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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 3

At home family members show Thier concern for purvi and tell her to be cautious.

She is now mukhiyain of the village her every action influences the villagers as they look up to the MUKHIYA and MUKHIYAIN

Kids hug Pur and console her.

While Vir is still mad at Pur and ignores her Pur feels bad as he is not talking to her and leaves for Panchayat.

At night

Vir comes into the room exhausted n looks for Pur but she was not there, then he goes to the study area but she wasn't there too, " ib yeh baawri phir Kaha gyi... Just as vir prepares to leave he notices a note kept on his study...

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Hume maaf Kar dijiye mukhi ji, hum jante Hain aaj humari wajah se aapko bohot Bura laga , Hume usko humari ragging Karne se rokna chahiye tha or hum sab Kuch jaante hue bhi uski baat maante gye humne yeh sab isiliye Kiya ki taaki college me Kisi ko humare mukhiyain hone Ka pata na chale par hum galat the... Hum jaante he aap humse gussa bhi he ki humne USS Karan ko bacha liya , or agar aap chahte to usse rusticate karwa sakte the lekin Aapne humare Mann Ka maan rakha or usse chhod Diya iske liye hum aapka shukriya ada Karte he or ab se hum usse door hi rahenge or agar aage se usne humare ya Kisi k bhi Saath Kuch galat Kiya to hum sabse pehle aapko hi batayenge. Please aap humse gussa mat rahiye Hume bilkul Accha nhi Lagta Hume daant lijiye baawri kahiye par Yun muh phula k chup mat bethiye Varna hum kahenge ki humare tauji bhi aise hi muh phula k gussa Karte he

please!

Aapki baawri

=================================

Vir smiles slightly (baawri BG plays )

And goes on in search of his baawri just then Pur hugs him from behind "ab maafi de bhi dijiye Varna Hume bhi aapka gulam banna padega 7 Dino tak" Vir turns , on seeing pur's innocent face his anger vanishes.

Vir: theek he par Tu manne yeh bata Tu kyu nhi chahti tere mukhiyain hone K baaree Kisi ko pata chale , kya tanne sharam aati he manne apna pati kehte hue ?

Pur places her hand on his mouth "nhi aisa bilkul bhi nhi he, aap to humara gurur he Hume fakr he ki hum VIRENDRA PRATAP SINGH ki patni he ! Par iss mukhiyain k title ki wajah se Hume dusre students k Saath ghulne Milne Ka mauka nhi milega. Ab sab yhi sochenge ki hum mukhiyain he or humse darenge na ki humare dost banenge.

Vir interupts her "par ye to sach he ki Tu mukhiyain he ab iska koi kya Kar Sakta he par jisse tera dost banna hoga vo tera saaf Dil dekhega naaki tere mukhiyain Ka status or aaj to tere college Ka pehla din tha abhi bohot time he tere dost banane k liye "

Pur: aap theek keh rhe he mukhi ji hum hi pagal ho gye the pata nhi kya kya soch rhe the

Vir : ye to me pehle din se hi keh rha hu ki Tu baawri he baawri...

Both smile, Pur gets emotional

Vir : ab k hua tanne ?

Pur : agar aaj aap nhi hote to...

Vir : aise kaise nhi Hota, me to humesha tere Saath hi hu

Pur stunned again , Vir also stunned after realising what he said . *Eyelock*

(Dhal jaun main)

{Tu kagazo pe Dil k Likha hua he tabse

Duniya mein me hu jabse yarra ....oooo

Tu Mera ho chuka he Dil phir bhi maangta he har lamha tujhko Rab se yaara }


Vir moves away but Pur holds his hand

(s- turn parallel) and hugs him tight Vir feels shivers down his spine and gulps

{Mera Tere Siva koi aur nahi Tu Na Hona khafa Kabhi mujhse....}


Pur:hum Aapke Saath khud ko surakshit mehsoos Karte he. Her soft voice was enough to break the shackles of his control as he buried his face in her shoulders and her chin, resting on his shoulder.

{Dhal jaun main tujhme....

