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Chapter 8 "Fire of Vegenence"

"why we are riding here?..

(Ask Aziz (Sujan) in curiousity holding the rein in hands, Riding slowly deep in forest trying best to keep their move soundless. Jalal (Veer) who was cautiously having his gaze around riding besides him replied firmly).

"To meet Angel of Death!.

"What? Have you lost it? If she came to know about you she will kill you along with me!.

(Gasped Aziz (Sujan) as he stated flatly about the consequence, stopping his horse at once, which neigh lowly to him for sudden halt. He patted the neck of it, look on at Jalal (Veer) imagining the dreadful scenario of him being getting chopped of bit by bit as Angel of Death cruel merciless laugh echo's in the Forest. Sending chill run down his spine).

"She knows I'm here!. I'm curious why she didn't made move against me!.

"Fine so to know her plan you are here to meet her as if she's waiting for you to came and ask her yourself!

(Mocked Aziz (Sujan)but then gasp in shock as he caught Jalal (Veer) words Angel of Death is aware about him? His arrival? He look at Jalal (Veer) who avoided looking at him, Is it possible his doubt is correct?. Till now he was occupied or engaged with Kanika, that didn't gets chance to look or talk to Radha (Jodha) but now he started having doubt on her).

"Can't you smell fishy? We are here though we are hearing alot about her we hasn't encountered her men or her yet"!

"It's fishy indeed!. But meeting her isn't right to do!. I heard no one who met her escape alive!.

(Replied Aziz (Sujan) back to him, as they ride along side further in Forest reach near a waterfall. Tired they stepped down from horse and started trying the horse to tree. Jalal (Veer) Patted the head of Horse and thought cautiously. Downfall of King Abul Shah and his son words of Radha echo's in his brain. As they continue to roam in the forest like it's city market).

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"We tried but we failed to locate him!..

(Said the men, standing at entrace of An open corridor leading to the inner courtyard. standing with head hung low and thudding heart knowing any second his head would've been down. Because he faced failure, which is unacceptable to his master).

"And she?

"Perhaps he's isn't here yet!. About her , we tried but!..

(The men standing Oppoiste infront of them with Support of crutch , raise his sword to kill him when another rush to stop him as he sense the outcome of their men's failure).

"We don't have many men left in Fort to fight for us we can't kill these!..

"What I should do with these useless dimwit?.

"Keep paitence my Lord!. I has sent Ali! He will return with DEMON'S HIRE they will make us win!.

(He fail to defeat her, can they possibly win her? What will be the consequence? If Almighty forbid, the Angel od Death get hands on them? He will be bricked alive by her then. But again he needs to be paitence which is more miserable then waiting for death).

"Paitence? She has me imprisoned here in this fort! Mock me from that hill!. I has no way out from here!.

(Yelled Adham apprehensivly if only he was shackled in chain thrown in dungeon he could have Satisfied himself by blaming the Dark cell and iron chains for his failure to escap. But no he's isn't shackled or bind to chain, pushed behind bars, but he's pushed into the fort which has various ways to open and leave for him there's none. He only desire Wealth, Wine, Power, for that he used all method Ethical unethical didn't matter to him. But now! Even having these, he can do nothing ,His physical Incapability to train his men, fight for them making it more hard for him to make plans, it's been years since he has set his foot in the arena. It's been years since he showered in the Light of Sun. It's been years since he held a wom...he can't even think about them, whenever he does that mock cold gaze terrorise him more."What he should do to strike back?. Even if he caught her, will he able to avenge himself? He still wonder why she let him be, instead of having chance to kill him? To make him live miserably like he doing now? Or she has other alternative plans to avenge? What he can do counter strike? What he can possibly do to predict her move? If I know About That little mice arrival, it would have comes in her knowledge by now"! then why he didn't heard the news of his demise?.He thought while standing near an open corridor).

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"Your highness!.. "The time is nearing but it's seem you has other plans!.

(Ask Hukum Singh, as he glanced at the Layouts of fort, They has control on, Per their knowledge only handful of soldiers are left at fort to fight for the tyrant Adham khan. They can attack anytime finish the leftover meat but they hadn't cause they need face of Mice for Abul Shah at fort).

"Yes!. Because Death isn't suffice for him!. They didn't seem to learn lesson! Will leave today to teach them!

(Mumbled Jodha coldly, like Adham she has plan for Crown Prince to, she was going through some royal scroll. With each passing scroll her rage was building as well which was clear by the way her Hands curled into fist. Hukum Singh who was observing her sigh inwardly. He has seen this coming he knew it won't be easier for her to raise weapon against Crown prince Jalal. But as the time is nearing the way her plan is changing, he's afraid she's inviting her doom by burning herself in the fire of Vegenence).

