Riansh TS : Taaron ki sheher (Part 02 : Updated on page 3) - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Wynn

Brilliant...can see something like that happening in show


That would be fun if the story goes the way I am planning to do it. But if there is only hatred I don't know how long we can continue 🙄

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meena_J

wow ...nice & quite intense...riddhima is feeling guilty for her actions influencing vansh so much that it was metamorphosed vansh into a monster ...nice ...do continue dear


Thank you for loving it so much 💕

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Awesome...

Continue soon...


Thank you will be updating in few hours

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

Do continue soon dear. Ridhima kind deserved this hatred from him. Yet, we cannot see her still has a fragile doll. Looking forward to the majestic appearance of her. Does everyone in the VR Mansion know what Ridhima did?


Well I purposely not going to add the the family drama in here. It will only stretch the story. Keeping it to just Vansh and Riddhima. But yes, I can add a line or two if the story permits

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manisha_IF

Wowwwww❤️

Jaldi AP ka sach samne aa jaye bas...


It will ♥️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aaah my lawrd!!! This is so intense!!!

Uffff!!! Pure 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Continue soooonish.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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In vansh's words the story is interesting very interesting 🤣....update soon dear m eagerly waiting for the next part...thank you☺️

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Part - 02


Warning : It's a long chapter. I didn't guess it will be this long. I could have split it into two but decided against it as it will ruin the flow. Also this is 16+


The vibration in Riddhima’sphone woke her up. Did she cried herself to sleep on the floor? Vansh would bereally angry, kya karti hain to Riddh….her train of thoughts stopped right there as she remembered their current circumstance. He wouldn’t know. She smiled at her stupidity. But the vibration on her phone broke her revere again and suddenly she realized why she woke up in the very first place. She cursed herself and picked up the phone at once. There is a message.

“The car is outside. Get down in 10minutes” all it said.


Riddhima takes a look at herself and cursed again. She looks like a ghost. She can not be going like this. She takes out the first thing came to her hand from the wardrobe and rushes to the washroom. Quickly washing her face she changes into the saree and hastily comes out. She can not be late. Every minute is important. She takes a look outside. No one can enter or get out of her room without the notice of the guards kept at her door. Yes, Vansh ensured she lives in a cage. With 24*7guards guarding the door of her room. And then there is CCTV footage that is directly connected to Vansh phone. No more losing footage. Vansh learned it in hard way. She can not even go out without asking a written permission from Vansh. Only time she is allowed to go out when Vansh destroys something dear to her and want to witness her the destruction. Sometimes a stroll around the house is her only way of going out nowadays. But the hatred she sees in the eyes of others makes her come back to her room immediately. Not that she cared much about them but it’s Dadi’s hatred towards her that hurts her most.

Bappa, please fix everything as soon as possible. I can not stay like this anymore.’ Sending a silent prayer Riddhima went towards the furthest corner of the room. No one knows but this special guest room has a secret door to the basement that leads to outside. Riddhima took off and reached outside in few minutes. As per the message the car was at the back. She took a look at the surroundings and quickly get into the car.


After a 30min drive she reached her destination. It was a farmhouse at the farthest corner of the city and quite isolated. She knows her way around here and quickly entered the house and went straight to the room she knows he would be.

You are late” was the first thing he said without even glancing backwards.

Sorry , I had to change” Riddhima replied

Why didn’t you change before when you knew we will be meeting tonight. What were you doing?” came his question.

I was…actually… I slept. I was tired

Don’t lie Riddhima” the room boomed with his baritone voice. “Can’t you see where we are due to all the lies told in past?

Riddhima flinched sensing the iciness in his tone. Before she could move he turned and came towards her. “You cried yourself to sleep,right?”

Riddhima sighed. Nothing can be hidden from him. “Listen to me, it’s nothing. I was just upset about the whole situation. Aisa kuch nahi hain” Riddhima tried to reason.

“Kitni bar kaha hain tumhari ek ek anshu mere liye bohot kimti hain Riddhima” Vansh uttered each and every word clearly for her to listen.


Na chain se jeene degi, Na chain se marne degi

Na chain se jeene degi, Na chain se marne degi


They both looked at each other with hurt and pain in their eyes as they both remembered the dreadful day. Day that Ragini died and Siya slipped into coma. Day that they got separated. Day that turned their lives upside down.

Vansh couldn’t handle it anymore and kicked the nearest tool around him to take out his frustration. Riddhima tried to console him.