Ghul jaun main tujhme....

Mil jaun main tujhme.......*2

Yaaraaa.....}

It was a whole new world as they take in the warmth of each other her hands clutching his shoulders and his arms all around her ....

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Part 3

At home family members show Thier concern for purvi and tell her to be cautious.

She is now mukhiyain of the village her every action influences the villagers as they look up to the MUKHIYA and MUKHIYAIN

Kids hug Pur and console her.

While Vir is still mad at Pur and ignores her Pur feels bad as he is not talking to her and leaves for Panchayat.

At night

Vir comes into the room exhausted n looks for Pur but she was not there, then he goes to the study area but she wasn't there too, " ib yeh baawri phir Kaha gyi... Just as vir prepares to leave he notices a note kept on his study...

==============================

Hume maaf Kar dijiye mukhi ji, hum jante Hain aaj humari wajah se aapko bohot Bura laga , Hume usko humari ragging Karne se rokna chahiye tha or hum sab Kuch jaante hue bhi uski baat maante gye humne yeh sab isiliye Kiya ki taaki college me Kisi ko humare mukhiyain hone Ka pata na chale par hum galat the... Hum jaante he aap humse gussa bhi he ki humne USS Karan ko bacha liya , or agar aap chahte to usse rusticate karwa sakte the lekin Aapne humare Mann Ka maan rakha or usse chhod Diya iske liye hum aapka shukriya ada Karte he or ab se hum usse door hi rahenge or agar aage se usne humare ya Kisi k bhi Saath Kuch galat Kiya to hum sabse pehle aapko hi batayenge. Please aap humse gussa mat rahiye Hume bilkul Accha nhi Lagta Hume daant lijiye baawri kahiye par Yun muh phula k chup mat bethiye Varna hum kahenge ki humare tauji bhi aise hi muh phula k gussa Karte he

please!

Aapki baawri

=================================

Vir smiles slightly (baawri BG plays )

And goes on in search of his baawri just then Pur hugs him from behind "ab maafi de bhi dijiye Varna Hume bhi aapka gulam banna padega 7 Dino tak" Vir turns , on seeing pur's innocent face his anger vanishes.

Vir: theek he par Tu manne yeh bata Tu kyu nhi chahti tere mukhiyain hone K baaree Kisi ko pata chale , kya tanne sharam aati he manne apna pati kehte hue ?

Pur places her hand on his mouth "nhi aisa bilkul bhi nhi he, aap to humara gurur he Hume fakr he ki hum VIRENDRA PRATAP SINGH ki patni he ! Par iss mukhiyain k title ki wajah se Hume dusre students k Saath ghulne Milne Ka mauka nhi milega. Ab sab yhi sochenge ki hum mukhiyain he or humse darenge na ki humare dost banenge.

Vir interupts her "par ye to sach he ki Tu mukhiyain he ab iska koi kya Kar Sakta he par jisse tera dost banna hoga vo tera saaf Dil dekhega naaki tere mukhiyain Ka status or aaj to tere college Ka pehla din tha abhi bohot time he tere dost banane k liye "

Pur: aap theek keh rhe he mukhi ji hum hi pagal ho gye the pata nhi kya kya soch rhe the

Vir : ye to me pehle din se hi keh rha hu ki Tu baawri he baawri...

Both smile, Pur gets emotional

Vir : ab k hua tanne ?

Pur : agar aaj aap nhi hote to...

Vir : aise kaise nhi Hota, me to humesha tere Saath hi hu

Pur stunned again , Vir also stunned after realising what he said . *Eyelock*

(Dhal jaun main)

{Tu kagazo pe Dil k Likha hua he tabse

Duniya mein me hu jabse yarra ....oooo

Tu Mera ho chuka he Dil phir bhi maangta he har lamha tujhko Rab se yaara }


Vir moves away but Pur holds his hand

(s- turn parallel) and hugs him tight Vir feels shivers down his spine and gulps

{Mera Tere Siva koi aur nahi Tu Na Hona khafa Kabhi mujhse....}


Pur:hum Aapke Saath khud ko surakshit mehsoos Karte he. Her soft voice was enough to break the shackles of his control as he buried his face in her shoulders and her chin, resting on his shoulder.

