JJ FF - Entangled love Chapter 9 on 54

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"Hello friend's🤗

I'm new Member here in the Forum"!

"Name - Avika Rai⭐️ "!

"Age - 20 year old 😊 "!

"studying in Pearl Academy (Delhi) 🤓

"Ardent fan of ( Akdha / Parijat )☺️

"I Has read numerous work of Authors here 😎

"Hence with little courage in heart, I'm Going to try my hand on writing a fiction as well"! 😃

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Prologue 👇

"They met to be separated"!

"They separate to unite"!

"They fall in love But rise in Hate"!

"Circumstances they assume to be their end"! Fate prove them wrong and it's turn out the beginning of their Entangled love"!

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Index 👇

Chapter 1 Angel of Death on page 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154194085

Chapter 2 More a Spy Than warrior on page 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154212857

Chapter 3 Rise In the Fall on page 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154247806

Chapter 4 Their eyes Met on page 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154286754

Chapter 5 Revelation of Past on page 21

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154389918

Chapter 6 Glimpse of Demon on page 24

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154450451

Chapter 7 Demon's Nightmare on page 32

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154543596

Chapter 8 Fire of Vegnance on page 49

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155019940

Chapter 9 Curse of love on page 54

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/155179433

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chapter 1 - "Angel of death"


"We has heard Rajput are known for kindness they Has big heart please mercy let us go"!.


A girl was standing with her one foot over small rock, other on ground having ice grip on pommel of sword pointed towards a bulky men on her foot bent down on knee, begging for mercy while few were on ground whimpering in pain, held down by group of men pointed their sword on them upon listening the word of men, the girl spoke.


"Rajput's are passionate of Justice too"! And Being Rajput I can't commit sin of doing injustice to innocent by showing mercy on Sinner"!


If the naked blade kept on neck didn't kill them, the cold voice , void of emotion will carry out the deadly task of ending their life. The people could see the brutual end, They know begging for mercy is pointless because they're held down by the angel of death. Her words just confirmed the same empathy ,mercy forgiveness are unknown to her.


"No"!.Mercy mercy"!.we will do anything"! Just don't take our lives"! You can't take life of one seeking shelter on your feet"!


"Are you challenging me"? Know what"? "As soon I came to know your atrocities on my people"! I has vow to take your life"! "I can't back on my words"!


Saying this the girl held on the to pommel of sword and raise it up-word and swing it around at once beheading the men on knee. It was sign for her men to take the life of men's held down on ground too, they all raise their sword up, behading them without mercy not like they deserved any. Turning around wiping the naked blade on the sleeve of caregiver.


"Your highness the bodies"?


"It's a Good meat"! "Feed them to our pets"! Like usually"!


Saying this mount on the Black Malani Horse, then ride away without caring to observe her orders are carried out of not. Because she knew her men won't disobey her. And that's what happened. The words were to followed at once the bodies of slain men were dragged like sack of thrash then thrown into the iron cave made for wolf, where they devour their meal.


"what's this princess Jodha"?


Ask a boy holding a wooden crafted small box, opening it with frown spotting a beautiful dagger inside, the pommel of Dagger wasmade of gold, has sharp Lion head craved on top, he look on with curiousity and confusion. Which convert into mesmerized smile upon watching the face of Jodha.


"For protecting my Friend I'm giving you this Prince Jalal"! It's nothing big but it will come handy in need"!


Said princess Jodha with warmth of respect in eyes, smile of gratitude on face, staring straight into the eyes of him Without hestitation or shyness.


"Sure it will but to thank one"! gifting a dagger is odd choice"!


"Perhaps it isn't right choice"! But apart from my friends I value this the most"!


Smile made it's way on the face of Jalal , as Jodha held onto her Skirt, then rushed out of the beautiful garden walk-in passed by the soldiers and servants. Who bow their head in her honor and receiving a warm smile.


"Won't you step in Girl"?

Tilting her head at the Men, who brought her out on shire from ocean of memory. Standing on stairs barefooted wearing only a dhoti. holding a plate carrying lighted lamp, flower and Sandalwood. Shaking her head in no, the girl stared straight at the open entrace of Temple.


"Why"? Neither you reveal your identity nor you stepped inside the temple"! What's your intention"?.


The girl stayed silent,but her tight clutch on the pommel of sword made the men halt on his words, understanding well like past he won't gain answer again like past times, taking God's Name Walked out to put the lamp near Tulsi plant.

Edited by Evil_Flower_08 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice update didi

Continue it soon

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Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Nice update didi

Continue it soon

Thank you 🤗

I will try😊

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Can I call you didi??

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You already did 😆 but yes you can 😳

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What's your name though"? 😊

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Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

My name is Sayani😊

It's your real name 😳 nice 👍🏼

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Ya it's my real name😊

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Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Ya it's my real name😊

It's beautiful name 👍🏼

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