Vansh calm down. We are very near to our goal. We can’t lose now. Everything will be fine


“How Riddhima how? Every day I see the woman walking healthy in front of me who not only killed my mother but also pushed Siya into the coma. How can I stay calm seeing you in pain everyday. How can I keep a straight face knowing it was Kabir who has been harming you all these days and still trying to kill you so that he can frame me. How can I Riddhima how can I ? “ Vansh screamed at top of his voice and fell on his knees


Each and every word is much known to Riddhima yet the pain is unbearable like everytime for past two months. She can’t see Vansh being so broken and vulnerable. She swore again to punish Anupriya and Kabir till their death. Even then it won’t compensate the pain they have given to their Vansh. Riddhima kneeled beside Vansh and spoke

Vansh I am sorry. I am so so sorry. This is all because of me. Only if I trusted you. Only if I didn’t believe Kabir’s word then….

At once Vansh looked up with anger seething from his eyes. He grabbed Riddhima’s face and pulled her closer. “Never. Ever. Take. His. Name. With. Your. Mouth. In. Front. Of. Me.”Vansh emphasized each and every word.

I might have forgiven you but you are not allowed to be associated with him anyway. You are mine Riddhima. Just mine” Vansh said in dangerously low voice.


Even if Riddhima got scared seeing the intensity she decided not to act upon it. Only she knows what it cost to make Vansh believe in her. She sent a silent prayer for Siya, who before falling into coma left a voice message for Vansh telling every truth about Anupriya and her. It’s true that Vansh initially was not unable to trust her but Siya’s voice note changed everything between them.

Vansh we can talk about this later. But now just get up. We hardly get time for each other. And today is special. Today we won’t think about them or our goals. Today is just about us” said Riddhima hoping Vansh would forget the bitter memories.


Haan chalo lechalein tumhein
Taaron ke shehar mein
Dharti pe yeh duniya
Humein pyar na karne degi


“How can I Riddhima? How can I forget everything? If we are to stay apart from each other it is also due to them! I neither can kill them nor I can hold you in my arms”

Jo tum na meri baahon mein
Main to so nahi sakta
Khuda ne tujhko diya mujhe
Tujhe main kho nahi sakta



Vansh recalled the betrayal he felt when Anupriya told him about Riddhima being a spy. He knew it someone had sent her but to hear it in her own words broke something inside him. And Siya’s almost lifeless body in his arms didn’t help the cause either. But he knew it better. He had already received Siya’s voice record. He rushed home but it was too late. It took him an inhumane strength not to cut slit Anupriya’s throat for the lies she was spitting and to put Siya in that condition. But he couldn’t react for the plan he already hatched in his mind. Angre had already informed him that Kabir has taken out an arrest warrant on his name so he knew he was coming. So he had already planned his escape plan. But during all these he couldn’t inform Riddhima who actually had thought he was dead. Her pain and cries cleared whatever the doubt he had. Angre kept a constant watch over Riddhima and Anupriya and informed him about their every move. Then he came to know about the shocking truth of Kabir and Anupriya. He knew then and there he needs to play it big. It was time to play like Vansh Raisinghania and not like someone’s husband or son. But it was necessary to keep Riddhima way but could he?

Main marr jaunga agar kabhi
Kehna pad gaya yeh sanam
Main tera hi hoon
Magar tera ho nahi sakta


Vansh Looked at Riddhima who is now setting up the table for their dinner. A small cake is placed at the side. It’s their 6 month anniversary. Vansh thought wistfully how life changed in these 6 months. This little woman who is now fussing over the wind blowing the candles away made a place in his heart so firmly even if he wants he can’t stay without her. Who will say seeing her that she is carrying such a big storm around her only because she is in love with him? Vansh gritted his teetht hinking the dirty game Anupriya and kabir is planning. They couldn’t frame him for Ragini’s murder for Angre destroying that chip and Vansh having no records of abusing Ragini. But now they are planning to kill Riddhima so there is no loopholes. They are constantly trying to harm Riddhima so that he gets framed. That’s the reason such tight security is around her room. He still remembers the day when he brought Riddhima to him after the cliff incident. That day will forever be itched in his heart till his last breathe. The joy he saw in Riddhima is something he silently promised to keep up all his life. They both talked, pour their heart out to each other with a promise to never have any secrets between them. He chuckled thinking Riddhima’s murderous threat for Kabir hearing his truth. His little warrior queen. But above all, he will forever cherish that day for some other reason. That’s the day they took a step forward in their relationship and truly became husband and wife in every sense.

Humein maar hina daale
Buri nazar yeh logon ki
Yeh hath chhudayenge
Na hath pakadne degi


But they had to hide their relationship. For Anupriya still lurking and Kabir almost on the verge of getting all his properties, he couldn’t have allowed another mistake. They used his weakness against him. To beat them he had to be ruthless without any weak link. If they knew he still trusts Riddhima they would have used her to get back to him but how could he have allowed that to happen. So he hatched this dangerous game. His hatred towards Riddhima, hurting her, keeping her as captive everything is part of his entire plan to expose the mother-son due. It was him who asked Riddhima to keep up the pretense though i ttears him apart to put her in the danger. But this is the biggest game he is playing and everything is put on stake. Besides he knows Riddhima. She is stronger than anyone.


