Purvir FF - falling! Part 8updated on page 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Omg ye kya tha to good I have no words

Tauji was my favorite 🙈🙈🙈

Ps I have to read 1,2 still 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Loved it loved it loved it!!!😆❤️❤️❤️✨✨✨✨

My favourite part.... absolutely!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Piyaaaa 🤗omg ...What a writing ..❤️dreading for next part jaldi upload maro please

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Part 5

Pur couldn't take it anymore and closed her eyes Vir still staring....

Purvi was lost in the moment when suddenly Vir poured down a complete bottle of cold water on her Pur shouted "yeh Kya Kiya Aapne!"

Mukhiya VIRENDRA PRATAP SINGH naam he Mera main Kabhi Kisi se nhi haarta. Tanne k laga Tu mere upar paani dalegi or me bhut banke khada rahunga? Haan?

Prakashi-"Arre k hua purvi kyu chillayi"

Everyone reaches at the kitchen and is surprised on seeing purvir in such a condition. MS: arre yeh k Kar liya itni k garmi Chad rhi he tum dono ko

Pur's anger now boiling

Pur(mumbling)"ek to inki wajah se Hume pehle hi itna Kuch Sunna pada , or ab daant bhi khaani padegi"

"Hume nhi pata mama ji Apne bhanje se hi puche " as Pur walks away she slips on water but holds herself preventing any other chances of embarrassement and glares at Vir angrily

Vir: arree.... Pur leaves without listening to him.

Prakashi: hey bhagvaan jab Dekho tum dono ladte rehte ho or Kam se Kam Tu to lihaass Rakh

Vir : k keh rhi ho maa Mene Kuch nhi Kiya yo baawri he Jo jab Dekho bakwaass karti rehti he, mukhi sulks

Prakashi: achha theek he ab jaake usse mana to khaana bhi nhi khaaya usne

Vir : me kyu Manau iss baawri ko

Juhi : nhi Papa aapko hi manana padega

Manas: Haan Papa haathi Kabhi Bina baat k gussa nhi Hoti aap Manao haathi ko

Vir:yo k zabarjasti he!

JnM: zabarjasti hi Sahi par aap haathi ko Manao naaaaaaa....

Vir : achha Baba theek he me mana Lunga tumhare haathi ko ....chamche kahike

Vir leaves with plate in his hand towards their room.


In purvir's room

Pur is drying her hair but ignores Vir

Vir: ib gussa thuk de or Khana kha le thanda ho jayega,

Vir is again ignored

He comes near the mirror, pur's hairs fall on his face he is mesmerized by her beauty and takes in the scent of her hair. Pur notices Vir lost in her hair his eyes closed,she too blushes and enjoys her effect on him then she turns the blower in front of his face jerking him, he regains his conscious self and moves away, Pur slightly smiles while Vir is trying to control his hormones.

Pur:Chaliye Khana kha lete he (she takes the first bite) aap bhi aa jayiye hum jaante he Aapne bhi Kuch nhi khaya he

Vir comes and sits by her side and they eat in the same plate with stealing glances from eachother Vir puts the plate aside and they both prepare the bed and sleep on Thier respective sides.

Late at night

Purvi suffers a nightmare and wakes up terrified , Vir too wakes up on seeing Pur tensed .

Vir: k hua baawri! Bura Sapna dekha !

Pur looks at him teary eyed "humare dimag me Baar Baar vhi Sab chal rha he college, ragging,chhat se girna, hum Chah Kar bhi isse bhul nhi pa rhe he "

Vir : Jo beet gya so beet gya ib in sab k baare me soch Kar Kuch nhi hoga. Aankhe band Kar or soo ja kal college jaana he na. Pur tries, but again wakes up Pur(restless): "humse nhi hoga , humari aankhe band hote hi humare saamne vo pal aa jaata he aap hi bataye hum kya kare!

Vir: shaant baawri shaant....wipes away her tears....mere pass aa...

Pur:(stunned) kya

Vir:(hesitantly) Mai...n yo keh rha tha ki ag..gar tanne koi aitraz na ho to Tu mere pass so Sakti he....

Pur: hu..m!?

Vir:haa...nn tanne hi to Kaha tha jab Tu mere pass Hoti he tujhe surakshit mehsoos hota he... Darr nhi Lagta....

Pur is in awe of her husband.....Vir extends his arm towards her...Pur feels a little shy and butterflies in her stomach....Vir too feels a tingling sensation all over his body...both of them are a little awkward and effected but none was ready to accept.

Pur places her head on vir's arm her heartbeat racing while Vir diverts his gaze to the other corner of the room,Pur places her hand on his biceps "thank you"and sleeps

Vir looks softly at her ,smiles and closes his eyes.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Nice updt...but y no kiss😡😒


Love the last part❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Ziva01

Nice updt...but y no kiss😡😒


Love the last part❤️

milega milega wakt aane pe sab milega ☺️🤣
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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Luv your writing 👍👏 Wish you could keep the dialogues in English as well for those of us who don’t understand Hindi 🙏 Sorry for being a pain 🙈

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Zunari

Luv your writing 👍👏 Wish you could keep the dialogues in English as well for those of us who don’t understand Hindi 🙏 Sorry for being a pain 🙈

will definitely try ❤️ thanks for your appreciation
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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

milega milega wakt aane pe sab milega ☺️🤣

Okie waiting for it☺️😆🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

I want to make a point

All my OS are kind of connected (not really) but as it goes with the story and the current development rate of purvir is effected by the previous os so they will gradually develop depth in Thier relationship, with every new hurdle/os the progression can be seen and will only move forward coz mereko bhi purvir romance maangta he 🤣


Thank you everyone for your constant encouragement and appreciation ❤️

Edited by Piyaazzz - 4 years ago

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