CAPTIVE MG OS UPDATED PART ON PG 1/ 15-11-2020 - Page 3

Happy Diwali to you and your family

A Refreshing OS

Maan grew up in the slums , he is poor and in desperate

need of funds while Geet is rich and wow she has attitude

and she is a strong woman

Maan's trait is street fighting where he earns money

and his grandfather seems not to approve of it

I think its because Maan always comes home badly injured

but Maan needs the money for his grandfather's treatment

and when some goons threatened the life of his grandfather

Maan had to kidnap Geet staging an accident

I actually liked Geet's attempts to escape and stand up whenever

she could to Maan

though Maan gets paid for handing Geet over to the goons

but he did not want to get involved in kidnapping and

it almost seems like Geet has some faith in her kidnapper that

he can save her from these goons

Maan's only path is for his grandfather , so I do wonder

if given the chance would he save her

Happy Diwali & Happy New Year!!

Maan kidnapped Geet. But he not wants to do but they captured his grand parent. Maan do anything to earn money. Geet try to escape many times. Now Maan hand over Geet to them. How he save from them.

Maan kidnaped geet inorder to save his dadu n takes money from goons but who r they y they want geet ? Really want to know plz di gave 2nd part of the os will maan save her or let the goons to take geet away

Thnk for pm di update soonnnn

Maan is totally a different person here...

He kidnapped geet & hand overed her to goons... Those goons freed his grandpaa...

He's doing everything for his dadaji...

Happy diwali 🌟 nice start. Reading maan has goon is something thrill. Excited

Nice update..

Commented on blog dear..

Congratulations for the new story.

Nice start. Maan kidnapped geet as these two men tricked him. Only for the sake of his grandfather that he did it. Hope he will soon save geet from these guys.

Eager to know how he will do it.

Nice update Di.

Maan is a street fighter and Geet is a Handa princess two poles apart one is from a palace and the other is of a slum. But Maan's reflexes and survival skills are really impressive and Geet is not less at least she tried to fight for her freedom and not sitting there crying on her fate.

But now the question is that what will happen to Geet now that Maan has handover Geet to the main kidnappers...

Waiting for more of the story. Nice concept Di.

❤

Short but intriguing. Maan kidnapped geet for his grandfather and left her to the kidnappers hands. Hope there is another part, i want him to save her and search the reason behind her kidnapping . Thank you for the pm and happy Diwali ❤️

Commented on blog!

Lol I thought this is an OS with only one part and the story has ended !Silly me😆

Glad that there will be another part💃