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The whole SS was really sweet and cute Hunn...specially the ending....loved it thoroughly, please write a new one soon..😊

The episode of the intruder and JB in Jai office was so funny… Bani really believed that it's the end of the world… She is so innocent and cute…

Jai and Bani gain met in wedding… Here also there is an intruder… Haila…. But this time he was handed over to the police…

Massi has played match maker and Jai proposed to Bani… so sweet… Hope they are happily married with no more intruders breaking into their lives…..

Waoh… That's a beautiful and sweet story….

that was an awesome ff keep it up
luv
Rachna
xoxox

janu_2006
hey kamy
lovely ending
THANKS JAANU 😊
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nema123
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What a wonderful romantic story....Kamy... just loved it... & nbsp;
THANKS NEMA
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nikita28


Hi Kamy,

Wonderful story, I really enjoyed reading it.

Nikita

THANKS I AM GLAD U LIKED IT.
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ridhijai


Awesome part.
loved it.
Bani and intruders....Jai Walia the hero to save her
awwww...what a straight forward marriage proposal...liked it

THANKS RIDHI......
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*Guli*
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haila that was soooo cute! THANKS

gosh if only i can say plz cont soon!! PLS YAAR DON'T SAY THAT I WOULDN'T KNOW WHAT TO WRITE NEXT 😉
I AM GLAD U LIKED THIS SHORT STORY (NOT SO SHORT) THANK U ALL THE SILENT READERS COME ON YAAR ONCE IN A WHILE U CAN BREAK UR SILENCE 😊
LOVE
KAMY 😊 😊

Originally posted by: tam2

short and sweet...
it was indeed a very nice story...

Gr8 work ....

👏 👏 👏

THANKS YAAR

nishiraju Groupie Joined: 14 May 2007 Location: Spain Gender: Female Posts: 169	Posted: 23 October 2007 at 12:32am | IP Logged very well done ...... 👏 ....lovely ....... 😛 ... thanks hope to get more from u ( romantic one ) 😉 ( i'll write😉 i write only romantic stories i am a sucker for good clean romance 😆)
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khushboo2006 Goldie Joined: 29 November 2006 Location: Canada Gender: Female Posts: 2708	Posted: 23 October 2007 at 12:34am | IP Logged What a wonderful ending to a lovely SS. Hope you would come up with another one soon. Thanks Kamy. Great job. 👏 thank u kushboo
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btkr Goldie Joined: 23 August 2006 Location: United States Gender: Female Posts: 1576	Posted: 23 October 2007 at 2:15am | IP Logged Very sweet ending... 👏 👏 👏 thanks bt😃
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pooks Senior Member Joined: 13 October 2005 Location: Pakistan Gender: Female Posts: 799	Posted: 23 October 2007 at 7:50am | IP Logged Kamy, dil khush hogaya 😊 caught up with parts 2 and 3. Loved when the intruder came into Walia Industries and Bani fought for him in front of Jai 😆 with Jai retorting back with his sarcastic one liners...and then their chance second meeting at the party was an eye opener with Jai's massi figuring out that Bani was the girl who Jai had met on the rainy day and Jai trying to keep his Massi at bay 😆 😆 😆 But the best was when Jai again came to Bani's rescue and then later told her his true feelings. On the whole, it was a sweet love story with mixture of laughter, sarcasm and all the works. 👏 thank u pooky i was wondering why i had not seen ur feed backs earlier. pakistan mein sab kuch teek heina...
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the_rain Goldie Joined: 26 March 2007 Location: Bangladesh Gender: Female Posts: 1433	Posted: 23 October 2007 at 8:03am | IP Logged The whole SS was really sweet and cute Hunn...specially the ending....loved it thoroughly, please write a new one soon..😊 thank u rain... i am glad u all liked the ending i wa little apprehensive.... another one sooon😉 __________________ ** Banner Signatures viewable to members only with Video Avatar and Signature Banner options set **
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nandita1209 Senior Member Joined: 07 September 2007 Location: India Gender: Female Posts: 211	Posted: 23 October 2007 at 8:04am | IP Logged The episode of the intruder and JB in Jai office was so funny… Bani really believed that it's the end of the world… She is so innocent and cute… i am glad that u guys did find it funny. i was actually wondering why no one mentioned it earlier...😕 Jai and Bani gain met in wedding… Here also there is an intruder… Haila…. But this time he was handed over to the police… (If bani was not hurt she would have invited him to the party unforutantley he frightened her to death.😉) Massi has played match maker and Jai proposed to Bani… so sweet… Hope they are happily married with no more intruders breaking into their lives….. 😆😆 Waoh… That's a beautiful and sweet story…. thank u nandita __________________ With love, Nandita
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aarwen_193 Senior Member Joined: 26 August 2005 Location: Kenya Gender: Female Posts: 317	Posted: 23 October 2007 at 9:24am | IP Logged that was an awesome ff keep it up luv Rachna xoxox _thanks aarwen_________________ ** Banner Signatures viewable to members only with Video Avatar and Signature Banner options set **

A very sweet short story... 😛 Well done... 👏 Will be waiting for your next FF... 😉

Nice story.. no hanky panky stuff.. no carried away moment.. 😊

haila what a romantic story 😳 😳 ,gr8 job 👏 👏 👏