Tu Zaruri Sa Hai Zinda Rehne K Liye- A RudhiTa OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Yush001

Damnnn girl, i was always a silent reader but your OS compelled me to comment!

I loved how innocent yet subtle romantic this story was.❤️

The title is so apt!

Pata nahi show me ye sab kab dekhne ko milega but ye pardhke dil garden garden hogayaa! ❤️

Would love to read more from you, please write a romantic sequel to this one. 🤗

Areyyy! 🤗Thank you thank you buddy. I am so happy that you found my writing powerful enough to come out and interact with me..🤗

Thanks a lot.

Also, I dont think we will ever see any touchy feely scenes between our cast in the show... 😆 Isi liye tou mien aisi cheezon ke baray mien likhty rehty hun. 😆 Yar, you can check out my OS on her menstruatio track and another one jo abhi kuch din pehle likha tha during the Greenwood Mini competition track... 😊 Batana kaise lagay woh bhi.. Buray acchay jo bhi comments hon,I welcome them all.. 😊 I feel they play an important role in my personal growth as a writer.

❤️

About the title... yea na... its so beautiful! Its actually a song by Sunidhi chauhan and Sharib Sabri... ❤️

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Areyyy! 🤗Thank you thank you buddy. I am so happy that you found my writing powerful enough to come out and interact with me..🤗

Thanks a lot.

Also, I dont think we will ever see any touchy feely scenes between our cast in the show... 😆 Isi liye tou mien aisi cheezon ke baray mien likhty rehty hun. 😆 Yar, you can check out my OS on her menstruatio track and another one jo abhi kuch din pehle likha tha during the Greenwood Mini competition track... 😊 Batana kaise lagay woh bhi.. Buray acchay jo bhi comments hon,I welcome them all.. 😊 I feel they play an important role in my personal growth as a writer.

❤️

About the title... yea na... its so beautiful! Its actually a song by Sunidhi chauhan and Sharib Sabri... ❤️

You're welcome! 😃

@Bold - very truee.👍🏼

Yes i've heard this song.

Btw can you give me a link of your previous works so that i can read them.

Ayesha,sorry if you think it's too long and hyperbolic,

But I can't help but admit that for me ,you are a writer in the truest sense of it,a writer who makes me enter a state of trance and half hypnotic state out of inexpressible pleasure .I just read your OS,it was real,it was deep!

If I am to describe how I was feeling while processing each and every sentence that evoked magic,I'd falter outright!

I felt caffeinated, addicted and vulnerable!I'm a voracious reader and can read and drown into them,I'm not used to fall for simple writings and creations.If you are reading this Aysh,trust me I attained salvation !

I had never expected this kind of a breathtaking original ,which was eliciting a heightened level of profundity, intensity, love and emotions in each exclusive word ,in a platform like this!

You're a phenomenal writer,you deserve a lot of appreciation, love and fame ,here and outside this forum!

Thank you very much!May God bless you.

Hi Ayesh🤗

It’s a very lovely and beautiful os 😍❤️

It’s an innocent yet romantic one !! If makers ever decided to reveal the truth regarding ani Bon’s marriage(when Bon is still child), I hope they follow the story similar to your os
Really a very good job 🤗

Ayesha!

This was soooo beautiful! I loved reading this

I always spoke about Ani's platonic love for young Bon but your story described it so amazingly. I am in awe 🥺

Itna ache se likha hai tumne ki mere paas words kam hai explain karne ko... Tum samajh jaao ki mai Kitna khush hi yeh padh ke

Damn Girl! You need to write more of these..!

Originally posted by: Yush001

You're welcome! 😃

@Bold - very truee.👍🏼

Yes i've heard this song.

Btw can you give me a link of your previous works so that i can read them.

Heyy buddy... sorry for the late reply.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/barrister-babu/5195862/the-invincibles-a-rudhita-os

This is the link to my previous OS... Iske ander hi shuru mien you will find the link to the menstruation one.

