CAPTIVE 2 UPDATED LAST PART ON PG 55 / 11-7-2021 - Page 11

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 3


Action Packed and so Thrilling Update


Maan been helpless and losing hope did not

for once forget that his friend should be there in the hospital

with Dadu while Maan goes to Handa Building searching Geet

certainly Maan proves his caliber in defending himself and showing

his fighting skills to all of Geet's guards .

Geet was impressed with Maan's skill however her brother was not

impressed at all but Geet shows her Bhai that the guards hired to

protect her cannot even stand against one man , Maan

Mr Handa is impressed too with Geet's choice of wanting Maan

to protect her

Maan however does not want a job but due to his Dadu's health

and the fact that Handa Hospital may be able to treat him

makes Maan agree to take the job but he also tells Geet

about his Dadu and she agrees to get him transferred to Handa Hospital

hope now the doctor can treat Dadu , even Geet's thoughts are

correct if anything happens to Dadu then Maan will not take

this job

but Dadu is also old and it maybe difficult , still I hoping

otherwise Maan will have no one

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update

Maans dadu is not in good health. He looses Geets card but knows where to find her. He reaches the handa office but the sercretary doesn't allow him as he doesn't hv appt but he tries to reache out to Geet but stopped by the security but he is so tough that all the bodyguards r lying lifeless. Then Geet tells her father that she has chosen Maan as her bodyguard

Geet moves his dadu to the handa hospital and to gv best treatment. She know that if anything happens to his dadu Maan will never work for her

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update.

Maan lost the geet card and now he is so desperate to meet her regarding her offer. For him only his grandfather health matters.

But meeting her was no so easy. He fought with everyone just to speak with her.

Geet dad is impressed with her as she proved that she made the right decision to choose him as her bodyguard.

She fulfilled her promise. Hope maan grandpa get well soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely update, at last Maan reached Geet and accepted her offer. I pray his grandfather should recover so their story can move forward. Or else by looking at Maan he will go back to his old life if anything goes wrong and their story will take ages to start again. By looking at the way geet’s father taking pride in geet, I feel it might be geets brother who is tried to get geet killed

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow!!!! what a terrific live demo Maan gave to Geet and her father, brother and unknowingly proved that he is the best for bodygaurd job and proved Geet right in her decision

Loved the way Geet was confident, smiled, knowing that the hulchul in building is creating by Maan who is trying to reach her

Loved and enjoyed the update so much

eagerly waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 3..


Interesting..

Maan can go to any extent for his dadu’s well being.

Geet is using his this weakness to make him agree to become her bodyguard.

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Posted: 4 years ago



PART - 4


Wait for pw...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 4

Wonderful update 👍🏼

Loved how you depicted maan’s vulnerable feelings so well 👏👏

..... he is such a tough guy ...,a street fighter but in the hospital he was like a lost child waiting for their parent

Which is understandable since his grandfather is the only family he has left so he is trying to hold onto him with his dear life

Absolutely loved the line where you compared his heart to a soft rose caged behind steel 👏👏👏

So happy that his grandfather survived the operation

Now maan has started his bodyguard position holding up his end of the deal

Excited to read more ...,

Thank you so much for pm & pw & update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing update.

Maan was very tensed for his dadu.

Geet was also tensed if dadu will b not stable then maan will not do her bodyguard job.

Maan have make himself strong for his dadu n take care of him like a baby as he have only this relation in a world.

Maan used to do jobs from small age n started to learn martial arts but in this process he become very strong by body but his heart remain like flower only.

It's good that his dadu is stable now.

Geet family were against her decision for maan to become her bodyguard as still have not report for duty but geet dad is with her.

Geet have made all arrangements for maan n his dadu stay n even when maan will absent.

Let c wht happen now.....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thnk for pm

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