{Dhal jaun main tujhme....

Ghul jaun main tujhme....

Mil jaun main tujhme.......*2

Yaaraaa.....}

It was a whole new world as they take in the warmth of each other her hands clutching his shoulders and his arms all around her ....

Woah!!

Another beautiful part!

❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Part 3

At home family members show Thier concern for purvi and tell her to be cautious.

She is now mukhiyain of the village her every action influences the villagers as they look up to the MUKHIYA and MUKHIYAIN

Kids hug Pur and console her.

While Vir is still mad at Pur and ignores her Pur feels bad as he is not talking to her and leaves for Panchayat.

At night

Vir comes into the room exhausted n looks for Pur but she was not there, then he goes to the study area but she wasn't there too, " ib yeh baawri phir Kaha gyi... Just as vir prepares to leave he notices a note kept on his study...

==============================

Hume maaf Kar dijiye mukhi ji, hum jante Hain aaj humari wajah se aapko bohot Bura laga , Hume usko humari ragging Karne se rokna chahiye tha or hum sab Kuch jaante hue bhi uski baat maante gye humne yeh sab isiliye Kiya ki taaki college me Kisi ko humare mukhiyain hone Ka pata na chale par hum galat the... Hum jaante he aap humse gussa bhi he ki humne USS Karan ko bacha liya , or agar aap chahte to usse rusticate karwa sakte the lekin Aapne humare Mann Ka maan rakha or usse chhod Diya iske liye hum aapka shukriya ada Karte he or ab se hum usse door hi rahenge or agar aage se usne humare ya Kisi k bhi Saath Kuch galat Kiya to hum sabse pehle aapko hi batayenge. Please aap humse gussa mat rahiye Hume bilkul Accha nhi Lagta Hume daant lijiye baawri kahiye par Yun muh phula k chup mat bethiye Varna hum kahenge ki humare tauji bhi aise hi muh phula k gussa Karte he

please!

Aapki baawri

=================================

Vir smiles slightly (baawri BG plays )

And goes on in search of his baawri just then Pur hugs him from behind "ab maafi de bhi dijiye Varna Hume bhi aapka gulam banna padega 7 Dino tak" Vir turns , on seeing pur's innocent face his anger vanishes.

Vir: theek he par Tu manne yeh bata Tu kyu nhi chahti tere mukhiyain hone K baaree Kisi ko pata chale , kya tanne sharam aati he manne apna pati kehte hue ?

Pur places her hand on his mouth "nhi aisa bilkul bhi nhi he, aap to humara gurur he Hume fakr he ki hum VIRENDRA PRATAP SINGH ki patni he ! Par iss mukhiyain k title ki wajah se Hume dusre students k Saath ghulne Milne Ka mauka nhi milega. Ab sab yhi sochenge ki hum mukhiyain he or humse darenge na ki humare dost banenge.

Vir interupts her "par ye to sach he ki Tu mukhiyain he ab iska koi kya Kar Sakta he par jisse tera dost banna hoga vo tera saaf Dil dekhega naaki tere mukhiyain Ka status or aaj to tere college Ka pehla din tha abhi bohot time he tere dost banane k liye "

Pur: aap theek keh rhe he mukhi ji hum hi pagal ho gye the pata nhi kya kya soch rhe the

Vir : ye to me pehle din se hi keh rha hu ki Tu baawri he baawri...

Both smile, Pur gets emotional

Vir : ab k hua tanne ?

Pur : agar aaj aap nhi hote to...

