toh laga yeh gaddi se kud ke baag jayegi. hahaha tumhare toh Geet se alag hi expectation hai😆...Chal ek advice toh li meri ke pasta toh kah liya aur thoda sa confess kiya. ab teri advice se hi jo ab tak thik hua hai wo ho paaya hai 😉Dentist pulling teeth sounds easier than these 2 really having a deep and mature conversation. lol what analogy! I dont know who this lady is at the door but Maan better explain who and what because we know Geet is going to go read a stupid book and say he cheating on her without even a confirmed relationship. Sighs! Ab Geet se koi umeed hi nahi hai tumhe, bechari!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Wow what a drama queen geetbis. Putting up nakras. But it is ok Who else will she take that liberty with right!! This line totally stole my heart, and its so apt 👏Maan trying to talk to her and hoping she might help him but no. She is acting like a queen for sure to be pampered by maan. Ab thoda toh bhaao khayegi naa



but glad they talked at the end and maan gave her his reasons. Understandable


wonder where they will go from here ...keep reading for that then


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: UmaDevi97

Part 50

🤣🤣🤣Agar yeh dono ko kisine dekha toh sochenge ki ailah role change hogaya Oh God! Galti se I read role play...my dirty mind...lol... Geet keliye Maan paani la raha hai. wow... Ab Geet toh ekdum se jwalamukhi ki thara phat rahi hai Maan ke upar. Isse ye pata chalta hai ki koi kitna bhi bada aadmi kyu naa ho apni biwi/gf se sab darrte hain 😆Aur woh flirt bhi karne laga kya socha tha Maan...agar woh flirt kare Geet ke saath Geet uske woh pasta ki cheese ke thara melt ho jayegi... ab laga toh ye hi tha Bilkul nahi par ek baat toh hai sahi ki communication is the key to any situation... Dono ab ache bache ki thara baitke baat karke problems ko suljhana hai toh kabhi koi complications nahi hoga na... Lekin last wali siyapa kya tha...?kaun hai yeh ladki...? Arre yaar Didi mujhe ghantian sunnai derahi hai woh bhi Geet ki dhimag ki ghanti.... Ab toh Maan gayi... Arre humari woh Sherni jo usse kha jayegi... Super duper sarcastically awesome update Di.... 🤗🤗hahhahah ab Maan bachega yaa nahi uske liye padte raho

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 49

Di you definitely should sign a contract to write a sequel to GHSP...... a comical one ...... it would be a hit .......smiley20 hahahah I wish, mujhe koi chance de, 15 stories toh mere paas aise hi padi hain...but thanks a lot for liking my humour

Poor maan is waiting on geet hand & foot & geet is not just acting like a queen but actually a royal pain in the ass smiley36 hahhahaha lol...ye Geet ke saamne matt keh dena, you know naa what will happen

Maan is making an effort , he is cooking for her , compliments her, even explains that he kept his distance b/c he did not want to hurt her ........ suprised though he still does not have an answer to her question even 6 mos later considering he probably had a lot of time at rehab ........ perhaps when they are 90 they will be able to sort this all out smiley37 Hope ki jaldi hi sort out ho jaaye

And geet is mad at maan but did she forget that she called his mom who put him in rehab for 6 months in the first place ? Maan could still hold a grudge but he doesn’t Well according to Geet she made a mistake & already apologized for it but Maan deliberately did not contact her

Liked when they just sat there holding hands quietly..... they have such comfort & ease in their relationship only when they are not talking smiley37smiley37perhaps they should date but do a Mohan ?? Vrat where they don’t talk ....,, everything would be so simple , no problems smiley37smiley37smiley37 well, unki ladai aur nok-jhok mein bhi toh pyaar hai, usko overlook mat karo

Uh ho, now who is this bimbo at the door?? Don’t tell me she is maan’s girlfriend or I will have to borrow geet’s chainsaw smiley37smiley37 what do you think?

Thank you di enjoyable as always smiley31 Thanks for liking🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats on fifty updates..... 👏well deserved ⭐️ 🥳

do appreciate the continuous updates 😃


A big thank you for noticing that its the 50th update. Super big thanks to you and all the readers for reading & commenting on each part so I get the motivation to write more❤️🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

congrats to all the winners


Part 50

Fantastic update........ beautifully written

at least Maan is hospitable and made Geet comfortable

Gosh she could have at least helped Maan--Attitude hai madam ka

liked that he confronted her and that she was honest

wow he called her Darling

admire his efforts but Madam is full of attitude

at least he wanted to explain

hate that she did not let him

of cos she is confused with his behavior

ha ha she is a master piece... teaching flirting in rehab?

so he is making an effort.

Why did she agree to have dinner if she was going to ignore him?

glad that they had a discussion and was direct with each other

loved that Maan opened up with Geet

awesome moments......

oh no who is the lady at the door?

impeccable timing.........

hope no mu between Maan and Geet!

well where is that chainsaw lol? ab airport mein laa naa paayi, maybe she can buy a new one😉


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: NeenaDd

Chapter 51


Yet again a new person to tease them,aww,making them blush and also awkward,😜😁,now she is going to stay at his place,Is there a chance of them going to that island, waiting for further...


We will know, if they go to island or not, or whether they go together or not. Keep reading

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Chapter 51

Thank goodness 😅 the girl is his cousin, phew we do not have to hate her 😆---warna kya socha tha, Maan was dating? Ab iske liye ek cheesy gaane ki line yaad aayi-" mere baad deewane tujhko naa koi aur jaachegi, naa tere din guzrenge naa teri raat kategi"

Funny how his cousin knows all about geet ...,, someone has been chatty with his cousin--That would have been an interesting convo

Sooo adorable how maan was blushing 😳 thank goodness his cousin spills the beans about maan having the hots for geet. --well, ab tak toh Geet ko pata chal jaana chaiye tha, but ab Geet ka love radar is broken toh kya karein

As for being awkward ...... maan & geet could officially win the title of king & queen of awkwardness 😆they are both avoiding a proper conversation like the plague 😆 their relationship will always be at a standstill due to their inability to communicate their feelings 😕-- itna communication was the most they had communicated, bechare are taking one step at a time, karne do

Niw this destination wedding sounds like a lot fun & Mona seems like the perfect Cupid ♥️ for this awkward socially challenged couple .-That they absolutely are I hope they both go !!! What happened to maan’s mom ?? Maan & his mom still seem to have a strained relationship!! -We will know

Hmmm interesting there is a storm outside & there is a storm brewing inside maneet’s hearts 🥰.......... will geet stay the nite ??? Can’t wait to find out .!! 🤪Hahahha hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chaabi kho jaaye. I will just shut up, I am so full of cheesy songs

Thank you 🤗




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