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Posted: 5 years ago

how smart Jo tricked Jalal ๐Ÿคฃ. Sweet revenge for his dirty imaginatios and utterances ๐Ÿ˜†.

But she also felt sorry for him and she couldn't escape his charm

he shamelessly exploits his situation and Jo has to feed him. Heยดs disappointed about her Answer that she cares aobut him ยดcause sheยดs a doctor. and to his surprise she kissed him.

Sheยดs unable to resist his charm. she decides to enjoy the time with Jalal

Mirza has doubt of Jalals state of mind as he titled his wife very beautiful. Wait and watch Mirza ... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and Surya too. Jalal warned Surya to keep his fingers off Jo.

Now meeting of Jo an Surya seems inevitable. What wil happen when both meet... will Jo hide behind a mask? masquerade party... What will happen to her feelings?

I love their banter so much. Very well written Akshu ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ’•

another awesome part little sis ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

thank you for pm. hope, youยดre well

take care ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ParijatGirl

CHAPTER 18



"Momโ€ฆ Dadโ€ฆ we will go home noeโ€ฆ It seems my wife is too tired. She need a lot of energy for tonight." Said jalal with a mischievous glance at Jodha, while Jodha was only able to glare at Jalal.

Humayun who understands what Jalal means can only smile, which makes jodha shy in front of her in-laws.

"Be careful on the way ... take care of my daughter. Don't hurt her." said Hamida

"Dont worry mom, i will not hurt her mom ... I will do "slowly"..". Jalal replied meaningfully. Jodha who understands jalal's words only smiled mysteriously at jalal.

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When they reach their apartment, jalal hugs jodha from behind. Jodha is shocked by what jalal is doing. but jodha let jalal do whatever he want to.

"thanks sweetheart you want to help me to release this suffering, now from where should we start?." Asked jalal.

"Of course ... but before that I want you to freshen up first. I will also get freshen up then we will start" replied jodha shyly and Jalal went to his room happily.

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Jodha was making a drink.

"People said truth that if your stomach is "clean" then your "brain" will be clean too." jodha thinks as she puts something on jalal's drink.

After a few minutes, Jalal came out of his room with a fresh body after taking a shower while Jodha is sitting relaxed on the balcony of their apartment.

"What are you doing here sweetheart?"

"Of course waiting for my husband ... come and sit.." Jalal sat beside Jodha. Jodha gives the drink to jalal.

"drink ... after you finish it we will ......"jodha deliberately did not continue her words, she really wanted to teach jalal a lesson. They were busy chatting laughingly while drinking, and jalal got closer to Jodha.

"Jo ... I want.."

"Go on ..." replied jodha shyly .. while looking away in another direction. Jalal was about to kiss Jodha suddenly jalal felt something churning in his stomach.

"what happen Jalal ...?" asked Jodha pretending as she don't know anything.

"I ... I ... wait a minute." Jalal immediately ran to the bathroom. Jodha who saw the medicine reacting to Jalal laugh out loud.

"You deserve it jalal...hahaha ... that's the punishment if your brain is only filled with dirty imaginations !! hahaha .."

Jodha goes to meet Jalal pretending to be worried about Jalal's condition.

"Are you okay my husband. ???" asked jodha concerned, laughing silently.

".. yes ... you don't ... worry sweetheart."Jalal replied from behind the bathroom door.

"Alright .. call me if you need something."

"Yes, thank you..."

That night Jodha slept very soundly because she was satisfied by punishing jalal, while Jalal was very tortured because all night he kept coming and going to the toilet, his body became so weak.

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"Good morning, my husband, how are you ...? Does your stomach still hurt?" asked jodha while entering jalal's room...

"Don't worry. I'm not dead yet because of the drink you gave me if that's what you mean." jalal replied curtly to jodha, while jodha trying to hold back her laughter as hard as she could.

"If you want to laugh at me, please go on.. if that can make you satisfied." getting permission from Jalal, jodha without guilt immediately burst out laughing in front of Jalal, which made Jalal even more annoyed with Jodha.

"hahaha ... alright ... now let me check your condition." said Jodha while taking out some medical tools from her bag and continued "I've called dad, informed him that you will not come to work today because of illness."

"This is all because of you !!"

"It is your own fault that your brain is filled with dirty things." replied jodha no less fierce

"You have to take responsibility !!! You have to treat me until i get to recover. !!!" jalal orders.

"heuft ... okay ... I will call Moti now, informing her that I couldn't able today," replied Jodha.

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After informing moti, jodha goes to the kitchen to make porridge for jalal.

"Eat this porridge while it is still warm, you will recover soon," said Jodha while handing him the warm porridge.

"hey ... village girl don't you see my condition, I'm too weak to lift the spoon, so you have to feed me." Jalal ordered.

"What... you are really ..." jodha stop her words as jalal closed her mouth with his hands.

"Shshsh... don't you know I don't like my morning start with an argument. So don't be fussy, feed me or I don't want to eat."

With annoying face, Jodha also feeds Jalal even though she feels uncomfortable because jalal keeps staring at her.

"Now take this medicine, then rest."

"OK, doctor ... don't forget that tonight we will attend to Mirza's masquerade party." jalal remind jodha.

"You're still sick ... can't you just cancel your programme??" asked jodha

"You're worrying about me jodha?" asked jalal in surprise.

"I'm a doctor ... so it's natural that I'm worried about my PATIENT's condition ..." jalal was a bit disappointed by jodha's answer.

"I don't care !!! anyway tonight we will attend the party!!"

"Do whatever you want..." replied jodha annoyed, she was about to move from jalal's bed suddenly jalal pulled her hand until she lost her balance and fell on jalal.

