CAPTIVE MG OS UPDATED PART ON PG 1/ 15-11-2020 - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Madhu_31

Commented on blog!

Lol I thought this is an OS with only one part and the story has ended !Silly me😆

Glad that there will be another part💃

🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 Maine kab kaha baby main next part dungi... Ye Complete OS tha... No more parts

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Maan was forced to compromise with his principles for the sake of his grandfather. Why did the goons want Geet? What will they do with her? Maan has felt nothing for her for now. But I think he will start feeling guilty soon. Will he get a chance to find out Geet's story and maybe rescue her?

Geet is a fighter. Hope she gets out of her situation.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 Maine kab kaha baby main next part dungi... Ye Complete OS tha... No more parts

Seeing PART 1in the title I thought there will be Part 2!🤔Got confused!Sry di!😒

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Maan is not kidnapper he blackmailed to do this work otherwise he risk his own life to earn money not other's

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Commented on blog dear....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhu_31

Seeing PART 1in the title I thought there will be Part 2!🤔Got confused!Sry di!😒

Oh my mistake.... Let me correct that...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely story, maan is putting his life in danger for his grandpa’s treatment and he was blackmailed to kidnap geet by the goons. Thank god that he was not so cruel to agree for the ransom but agreed because of his grandpa. Now geet is with the goons will he save her or watt next.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Sorry for d late post as I m still out of station I took time to read it .

Story is superb maan kidnapped geet for his Grandfather s treatment though he is not bad person but circumstances make any person bad and people see them in a bad light .Geet is Rich so maan did this superb

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Sorry for late commenting as I was out of town

Shocking Update

Maan kidnapped Geet and kept her captivated as his own grandfather was captive in goon,s custody, Maan was helpless and handover Geet to the goons, poor Geet pleading him to save her but he could not, now when his grandfather is safe with him he should do something to save Geet

Really want to read the next part

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Happy Diwali to u

Sorry m a little late

Nice start to the OS

Maan is a street fighter and has only his dadu

Some goons r keeping an eye on him as they want their work done thru him. They kidnap his dadu. Maan kidnaps Geet the handa princess

She tries to escape but her attempts turn futile in front of him.

The goons cone hands him money for the work done & returns his Dadu. But Maan sees her & feels for her but cannot do anything as he has his grandfather to look after. But who r thegoons & why they kidnap Geet

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