Purvir FF - falling! Part 8updated on page 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31
Awwie such a cute update .. I am in love with your writing.. it's totally refreshing. Next part please ❤❤❤
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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Piya 🤗❤️❤️❤️

Read all the parts in one go

Yr maja agaya

Favorite mera part 4😳

Part 5 me dhoka mila starting

But ending was sweet

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Piyaaaa.....idk if uk it yet...but you are one hell of an entertaining awesome writer...mazza aa gaya....pls continue...❤️❤️✨🤩

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

hiii i have read the last 2 parts and i loved reading it

i was expecting a kiss in the kitchen but he also threw water on her bawwre h dono😆

loved the last part ❤️

though it was short but nice

u better be updt the next part soon 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Piyaaaa.....idk if uk it yet...but you are one hell of an entertaining awesome writer...mazza aa gaya....pls continue...❤️❤️✨🤩

thanks to Purvir😉got a chance to explore myself

Jiya k liye Mera jiya 🤭❤️❤️❤️

Edited by Piyaazzz - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

thanks to Purvir😉got a chance to explore myself

Jiya k liye Mera jiya 🤭❤️❤️❤️

Loads of love di❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

will definitely try ❤️ thanks for your appreciation


Thank youuuuu 🙏


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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Priya omg u r to good 👍

My favorite part in part 5 is vir saying “mere pass aaja”🙈🙈

But part 4 is my most favorite ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 6

MORNING

Purvir sleeping in eachother's arms ,Vir wakes up and sees almost half of pur's body on his, her arm covering his chest ,her head on his bicep, Vir gulps but he's lured by her beauty and the peaceful smile on her face and removes hair strands from her face "ye manne kya hota ja rha he me jab bhi baawri ko dekhta hu to sab Kuch bhul jaata hu, me tujhe dost maanta hu par kyu khud ko tere Kareeb jaane se rok nhi paata , yeh kaisi dosti he? Me tere se pyar bhi nhi karta, to kya he Jo mujhe Teri or kheechta he, kyu tere Pass aane se mujhe farak padta he ,kyu me tujhe khud se dur jaate nhi Dekh Sakta , tera tau bhajan ,manne kroor Singh kehna kyu mujhe achha lagne laga he, Tu he to mere bachho ki maa par aisa kyu Lagta he ki tere mere beech or Kuch bhi he." His chain of thoughts is broken when Pur wakes up, Vir swiftly closes his eyes, Pur sees his chest right before her eyes and is shocked,she tries to get up but founds vir's other hand on her waist preventing any movement. She gets nervous, but then her eyes found his face ... and he looked like a prince straight away from a fairytale, she had never experienced such fondness for anyone, Vir opens his eyes while Pur is still looking at him dreamily,

Vir:"oye baawri aaj bachho k school or tere college ki chhutti he kya , uth chal ib"

Pur: kaise uthe jab aap apna haath humari kamar se nhi hata rhe

Vir looks at his hand and quickly removes it, both turn Around at the opposite sides of the bed Pur goes to wake the kids up and Vir goes in for a shower.


AT COLLEGE

Pur comes with Sudha and greets everyone,

"Purvi",someone calls her , it's Karan, Pur finds anger raising inside her,and clenches her fist, Karan walks up to her "m really sorry purvi,mere Papa bohot bade businessman he, isiliye mujhe aaj tak Kisi ne roka hi nhi bas me Jo bhi karta sab meri Haan me Haan Bhar dete the or shayad mujhe iski aadat ho gyi thi tabhi jab tumne Mera haath pakda to MERI ego hurt ho gyi or gusse me... Mene tumhare Saath bohot galat Kiya he mujhe maaf Kar do "

Pur:"Hum to tumhe maaf Kar bhi de par unn Sabka kya jinko tum pareshan Karte Aaye ho agar tumhe sach me Apne kiye par pachtava he to unn Sabhi se maafi maango hum iss college me sirf ek student he , mukhiyain nhi isiliye tumhara yeh maafinama mere saamne mat Karo.

Karan: "nhi purvi ! Me sach me sorry hu aaj k baad me Kisi ki ragging nhi karunga or ek responsible senior banne ki koshish karunga " he goes to Sudha and apologizes for his atrocious behaviour Sudha forgives him.

Thanks purvi ! Exclaimed Karan with relief.

Pur leaves for her class....

Meanwhile karan's friend "oye yeh Kya ho gya tujhe TUNE purvi se maafi maangi!??!"

Karan:Purvi nhi mukhiyaini he vo dekha nhi kaise sherni ki Tarah ghure ja rhi thi mujhe Jaise kacha chaba jayegi ...

