Tu Zaruri Sa Hai Zinda Rehne K Liye- A RudhiTa OS

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Goshhh Ayeshaaaa...โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—

It's sooooooooo beautiful....๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Love you for this OS.. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

You're an amazing writer dear..


I loved the part that Ani realized he's in love with kiddo bonu itself.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ dunno show mein milega ya nehi.. But yaha mil gaya.. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ How ani was hairan pareshan seeing shant Bondita.. ๐Ÿ˜† He just loved his kutark karnewali, khurafati ideas dene wali, kamar pe haat rakh ke jhagra karnewali, sabpe hukum chalanewali kiddo wifey.. โค๏ธ

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Originally posted by: Shrabana99

Goshhh Ayeshaaaa...โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—

It's sooooooooo beautiful....๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Love you for this OS.. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

You're an amazing writer dear..


I loved the part that Ani realized he's in love with kiddo bonu itself.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ dunno show mein milega ya nehi.. But yaha mil gaya.. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ How ani was hairan pareshan seeing shant Bondita.. ๐Ÿ˜† He just loved his kutark karnewali, khurafati ideas dene wali, kamar pe haat rakh ke jhagra karnewali, sabpe hukum chalanewali kiddo wifey.. โค๏ธ


Awwww!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒThankkkks buddy! I am so glad you liked it... ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜ณ I knoww its a little OTT but chalta hai..kher hai.. ๐Ÿ˜†

Yea naa... Aniruddh bechara tension mien aagya ke begum ko hua kia hai aakhir... ๐Ÿ˜†

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Congo Doc for successfully posted the OS. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Yet to read, I will be back to read it. ๐Ÿค—

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This is so beautiful. But I want to read more.


โ€œAbhi tumhien nahi bata sakta Bondita ke tum kia ho mere liye. Lekin aik din zarur bataon ga... Uss din ka intizar kerun ga mien...โ€


What will happen after she grows up? When will the day come when Anirudh will confess his true feelings?

Can I request you to write atleast another part of this story please?

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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Congo Doc for successfully posted the OS. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Yet to read, I will be back to read it. ๐Ÿค—


Haha... thankss... ๐Ÿค—

Sure, take your time.. Will wait for your comments... ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Damnnn girl, i was always a silent reader but your OS compelled me to comment!

I loved how innocent yet subtle romantic this story was.โค๏ธ

The title is so apt!

Pata nahi show me ye sab kab dekhne ko milega but ye pardhke dil garden garden hogayaa! โค๏ธ

Would love to read more from you, please write a romantic sequel to this one. ๐Ÿค—

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Originally posted by: Nupur_5

This is so beautiful. But I want to read more.


โ€œAbhi tumhien nahi bata sakta Bondita ke tum kia ho mere liye. Lekin aik din zarur bataon ga... Uss din ka intizar kerun ga mien...โ€


What will happen after she grows up? When will the day come when Anirudh will confess his true feelings?

Can I request you to write atleast another part of this story please?


Aww..๐Ÿค— Thank you yar... Thats so sweet of you to feel like reading more from me... ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜Š

As for your request... hmmm... I will think about it...theek hai? ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Actually, I am not so keen on writing episodic stuff.. mostly i just write one-shots. Simple and single story for one agenda at a time. But I will see if I can manage to write something else in this arc... ๐Ÿ˜Š

The thing is that we all know that when she grows up, they will have an amazing husband-wife relationship. A lot of wonderful ffs on this forum already address the point where she has grown up and now realizing her feelings and going through all that stuff.

What I am most interested to write in are topics that should happen in the present timeline. When she is little. Iss time per jo sab kuch hona chahiye mere hisab se aur jo makers kabhi nahi dikhayein ge, I prefer to write more on those things... ๐Ÿ˜Š

But I will definitely consider your request and try to come up with something for you. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Ayesha๐Ÿค—

Kitna pyaara OS likha hai yaar!!

I always thgt HM track ke baad hoga aisa kuch..but show mein mila nahi dekhne..

U have described bon ka attitude change & ani's observations so beautifully !!

Sansaar wala line & ani ka humorous reply was so cute

Aise hi likhte raho๐Ÿ˜†

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