Akdha FF- l Twisted Perfection... l #1 Ch-3, Pg. 18 (15.10.2020)- Page 7

Originally posted by: akdha98

Nice story mahi dear

I loved the concept

Waiting for you to update the next part

Thanks dear 😘

It will take a bit time, cause I will update my all 3 FF of mine together😳

Originally posted by: dmegha

Res

Waiting

"What a beautiful start of story and these two Part

The CS 👍🏼 banner Intro ❤️

First chapter 👍🏼

The bond of Jo with her father and sis and kids is touchy ⭐️ bidding farewell is never easy no matter is it for state trip or anywhere but they're ready 😉

"Amazing Hira this story is truly beautiful 👏

Jo is very innocent that she open up with anyone 😳

She has her own emotional roller coaster ride of life and it won't end yet 🤔

But the meeting of the leads😆

She thought Him to mute 🤣

Ok I understand his sentiment when he comes to know he has to sit beside girl whom he's allergic with 😆

Can't believe he plan to stay mute on entire ride hearing her 🤣

Originally posted by: James12

"What a beautiful start of story and these two Part

The CS 👍🏼 banner Intro ❤️

First chapter 👍🏼

The bond of Jo with her father and sis and kids is touchy ⭐️ bidding farewell is never easy no matter is it for state trip or anywhere but they're ready 😉

"Amazing Hira this story is truly beautiful 👏

Jo is very innocent that she open up with anyone 😳

She has her own emotional roller coaster ride of life and it won't end yet 🤔

But the meeting of the leads😆

She thought Him to mute 🤣

Ok I understand his sentiment when he comes to know he has to sit beside girl whom he's allergic with 😆

Can't believe he plan to stay mute on entire ride hearing her 🤣

Thanks 😊

I have updated part 2, do read😃😃👍

Beautiful part Mahira

Loved it

Jodha is a real chatterbox 😂😂 cute

Hmm Jalal is really wondering kya ladki hai 😂😉

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

Part two

My Heaven you made his intro as Mr allergic for no reason he's still cool or shall I say in our heroine presence only 😉

Or else in his place I would have blasted over the girl for her chatter 😆

Here Jo without minding about reply goes on and on a pure chatterbox she has her reason though she just didn't wanted to be quiet and get lost in Ocean of past memories😳

Still it was very unique though Ja refused to get charm by girls but our heroine manage to make him think 😳

Wow this one is more awesome"! Can't wait for next ⭐️

Originally posted by: MahiraSingh3030

Thanks 😊

I have updated part 2, do read😃😃👍

Welcome🤗

Done Reading and sharing review😳

Wow nice update...
jo is chatter box

jalal hate girls but how he can ignore our cute jo🤣

cont soon

Awesome chappy

Stunned by her innocence

Interesting

What will be her reaction on knowing about his nature

Update soon

Thanks for Pm