Vir : aise kaise nhi Hota, me to humesha tere Saath hi hu

Pur stunned again , Vir also stunned after realising what he said . *Eyelock*

(Dhal jaun main)

{Tu kagazo pe Dil k Likha hua he tabse

Duniya mein me hu jabse yarra ....oooo

Tu Mera ho chuka he Dil phir bhi maangta he har lamha tujhko Rab se yaara }


Vir moves away but Pur holds his hand

(s- turn parallel) and hugs him tight Vir feels shivers down his spine and gulps

{Mera Tere Siva koi aur nahi Tu Na Hona khafa Kabhi mujhse....}


Pur:hum Aapke Saath khud ko surakshit mehsoos Karte he. Her soft voice was enough to break the shackles of his control as he buried his face in her shoulders and her chin, resting on his shoulder.

{Dhal jaun main tujhme....

Ghul jaun main tujhme....

Mil jaun main tujhme.......*2

Yaaraaa.....}

It was a whole new world as they take in the warmth of each other her hands clutching his shoulders and his arms all around her ....


Woooow soo beautifully written. Loved it ❤❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aise point pe koi rokta hai kya...😭


Jaldi continue kari pls...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Aise point pe koi rokta hai kya...😭


Jaldi continue kari pls...

sure 😊 aise hi to weekend katna he
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Posted: 4 years ago
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hey there beautifully written 👏

have read this 1-3 parts in one go and loved reading it❤️

y did you stopped😳

continue and write a bit long coz i want to read more 😛

loved the way purvi hugs him from behind and their sweet convo


waiting for the next part 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: PriAmAddiction

hey there beautifully written 👏

have read this 1-3 parts in one go and loved reading it❤️

y did you stopped😳

continue and write a bit long coz i want to read more 😛

loved the way purvi hugs him from behind and their sweet convo


waiting for the next part 😉

had ho gyi like not working 🤦

Mera like yeh rha ❤️

Will surely continue 😀

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 4

It was a whole new world as they take in the warmth of each other her hands clutching his shoulders and his arms all around her ....

Their hug was broken by a knock on the door

Servant: mukhi ji mukhiyain ji aapko kaane k liye bula rhe he.

Purvir separate out from each other quickly

Vir:Haan aa rhe he ,they both knew they had been caught red handed ,with their hearts beating at light speed purvir looked at eachother ,naked desire reflecting in Thier eyes. Vir: chale... Sab humara wait Kar rhe he

Pur: ha...an aap chaliye hum Aate he. Vir left...

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PURVI'S POV

Pur: checks herself in front of the mirror and places her hand on her right cheek which was now red hot coz of her blushing and smiles remembering the moment when she was lost in his embrace, that was the safest place she could ever be in. "Aaj humne mukhi ji ki aankho me Kuch dekha...aisa pehle Kabhi nhi hua...jab Hume Goli lagi thi tab bhi nhi...or unhone aaj humari fikar Kari, kitta darr gye the vo ki Hume kho na de...par unhone bachho Ka bahana kyu banaya...huh... suddenly she gets reminded of the dinner and prepares to leave but notices her messy hair, "arre purvi...Apne Baal to theek Kar sab kya sochenge or phir mukhi ji chidhayenge kaise bikhre bikhre Baal leke ghumti he" she fixes her hairs and went to the dinning area....

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VIR'S POV

While going downstairs "yeh manne kya ho gya tha... Kyu jab bhi purvi mere Aas pass Hoti he Mera khud pe kaabu nhi rehta

Kyu chillaya me uspe itna, he to vo abhi bhi 19 Saal ki hi... Nhi Mera uspe gussa karna bilkul theek tha aise kaise vo apni Jaan jokhim me daal Sakti he agar usse Kuch ho jaata to...nhi mukhi abhi yeh sab sochne Ka wakt nhi he neeche chal sab ko bhukka rakhega kya aaj " though he diverted his mind but his heart knew it was just a lame trick to protect his heart from Falling....APART!

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Both reach the dining table at the same time, where all the family members were staring them with a familiar look (except bhurjali- they were busy in putting themselves on fire) while purvi was clueless Vir knew what those looks decipher, when he and Sakshi were newly weds they used to give those looks every now and then, but what made them give those looks now ,Vir asked himself even though he knew the answer


Prakashi:Arre khadi kya he Vir k bagal me Beth aaj vrat liya he kya ?

