Sampatra/ Sairat FF- Najwa (Heartburn). Chapter 11 UPDATED on page 18 - Page 4

Originally posted by: SonuRani

No way here looks like pakhi us lead but for me sai is lead so it should be sai centric.yes pakhi can change her view that is ok but not whole pakhi centric story I can't digest. I am watching show only for Sai character.

Ok. Your wish dear. You can watch the show. This story can’t change. Here the story focusses on both Sai and Paakhi.

No this story written very good interesting but I am saying about show means on TV there want only sai centric.😊

Beautiful update dear

Loved it

I really like this version of pakhi mature and understanding nomore dilutional

Do continue soon

Loved all the chapters!!!

Nice of Pakhi to make sensible choices and move forward in life...

All the youngsters of the house are bonding soo well!!!

Continue soon.... Waiting for samrat to return...

Happy writing!!

Wow! Wow! Wow! Just Wow!👏

This is such a beautiful FF! And it is much needed! I love the way you've written Pakhi here and I also love the fact that you're emphasizing more on her character arc. Samrat and Pakhi's story can be equally interesting and beautiful if explored properly, something I'm afraid the writers won't do

Do update soon! I can't wait to read more about SamRakhi now!

Also, a small suggestion. Can you please add an index right below the prologue, and mention which chapter is in which page, so that new readers find it easier to navigate??

Love,

Niya🤗

I am loving your Pakhi . I love Sai's character and Ayeshu in the serial but in this ff, Pakhi is quickly becoming my favourite.

Exactly what I meant when I said her story could be equal interesting, her thoughts, her loneliness etc if she's a parallel lead in the true sense , not a vamp that she's being shown. Yeh CN mansion drama se toh behtar hota.

Par nahi inko Pakhi ko total vamp bhi banana hai AND CN drama bhi bhar bhar ke dikhana hai

Beautiful❤️you are making me fall in love with your Pakhi😳loved the budding friendship between the almost three couples and their willingness to help each other out...I am sure it will grow more once Samrat returns and would even be more interesting to read😳 can't thank you enough for this wonderful piece🤗...hoping for another quick update

Awesome! I love character transition in pakhi. Looking forward to read next chapter.

I am in love with your writings

So good

So fresh

It makes our day

This pakhi is love❤

I wish the same for her

Kaash samrat hota uske saath

Seeing both the couples happy might have pinched her heart a little

I wish to see samrat soon

This is seriously beautiful loved it

Just the way we would imagine how a family should bond

And iam seriously loving this pakhi, sairat scenes karishma sab

Glad to see how they are supporting each other

Waiting for next update