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Chapter 2 - "More a spy Than warrior"


"Keep still"! "If I fall"! Then I won't tell anything to you won't offer Piece of Gulab Jamun either"!.


Ordered the boy, standing over the shoulder of Boy, peeking inside the Grandeur hall, from the forged Roshandan, A men was sitting couch, glancing at the varities of weapon, Dagger spear Shields, Gun, musket kept on table.


"You call these best"?..


"Yes My Lord"!


"They were well armed with these"! isn't it"?.


The men gulp inaudibly, with head lower down, knowing well any second he has to face the worse, no one could perdict the mood of The men standing with furious look on face.


"Yet they disappeared leaving no trace behind"! And your fate isn't expectation"!..


Without word the men, pick up the naked blade and stuck him hard with pointy end over his chest, making his fall back on floor, the eyes which were lower in fear goes wide stared up then while later went lifeless and cold. The rest of men standing their sigh inwardly but Daren't to express their fear but a low gasp was heard.


"Clean the mess"! And get the person snopping here"!


The people bow and rush out to check , meanwhile the boy, who was standing over the shoulder of another jump down, holding the hand of other started running to sneak out of there. The soldiers caught the sight of one, and ran after the boy, but after a while stopped dead on track spotting A boy strolling in garden outside, who upon hearhing footsteps turn around. For minute he stared at all of them, then spoke in harsh tone.


"What's going on here"?."were yiu chased by them"? You all"! How dare you all to chase my men"?..


"Pardon My Prince"! But we were order by Chief commander to caught the spy"!.


"How Dare you to call my men spy"? Get lost from here"! before I behead you all at single stroke of sword"!


The soldiers ran away at once, greetings him feeling fortunate to get away with warning only. Where's the Young Prince just let out a chuckle over their retreating sight. Where's the other boy chided him as he breathlessly fall on ground.


"Don't laugh Jalal I'm done with backing you in your daily adventure"!.


"Really Aziz"? Don't you wants to know what I saw"?


"No"! Not at cost of my life huh"! I don't understand why you has to spy on him"?..


Cried Aziz in desperation slowly coming to accept he's alive nothing bad happens to him. But the mere thought ,if he was caughted by the soldiers, what would've been his fate then made him shiver in fear.


"He's isn't trustworthy that's why"! Asking other men to spy on him will make it worse for me"!


"But you ran with me"? How you gets to reach first and pretend to strolling here"?..


"While running I left your hand and sneak by side, to jump off from the floor"!


Listening his words Aziz gets up from ground and punch him on tummy making him fall back on ground to defend himself, before Jalal understand the reason of Aziz action Aziz cried out in disbelief punching him but block by Jalal hand.


"You you left me alone"? What if they got me"?


"I knew you will make it out alive"! You're good runner"!.and come on don't act like scared rabbit"!


Pushing him off he Gets up from ground dusted his dress then holding his hand pull Aziz up from ground and pulling him closer, by wounding his one arm around Aziz neck, taking him along with him out of garden. But they get stopped by a servant who inform them the Emperor awaits them in room.


"Jalal my son"! Here you are hm"!..


Greetings Father"!.


Greetings"! Today I have a task for you"!.


"A war campaign"?


"No"! More than warrior"! you're becoming good at spying"!


Jalal stared on at his father with frown and slight embarssement, though he's unbeatable warrior has lead the army for war, but his father always feel hestitate to give him lead. Thus he find another alternative ways to keep himself entertain. By spying, hunting, amusing himself in presences of ladies. Playing flute ,Practicing for hours in arena with weapons, tamimg wildbeast like elephant or horse, and Roaming out in city helping his people.


"What's the task father"?


"Our policy of expending empire is failing in the land of royals"! The people there giving us tough fight"!


"That's not new father"!.


"Yes it's not new it's so many failures boasting their self esteem encouraging them more to fight us"!..


"Not their fault"! After what we done with Amer"! No King or state will ever accept form alliance with us"!


The king Abul Shah look on at Jalal with unreadable expression, one of his most wrong decision of life, which his son never leave a chance to rub on his face. Not like he can do anything to undo what happen back then nor he could change his son mind he realize little to late about the feeling of his son. Getting grip on himself he spoke with calmness.


"I wants you to look on their for their weakness to make us defeat them"!


"As you wish"!.


No firther words were exchange between them, holding his father's palm Jalal kissed on it then greeting him once walked out of there. His mood was spoiled and it was evident to others through his body language. Standing near the open corridor he stared up at sky.


"Thank you Princess Jodha"! For coming on short notice"!


Holding the rope of Horse, stopping it near the rock, forwarding his hand to help Jodha to get down from her horse he exoress his gratitude verbally.


"I has to come"! I heard you're leaving today"!


Both of their voice were heavier today with emotion, they both knew it's their last meet today, He's leaving for Agra with his father perhaps they won't meet ever. And this perticular thought made both of them feel disheartened.


"You heard right"! Anyway um I'm not good at farewell but there's one thing I wants to give you"!..


He gazed at her, then calmly forwrd a box to her, noticing each and every change and gesture on her, clutching on the box she open it firmly but finding a mirror she Gets confused but the thing she noticed was the mirror was little bigger than her hands. It was very beautifully designed to. She hold it up and Jalal cover the back of mirror with his both palm.


"I wanted you to see the thing I see in the time of my prayers"!


It was her reflection, she felt speechless, both stared at each other, though young by age, not to acquainted with their emotions they knew what they feel is stronger and more than two mere friend feel for each other. But they Daren't to name it, afraid it's against the Law's of land. a moaning sounds caught his attention, Frowning in confusion he look ahead at side, in curiousity and saw Aziz devouring the piece of Gulab Jamun and moaning in pure delight of the taste


"You brat couldn't you wait for me"?;


"No"! It was useless to wait"! You forget"? I'm your food taster to"!


"No you're just greedy brat Aziz"!..But now go prepare to leave"!.. we are to leave for Land of Royals"!..


His hand stop in mid, before he could eat another piece listening words of Jalal, they are leaving for Rajputana"? Is he serious"? After what happen back then, he never try to talk about it. And today he stared at Jalal who was busy checking his weapon, And he realised it's not war campaign but secret definitely on words of Abul Shah. "May God bless us with courage"!

Edited by Evil_Flower_08 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Welcome to forum Avi 🤗

Hope you enjoy your time here 👍🏼

What a beautiful treat for us on your first day only you posted story for us 🤗

About story the updates are short 😆

Where's charachter sketch, index,

aren't given as well 😆

But the plot is intresting as well looking forward to it 😎

"Do PM me as well"! 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice dear Avi

Awesome part 🙂

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome chappy

Interesting too

Mystery

Update soon

Thanks for Pm

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: James12

Welcome to forum Avi 🤗

Hope you enjoy your time here 👍🏼

What a beautiful treat for us on your first day only you posted story for us 🤗

About story the updates are short 😆

Where's charachter sketch, index,

aren't given as well 😆

But the plot is intresting as well looking forward to it 😎

"Do PM me as well"! 😊


Yeah I'm enjoying here it's good place for me

Yes it's short um because I can't write big yet as I'm newbie I has word limit to ⭐️

Oh yes I didn't get to leave empty post for CS and Index i will try working on that then"!😊

Thanks for reminding me of it, yes I will PM you to ⭐️

Thank you keep supporting me 🤗

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