🙂 Hope you like them too.. 😳

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Ayesha,sorry if you think it's too long and hyperbolic,

But I can't help but admit that for me ,you are a writer in the truest sense of it,a writer who makes me enter a state of trance and half hypnotic state out of inexpressible pleasure .I just read your OS,it was real,it was deep!

If I am to describe how I was feeling while processing each and every sentence that evoked magic,I'd falter outright!

I felt caffeinated, addicted and vulnerable!I'm a voracious reader and can read and drown into them,I'm not used to fall for simple writings and creations.If you are reading this Aysh,trust me I attained salvation !

I had never expected this kind of a breathtaking original ,which was eliciting a heightened level of profundity, intensity, love and emotions in each exclusive word ,in a platform like this!

You're a phenomenal writer,you deserve a lot of appreciation, love and fame ,here and outside this forum!

Thank you very much!May God bless you.

Ohh my God!!! I am soo happy to see your comment buddy... 🤗 And you have praised my writing and my OS so much... i am so glad!🤗❤️ I am actually in a state of awe...I am amazed that someone would love my writing so much! You just made my day buddy. Thank you soo much...sach mien...dil se.❤️

Lots of love to you for such a heartfelt comment...

Originally posted by: Toto123

Ayesha🤗

Kitna pyaara OS likha hai yaar!!

I always thgt HM track ke baad hoga aisa kuch..but show mein mila nahi dekhne..

U have described bon ka attitude change & ani's observations so beautifully !!

Sansaar wala line & ani ka humorous reply was so cute

Aise hi likhte raho😆

Awww buddy... 🤗 Thank you so much for such a sweet comment. ❤️ I am so glad that you liked my OS...

I knoww... I was expecting Bon to genuinely go into Post traumatic stress for all that she had to endure during the HM track... lekin wahan tou makers ne aise act kia as if Bon and Ani have completely forgotten something so horrible! And yar...Juvenile Depression or Depression in children is an actual thing. Hota hai bacchon ko bhi.. Mager humari Bon ko tou super-kid bana ker chhoda hai makers ne.. 😆 Kher I dont really mind that either... becoz I love my strong bondu... aur ITV mien tou waise bhi heroine ki kuch extra glorification hoty hi hai... 😆 So its okay... Lekin hum apne dil ko khush kerne ke liye apne write ups mien tou likh sakte haina yeh sab... 😆 Tou bass... wohi koshish rehty hai meri...

Originally posted by: nims23

Hi Ayesh🤗

It’s a very lovely and beautiful os 😍❤️

It’s an innocent yet romantic one !! If makers ever decided to reveal the truth regarding ani Bon’s marriage(when Bon is still child), I hope they follow the story similar to your os
Really a very good job 🤗

Heyyy Nima... 🤗 Thank you soo much buddy for your lovely comment.

Yar I dont think they will dwell a lot on Bon's emotions. They didnt even let her go into a teeny weeny bit of PTSD after the HM track. She is never shown even recalling that time...and she is never shown to discuss it with Aniruddh. So clearly, the makers are not very keen to focus on her emotional growth and journey. I wont be surprised if one day she ends up telling Aniruddh how much she loves him just like that... 😆 Taaliyan bajatay bajatay bulwa dein uss se, koi pata nahi hai... 😆

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Ayesha!

This was soooo beautiful! I loved reading this

I always spoke about Ani's platonic love for young Bon but your story described it so amazingly. I am in awe 🥺

Itna ache se likha hai tumne ki mere paas words kam hai explain karne ko... Tum samajh jaao ki mai Kitna khush hi yeh padh ke

Damn Girl! You need to write more of these..!

Awwww Akshata...❤️🤗 You are soo sweet. Thank you so much buddy for trying to help me out to post this OS in the first place, and then appreciating it so much.. 😳🤗

I am glad you liked the picture of love that I painted. I was afraid people may not be able to connect with it... 😳