Haan chalo le chalein tumhein
Taaron ke shehar mein


I thought it was only me who used to have day dreams. Who are you and what you have done to my husband ?”Riddhima chuckled sitting beside him. Vansh took her hand in his and kissed it lightly.

I was thinking about everything that happened in last two months Riddhima. I hate staying like this and meeting my own wife secretly. I … “ even before he could finish Riddhima stopped him.

You forgot your promise? We will not talk about anything else today but us. This night is just for us that we have stolen from reality. Nothing can come between us. Not our past, our revenge” Riddhima spoke softly caressing Vansh’s cheek lightly.


Dance ?” Vansh Asked.

“Tumhare liye toh meri jaan haazir” Riddhima said with all the love in her eyes.


Log Humse Jalte Hai
Jalte Hai Iss Baat Pe
Kyun Itne Jyaada Khubsoorat
Lagte Hai Hum Saath Mein


They started grooving to the slow beat of the song. The song itself was describing their situation. Here they are, hiding from the cruel world , living in their own reality. Vansh couldn’t help but to swoop down and capture Riddhima’s lips. It seems like ages he felt those lips and he wasn’t disappointed. Riddhima kissed him back immediately and he could feel the warmth seeping into him.


Jo Bhi Ishq Mein Hote Hai
Hote Hai Deewane Se
Khushi Nahi Dekhi Jaati
Mohabbat Ki Zamane Se

He started running his hand on Riddhima’s almost bare back. Riddhima who was running her fingers through his hair clutched it tightly. Vansh tilted Riddhima’s face to deepen the kiss. What had started a kiss of solace soon turned into something more passionate. Vansh slightly pinched Riddhima’s waist and she gasped. Using the moment Vansh let his tongue took over. He had thought of just teasing her but as soon as Riddhima moaned his control snapped. He pushed her to the nearest wall and claimed her mouth again with more force. Long gone the gentleness, it was all about biting, soothing, grabbing. The hunger took over and Vansh attacked Riddhima’s neck . “No love bite” Riddhima reminded him in between her gasp and his torture. Vansh grunted and cursed and left her neck at once. He put his forehead against Riddhima trying to control his breathe. They both were gasping for air with Riddhima still clutching his shirt and him holding her still by her waist.


Mujhe Pata Hai Oh Jaanam
Chahe Kuch Bhi Ho Jaye
Tu Khud Mar Jayegi
Jaani Na Marne Degi


Vansh looked at Riddhima and she blushed. “C’mon Riddhima, this is not the first time we are doing this are we?” Riddhima looked at him mischievously and started opening his shirt buttons. Flabbergasted Vansh asked, “What are you doing?”

C’mon Vansh, we are not doing this for the first time. Don’t you know what it means?” Riddhima replied with a glint on her eyes.


“Playing me with my own words, aren’t you? Iski Saza toh tumhe milegi Riddhima” saying this he picked Riddhima at once ignoring her squeal and took her to their bed to show exactly how he intends to punish her all night. Leaving behind all the worries, all the drama, all the hatred and cruelty this world has shown to them, they made their own small world where only thing matters is their love. Tomorrow morning they will get back to hating each other again but this one night, no one can take away from them. Just like they couldn’t take their love away.


Haan chalo lechalein tumhein
Taaron ke shehar mein
Dharti pe yeh duniya
Humein pyar na karne degi





The end





Phew !!!! Can't believe I wrote this with a exam to give tomorrow and a research proposal to be submitted today, :v I heard this song a month ago and since then I could picture only Riansh in this. I took up the pen to note down something to theme up with the song but was never satisfied. Suddenly this came to my mind and I just dumped it in word file :V Not fully satisfied yet but I have promised to update today so here it goes.


Do let me if you liked it or not. Your comments means a lot <3



P.S. You can play the song in background. I kept listening to it while writing.Not a big Neha kakkar fan but I don't why I felt this song screamed Vansh and Riddhima















Edited by jisa - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing. Now, this is what I would certainly look forward to seeing in the coming days. Like Vansh and Ridhima acting so they become one. The hatred and everything is a trap.


Amazing update. Clean end. Wow

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

Amazing. Now, this is what I would certainly look forward to seeing in the coming days. Like Vansh and Ridhima acting so they become one. The hatred and everything is a trap.


Amazing update. Clean end. Wow



Echo the same , this is some twist all are hoping for

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