Pur hesitantly sits next to Vir

Both of them hadn't gotten over that moment and still could smell each other's scent Purvir grabbed the rice bowl , vir's hand above pur's and they forgot everything

~~~eyelock~~~

The intensity was burning, suddenly mama Sarkar chokes INTENTIONALLY....purvir come back to senses still holding each other's hand .

Prakashi:arre Bhai Hume bhi Kuch khaane ko milega ya Sara Khana tum dono hi kha jaoge....

Manas: Haan haathi tum neeche kyu nhi aayi tumne aaj Mera favourite paneer banaya isiliye MERI bhook or badh gyi thi...

Vir: arre yo to sach me genda nikla...Kitna khaata he re..!(everyone is controlling Thier laughter )

Yogi: arre vo sab to thik he bhaiya pehle aap Bhabhi Ka haath to chhodiye !

Everyone bursts out laughing

vir immediately leaves pur's hand both look at eachother and then away at every corner of the house

MS: kya baat he yogi beta mauke pe chauka maarna koi tujhse seekhe !

Purvir are hell embarrassed ,

Pur: (blushing)hum abhi Aaye ! And ran to the kitchen

MS: sab bhul gye k mujhe khaasi aayi thi thodi Der pehle ja Vir mere liye paani le aa

Vir gives him a look MS : aise k Dekh rha he, mukhi to gao Ka he par aaj bhi bhanja he Tu Mera...ab jaa bhi mere dubara khasne Ka intezaar Kar rha he k?

Everyone laughs ...

Vir reluctantly goes while giving the same look to MS , he himself didn't knew what that look meant more -anger or embarrassment

All he could hear at that moment was the continuous laughter and mumbling.


In kitchen

Pur was breathing heavily, trying to control her blush which was quite evident on her face when Vir comes in... Pur gets shocked seeing him.

pur:aa....aap! Vir : to or kon hoga... Me..mama Sarkar k liye paani Lene Aaya tha

Vir while filling the jug glances at Pur who really looked a vision! Her rosy blushed cheeks adding even more grace to her look. Then only Pur comes close to him and holds his hand ...

Pur:Ye kya Kar rhe he aap dikhayi nhi de rha jug Bhar chuka he dhyan Kaha he aapka

Vir : tujhpe...

Pur: kya!

Vir(flustered): nhii... Mera matlab... yhi to tha dhyan Mera or Tu beech me kyu Koodi... me tere Tarah bawra na hu ..

Pur: par harkate to baawro Jaisi hi Kar rhe ho par koi baat nhi badti Umar k Saath insaan thoda sathyane Lagta he humare tauji bhi na...

Vir: tere tau ki to...(puts the jug aside and grabs Pur from her waist)

Pur : chhodiye Hume koi aa jayega !

Vir: nhi... Or k Kaha tanne me Sathya gya hu...sathyega tera vo khusad tau

Pur:Khabardaar Jo humare tauji ko Kuch Bola varna ...

Vir:(challenging) Varna k Kar legi Tu...hmmm

Pur glares at Vir while he smirks giving a winning smile just then Pur breaks free from his embrace, grabs the jug and splashes water on his face

Pur:(poking Vir)"ab Kaha gyi aapki smile ...hasiye ab"

Vir passionately pulls her close to him purvir have a nose touch Pur looks at vir's lips while Vir was looking into her eyes intensely (sexual tension on peak)

Water dripping from vir's hair on her forehead made her whole numb

Vir: ib hass k dikha and lifts her face up

On seeing Pur's mesmerized look Vir found his control slipping he stares at her lips while her eyes were fixated on his eyes... eyes full of desire....Pur couldn't take it anymore and closed her eyes Vir still staring.....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I read all the parts at one go...beautiful chapters ❤❤❤...


Plzzz updt soon...wanna if they ll kiss or not☺️😆🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow..what an update....☺️


Yeh dono kahin bhi shuru ho jaate hai...🤣


Haye Mera yogi....aise hi dialogue do use...

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