"This is your punishment for making me lying helpless on the bed." said jalal hoarsely as he was about to kiss Jodha's lips, but shr immediately stopped his lips from approaching hers with her index finger.

"Remember the promise you made jalal ... you won't kiss me without my permission !!!"

"Then allow me to kiss you now, before I break my promise for the first time .."

" NO...!!!!" jodha replied firmly making jalal let go of jodha with sad face. Somehow jodha felt a bit sad when jalal let go of het.

"jaalaaaal ..." called jodha softly.

"Just go away from here... !!!" Said jalal angrily while turning his face. suddenly jodha turn his head to face her and kiss him. Jalal was surprised by jodha's sudden kiss but he immediately kissed her back. they mutually give each other warmth in the morning with a sweet kiss. They stopped their hot kiss because they were out of breath.

"get well soon" said jodha as she moved away from jalal's bed.

"thanks for the "medicine" sweetheart..." said jalal before jodha disappeared from his eyes.

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Every time jodha wants to build a wall between herself and jalal, he always collapse it by coming near her. She is unable to resist his charm, even though she knows that in the end she will be the one who get hurt again but for now she just wants to enjoy the time with jalal until this marriage end according to the agreement that has been agreed.

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"SURYA.. is everything ready ??" Mirza asked his cousin.

"Yes, everything is done completely .." replied surya.

"Mirzaaaa ...." someone called Mirza from behind him.

"jalaaaaal ...." Mirza said while hugging Jalal.

"Hi ... surya how are you?" said jalal.

"fine Jalal ..You came alone ?? where is your wife ?? "asked surya.

"Soon she will come.. this afternoon there was an emergency that need a experience doctor so she went there" Jalal explained

"your wife is a doctor?" asked surya and Mirza in unison.

"Yes, my wife is a doctor... a very beautiful doctor" said jalal proudly.

"beautiful??? Are you sure Jalal ?? You're not suffering from amnesia right?? "Mirza asked with confused because he remembered Jodha's face which not included in the beautiful category.

"beautiful ... very beautiful ..." replied jalal while imagining jodha's face and continued "later I will introduce my wife to you surya." Said jalal.

"Really ... Aren't you afraid if your wife fall for me??" Surya teases Jalal.

"If you dare to do that then I'll chop you up !!!" replied jalal chuckling in response to surya's joke.

"I can't wait to see your wife who has fascinated you." said surya. For some reason jalal suddenly felt uncomfortable with surya's words.

"what is the name of your wife Jalal?" asked surya.

"Jo........"

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FORGIVE ME FOR SPELLING AND GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES.....

THANK YOUUU๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’•

Nice updateโค

Jallu's double meaning ๐Ÿคฃ bechara jalal but good punishment from jodha๐Ÿ˜œ

Thank good jodha gave 'medicine' to jalal...party and surya๐Ÿ™„ but you left on the most awaited part๐Ÿ˜ก but koi ni...waise when is the next update??

Eagerly waiting......update soon and thnx for pm

Best regards,

Ananya!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it dear

Awesome part ๐Ÿ™‚

I really loved how Jalal is trying every possible way to break the wall which Jodha had built around her

I was laughing hard when Jodha gave him a pill ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ poor Jalal

Hmm ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„ I hope Jalal is going to take Jodha out of her fears

So another party this is going to be interesting

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon๐Ÿ™‚


Thank you didi๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Soso70

how smart Jo tricked Jalal ๐Ÿคฃ. Sweet revenge for his dirty imaginatios and utterances ๐Ÿ˜†.

But she also felt sorry for him and she couldn't escape his charm

he shamelessly exploits his situation and Jo has to feed him. Heยดs disappointed about her Answer that she cares aobut him ยดcause sheยดs a doctor. and to his surprise she kissed him.

Sheยดs unable to resist his charm. she decides to enjoy the time with Jalal

Mirza has doubt of Jalals state of mind as he titled his wife very beautiful. Wait and watch Mirza ... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and Surya too. Jalal warned Surya to keep his fingers off Jo.

Now meeting of Jo an Surya seems inevitable. What wil happen when both meet... will Jo hide behind a mask? masquerade party... What will happen to her feelings?

I love their banter so much. Very well written Akshu ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ’•

another awesome part little sis ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

thank you for pm. hope, youยดre well

take care ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜˜

Thank you sissy๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Mango_1

Nice updateโค

Jallu's double meaning ๐Ÿคฃ bechara jalal but good punishment from jodha๐Ÿ˜œ

Thank good jodha gave 'medicine' to jalal...party and surya๐Ÿ™„ but you left on the most awaited part๐Ÿ˜ก but koi ni...waise when is the next update??

Eagerly waiting......update soon and thnx for pm

Best regards,

Ananya!!

Thank you ananya๐Ÿ˜Š... next update will be on wednesday or Thursday๐Ÿ˜

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Mango_1

Nice updateโค

Jallu's double meaning ๐Ÿคฃ bechara jalal but good punishment from jodha๐Ÿ˜œ

Thank good jodha gave 'medicine' to jalal...party and surya๐Ÿ™„ but you left on the most awaited part๐Ÿ˜ก but koi ni...waise when is the next update??

Eagerly waiting......update soon and thnx for pm

Best regards,

Ananya!!

Please do not quote the message

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Please do not quote the message

Sure diii....sorry for inconvenience ๐Ÿ˜ฅ

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wow nice update

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Posted: 5 years ago

is surya the blast from past....๐Ÿ˜ฒ


please post next part quickly

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you didi๐Ÿ˜Š

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