Sampatra/ Sairat FF- Najwa (Heartburn). Chapter 11 UPDATED on page 18 - Page 5

Woww!!❤️...the way you have given equal importance to all the characters is phenomenal👍🏼 while reading this I realised there are soo many depressed soul in this house and the way Pakhi is shown to care about each of them 👏

It seems, Pakhi is the true hero of your story....never mind, the plot is excellent👍🏼

Originally posted by: Blackwind

Woww!!❤️...the way you have given equal importance to all the characters is phenomenal👍🏼 while reading this I realised there are soo many depressed soul in this house and the way Pakhi is shown to care about each of them 👏

It seems, Pakhi is the true hero of your story....never mind, the plot is excellent👍🏼

Not actually. I want Sai to live a care free life. She is eighteen. She is meant to enjoy her college life and MBBS needs a very strict discipline. She is not old enough to understand all these complicated feelings. Paakhi on the other hand is older and I wanted her to take that role so Sai lives how she is actually supposed to live

I liked the way she realised and took charge of her life

Hope Samrat comes soon

Waiting to see how he feels about all this

Brilliant

Absolutely heart warming plot you have here

With every update you leave us speechless

Members of chavan niwas supporting each other mainly pakhi encouraging people and having good intentions are so good

I would really like to have pakhi support sai just like in this chapter in show also but it seems like its not going to happen

But your story has given us people so many hopes and happiness

Your one update on this makes our day

Its good to see everyone be positive and take charge of their lives. I especially liked the Sairat parts. I like them too much as characters so even though this ff is pp centric i still enjoyed the sairat bits!

I dont know what today after reading this .

Its feels so realistic, her feelings, her pov , her expectations , her dreams . Sooo beautiful 😍

Kya samrat wapas aane ke bad use samajh payega ? Ye sab padh payega ? Aur wo kab wapas aayega ? Jaldi aa jaye bas , uski presence se bhot kuch change ho jayega .

Waiting for your next update

Plzz update soon ❤

In ❤️ with your OS. its nice to see woman supporting each other..in reality it never happens..😭

Originally posted by: chinnu_kaku

In ❤️ with your OS. its nice to see woman supporting each other..in reality it never happens..😭

In reality it happens. At least around me, I see supportive women. In TV there are too little examples of such women 🧐

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

In reality it happens. At least around me, I see supportive women. In TV there are too little examples of such women 🧐

but i am not lucky to get such support...

Originally posted by: chinnu_kaku

but i am not lucky to get such support...

May the Almighty give you strong support and make you supportive of others, when they are right. 🌷