Ghum Hai Kisikey Pyaar Meiin

SAIRAT : ROSE DAY DRABBLE

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Posted: 3 years ago

HAPPY ROSE DAY:

Virat just entered his room and saw sai who is busy studying and moved near her. She looked up at him and raised her eyebrow in question, he just nodded in negative. He smiled at her and went to freshen up. He just returned back after 20 minutes and found sai still studying. He cleared his throat for attention.

Sai: boliye virat sir.

Virat: ek minute, (he moves to his cap and takes a rose which he hid under that) aaj rose day, Karishma ne Mohit se baath karthe time sunliya maine. (forwarding his hand towards her) yeh, tumhare liye.

Sai: yeh sab aapko karne ki jarurath nahi hain.

Virat: wo mujhe

Sai: sir mein samaj saktha hun, hamari shaadi ek samjauthahain ek deal.

Virat: sai mujhe sab yaad hain, bas tum suno.

Sai: hmm (nods) boliye

Virat: agar aaj rose day nahi toh bhi mujhe rose dekhkar tumharehi yaad aathi hain. Dekho tum rose ki tarah khubsurat hoh tum aur yeh jo kaantehain na uske tarah tum mein kuch flaws hain. (virat smiles) jo tumhe chubtahain aur hame bhi, lekin iss kaante ke bina yeh rose adhoora hain waise bhitum. Yeh tumhare liye,

Sai: (with a shy smile) thank you virat sir,

Virat: meine bhi ek baath samaj gaya; you yourself have been living with the thrones then why can’t I even try?

Sai: matlab

Virat: matlab mein tumhe apne dil ke paas rakhne chahtha hun, tum rose Jaise ho kaante hain chubte hain par wo chubna bhi acha lagtha hain. (with a mischievous smile and looked at her with hopeful eyes)

Sai saw Virat with a twinkle in her eyes; he handed over her the flower without breaking eye contact, virat for the first time in his life discovered, how overwhelmed heart feels like

“ dehaya maine chaand dekhaya;

Nora wala sitare dekhaya

Par tere jaisa koi dekheya nah

lagta hai nigaahon mein terii

bin Doobe rehna hi nahi

mujhe Ishq ye karne se

ab koi bhi na rok sakeya

O haareya main dil haareya

main haara tujhpe o..”

 

First, try so please ignore any mistakes and leave down valuable feedback.

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Posted: 3 years ago

I love the phool aur kaante analogies and deeper meanings! Great job . Please write more drabbles and some longer oneshots/FFs too.... 

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Posted: 3 years ago

wow its beautiful 

loved it 

do write more

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Posted: 3 years ago

beautiful ❤️ 

Continue writing 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome❤️


Pls write more

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: neeraja91

I love the phool aur kaante analogies and deeper meanings! Great job . Please write more drabbles and some longer oneshots/FFs too.... 


thank you

will definitely try to write more

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Fruitcustard_9

Awesome❤️


Pls write more

Thank you

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: linakusharberry

wow its beautiful 

loved it 

do write more

thank you

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: lobster_0000

beautiful ❤️ 

Continue writing 

Thank you

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful...


I am not fluent in hindi but what I did understand was very good...😊


Keep on writing...