"Sahi keh rha he Tu bhai iss purvi se Bana k rakhni padegi, Kahi isne mukhiya ji ki Kuch bol Diya to hum gye..."

Karan: vhi to ...mukhiya ji Ka gussa dekha Mene tab samaj Aaya Sab unse itna kyu darte he...kal purvi nhi Hoti to mujhe rusticate karwa hi dete me hi jaanta hu kaise nikla hu USS situation se bahar!! MERI Salah tujhe yhi rahegi Tu bhi dosti Kar le mukhiyain k Saath Jaise baaki sab Kar rhe ... Both Karan n his friend went to their class.

After the college Vir comes to pick Pur up

PURVIR ON CYCLE

Vir: to bata chakkarghanni kaise gya tera aaj Ka din college me ?

"din to bohot hi achha gya !" she exclaimed

"Or pata he USS Karan ne humse pure college k saamne maafi maangi or Sudha se bhi"

Vir:(assertively) hmmm theek he ib lekin USS Karan se dur hi rahiyo

Pur: ji mukhi ji...vaise to insaan Bura nhi he bas ek ameer Baap ki bigdi hui aulad he....

Both remember pur's first impression in the college n smile. After all this romantic cycle ride was an outcome of that ameergiri only.

Pur: dhyan dijiye mukhi ji Varna hum gir jayenge !

"Gir to gye hi he " Vir sighed

Pur:"Kya !?"

Vir: Kuch nhi

Vir takes the charge maintaining the cycle's balance. "Hey raam ji bas issi Tarah meri life Ka balance bhi Bana rhe yo baawri ki wajah se "

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At night

Everyone is asleep ,Pur is studying and feels sleepy, Vir notices her"manne to laga tha Tu padh rhi hogi par Tu to ghode bech k so rhi he"

Pur: nhi to !

Vir:( sarcastically) "hmm vo to manne dikh rha he " glances at her and smirks

Pur: achha theek he par ab hum kya kare yeh book hum jab bhi padte he Hume neend aa jaati he, ek to itti Moti book upar se pata nhi itne boring chapters kyu daalte he inme...

Vir couldn't stop smiling, enjoying his baawri's antics and complaints regarding that chapter in her psychology book.

Vir: koi nhi baawri le chai pi le , tera dimag khul jayega...

Pur thanks him n drinks tea while Vir goes to make another cup for him

A few moments later----

Vir again notices Pur asleep, "Kitab kholte hi neend aa jaati he iss baawri ko , k hoga iska "

He lifts her in his arms just then Pur wakes up," arre chhodiye Hume Kaha leke aa rhe he!!!"

"Ae baawri chillana band Kar Tu so gyi thi isiliye tanne utha k le ja rha hu ,vaise ek baat bata Tanne to Kaha tha ki tere no. Bade achhe he ?"

Haan to?(enquired Pur)

Vir puts Pur down.

Vir: Mera matlab Kitab kholte hi to tanne neend aa gyi aise kaise padhegi Tu ?

Pur: arre aisa nhi he Hume padna to bohot pasand he par psychology nhi Pasand Hume.Hume to chemistry n maths Pasand he.

"arre k baat Kar Di tanne mujhe bhi chemistry biology or maths bade pasand the...class topper rha hu me "Vir proudly asserted....."chal mere Saath tujhe ek jagah le jaata hu jaha Tu shanti se padh Sakegi Bina soye"

Pur: Abhi !! Nhi mukhi ji Kisi ko pata chal gya to Hume aise bahar nhi jaana itti Raat gye

Vir:tanne kal assignment dena he k nhi...yha to Tu padhne se rhi mere Saath chal me Teri help bhi Kar dunga.

Pur agrees , Vir takes the cycle n purvir off to Thier journey....

"hum Kaha ja rhe he mukhi ji ? Dekhiye yha Kitna fog he aap sambhal k chalayiega vaise bhi Umar k Saath concentration ki Kami mehsoos hone lagti he humare tauji ko bhi fog me Kuch nhi dikhta"

Vir:arre bas Kar apni tau chalisa , do min Ruk abhi hat jayega fog .... purvir left behind the fog ...."arre mukhi ji peeche to Kuch bhi nhi dikh rha Hume darr lag rha he"

Vir:ghabra mat baawri me hoon Na , Pur grabs him tightly from his waist ,and they disappear in the cold blanket.....

Edited by Piyaazzz - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Mast hai piya ..



Mukhi ko bda pasand hi chemistry aur biology...🤣

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