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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm


Part 38

astounding update..... exceptionally written

liked how Maan assures Geet

he hit the nail on the block.... brilliant analysis

he did have a point that its ok to fail but you have to realise and learn from this...

he rendered Geet speechless

of cos he thinks whatever happened was beyond great

Geet was pleasantly surprised with his comment

adore the kiss that said so much

oh no did the door bell have to ring!!

what timing lol

well her colleagues are shocked seeing Maan there
so now the gossip will start

why are people like this? they are supposed to be her friends and colleagues

not surprised that they confront Geet

as expected Geet lies to them

Maan is take aback with her comments....

can understand why she wants to hide this.

Gosh Geet panics

she cannot stay in the kitchen forever lol.

did they have to bring beer?

will Maan be able to handle it?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan is probably the first person to tell that she is allowed to fail and bounce back. He has read her right. She is insecure and is hiding from the world.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet's friends show up and discover Maan there. Of course the assumptions will be made. Her friends are more than ready to believe they are together.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 38)

Winner: Khwaishfan ⭐️ Creampuff⭐️

Runner-ups: Taahir004, coderlady,

Special Mention: sanum23,

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): ferdouz, NeenaDd, deep002

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

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Part 39

But as Maan walks out of the kitchen, she also reluctantly follows him

Ek friend bolta hai ki since nobody is actually sick, I have some beer in my car. I will get it

Wo uthke chala jaata hai beer lane

One of the girls speaks up

“So Maan, you are working from here I see”

M-Yeah, I carry my laptop everywhere

This group of friends are like a surprise test for Geet and Maan ka mental and emotional endurance

Geet is staring like a deer caught in a headlight

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The guys get the beer

Sabko dete hain

Geet Maan ko visibly ishaare kar rahi hai, jo Geet ko lag raha hai are discreet but are so not

Maan is straight faced, not reacting to her obvious signals

When Maan is offered beer, he refuses saying-

M-Thanks but I am trying to be sober

Geet is visibly relieved

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“So, you guys are dating since when?”

M-3 months

G-We are just friends

Dono saath bol padte hain

Maan-Geet chup, dost bhi chup

One of the guys tries to cut in the awkward moment

“Let’s go out for dinner!”

One of the girls retaliates saying

“But I was hoping we could play truth and dare”

G-Lets go out

Geet quickly adds in a no-nonsense tone

“Okay, both of you dress up. We are waiting outside”

A guy suggests

G- No! why would....

Maan cuts in before Geet could say something stupid

M-Thank you. we won’t take long.

Dost bahar jaate hain and Maan shuts the door

Maan ke lock karte hi, Geet is panicking

G-Oh God O God! Wo sab kya soch rahe honge....unhe sab pata chal gaya kya...O my God...ab main kya karu

M-Unhe jo sochna tha, wo pehle se hi soch rahe the

G-What?

M-What do you think were they thinking when I kissed you in middle of the road

G-That you are a pervert

She says matter of factly

He rolls his eyes

Maan apne kapde leke bathroom mein chala jaata hai

5 min mein change karke aata hai

M-I am waiting outside with your friends

He goes out of the house

Geet ko kabhi kabhi Maan samajh nahi aata

Why is he being friendly and nice to her friends, he could have been cold

He is the supposedly rich guy, but he is warm and nice to her friends...even to her....uska samajh mein aata hai ki he must be using herbut why her friends?

Don’t these types of guys are wary of meeting the girl's friends?

Wo Maan ki jagah hoti toh woh nahi jaati aise friends ke saath

Does that mean, he is actually serious about her and not playing kind of a guy

She realizes she is getting late and comes out of her thoughts

She takes out normal good clothes she generally wears to go out

Then her eyes fall on the bed and her cheeks acquire a color automatically thinking about what happened today

She takes out better clothes

She wants to look better than every girl there

The thought of all her friends dressed to the nines and she in a drab dress and Maan checking out other girls had made her feel uncomfortable instantly

She wears a beautiful feminine skirt & a top ,instead of the original choice of a jeans and a loose top

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Geet appears wearing the dress and light make-up.

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Chapter 38

Sensational update !!! 👏👏👏👏👏

I totally knew it !! That maan could see right through geet & her layers ........ to just a girl that is afraid of failure & not stacking up to what was expected of her ..... she grew up a goodie two shoes & strives for perfection & has set the bar too high up for her self

Maan has totally nailed it !!!

But I totally loved maan’s pep talk ..... he was right

Things were just beginning to become interesting b/n them but the doorbell was rung at the wrong time !! 😉Notice, how Maan was trying to give her peck on the cheek but she turned her face to turn it into a smooch

Argh her darn friends ...,

Them & their gossip & assumptions ...,, don’t they have their own life to worry about ..... why do they keep meddling with geet’s life

Uh oh the boys are getting beer ....... but maan is trying to stay sober ....... sending silent prayers to geet’s babaji for maan not to ruin his dry spell . 😆

Thank you soooooo much di 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ok first she had no idea she dating a gay guy great Geet you have a great choice in men especially when exploring intimacy lmao. Now she bugging out her friends are over. This girl doesnt know how to keep her calm. She keeps thinking more negative of Maan then she is positive and its unfortunate because I feel like she is going to hurt him more than he is her. Its like she doesnt want to believe the to good to be true situation of her life. She needs to stop being to conflicted and enjoy and live in the moment yeesh!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 39

Absolutely brilliant update !!!!!! smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

Wait let me do my happy dance 1st smiley41smiley41smiley41

So geet is suprised that maan is nice to her friends making her question her prior judgement about him smiley40

Loved that maan refused the beer

Loved that maan said they were dating for 3months smiley36...... ( does geet know smiley36)

My absolute favorite part is that she is dolling herself up for maan 💕💕💕...... awww she does not her maan to look at other girls !!!

Loved it !!!!

Love the direction the story is taking

Keep up the amazing writing !!

Thank you smiley31

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Posted: 4 years ago

She wants to look nice among her friends and change the original plan of wearing jeans,she doesn't want him to notice other girls,

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update


Maan geet both want to be in relationship but geet still not sure and loved geet get dress to impress maan and she also commanding maan as his girlfriend to not drink


Loving this ss pls update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet is scared of mistakes but Maan told her to learn from them.

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