"What if he's innocent?."He's and that's why he needs to pay more gravely!.

(Hukum Singh gaze widened in surprise, so she's aware? Jalal has no hand in what happen in past? But how"? When? If yes then why she's kneen on making him pay more?. What's going on in her mind?. As if she read his query she ask back looking ahead as she rolled her sword).

"We were innocent to! Yet we paid gravely! Isn't it?

(Hukum Singh nodded in yes, ofcourse they were innocent yet they failed to prevent the destruction just because Amer people and the Loyal ministers of King Bharamal their family is alive doesn't mean they can fiegeg the loss of Soldiers Queen and King. She can't forget and move on but before she strike last time to bring King Abul Shah on his knee she needs to bring the truth of their Innocence out. And who could done this task better than Crown Prince himself? Smirk she inwardly).

"Your highness!.."those to has started To investigate our hideout!..

"Let them be!. None of us will step out of our hideout!..

(What? Why is it becoming so hard to predict her? Hukum Singh thought inwardly, the more they are pushed in corner the merrier she has become complex even being with her as Shadow he can't understand her action or predict her move beforehand. Same was the other men all the while coming to inform her he assumed it's waste to convey her because at end she will kill both. But now? It was clear sign never ever think of keeping any news a secret from her).

"I apologise but may I ask why let them escape?

"They're here to quench their thirst to meet me! But they hasn't prove their worth to have my time!..

(Listening this both Hukum singh and other men nodded in understanding though they understand nothing. This has never happened before, sure she gave hard time to get opponent but no meet? That's not her way but they has no way out either than obeying her so they didn't step out of their hideout as she made way to her hut, not willing to leave a chance for veer and Sujan to doubt her it wasn't to hard to reach before them and come face to face with Kanika).

"What's this"? Jodha crown of Dates?.

"No a sweet Dream of crushed heart!..

(Stated Jodha firmly, staring at the Little crown in her hand, made by kids, given to her, it was made of dates Seed and wood geeze of tree. Few flower were stuck over it giving a look of brown Gem stone and pearl).

"What you plan to do?.

"I has grown to become passionate Slayer!.

"But you Possess heart as Human"!.

"Which is wounded and left sore!..

(Kanika placed her arm around her neck, then hugged her by behind, she knew the misery of her princess how she can even think beyond anything else either than her revenge? The girl who was made to lay on bed adorened with rose, everything has on feet at mere click of finger now set everything on own).

"Love can heal wounded heart!.

"People say time heal the wounds to!."but mine grow sore!.

"Try to see beyond the Fire of vegnance maybe you will find cure!.

"To poetic Kanika!.. anyway leave this hear me out I'm to leave today!. Don't let anyone know!.

"What about those two?..

"Tell them I went to Brij!.. "on words of Angel of death!..

(Replied Jodha taking her dagger and sword, not noticing the way color drained from her Kanika face, as she stared at Jodha in surprise terror of the place name engulf her heart with grave fear).

"Jodha no Not there!.you know the danger! lurking there the last time we were there!..

"Hukum Singh will be with me don't worry! I can't let that Demon win!

(Assuring her friend she stepped out of there little hut and come face to face with Jalal, did he heard me? Was first question in her mind she try to read him, and caught to Emotion first surprised and sebond concern If he heard her he should be angry then why he's shock and concerned).

"Does your Angel of death possess no heart? .

"What?.

"How she can ask you to go anywhere?..

"Veer'!..

"You aren't going anywhere!.. I'm not letting you face such a danger!.

(Saying this he held her hand, and pulled her inside the hut, astonished by his action she watched him with wide eye, has he lost it? What's wrong with him? She thought and Jalal thought to find he ofer-reacted but what he could do? The mere words of how Angel of Death is sending her somewhere didn't settled well eith him she do dangerous bussiness. Why to involve noble girl like Radha? Fine she can fight but is it necessary to put her in path of danger).

"Who you think making decision of me? First you disappeared! Then return and...

"Can't I go instead of you?

"Oh now I understand you wants to use me to meet Angel of death? First prove your worth to her!..

"What?..

"Do you think Angel of death won't know you're lurking around in the forest to meet her?

"She know I understand but how you?

(Taken aback by his query, Jodha glanced at Kanika, then spoke firmly regaining fompsure how she can forget he's men with good wit and sharp mind he's isn't only a warrior but very good diplomat).

"Isn't it oblivious? I stay here in forest to these rough patch on palm? Beside I know her to!.

(Getting her wrist released she walked away, Jalal watched her retreating back then sigh there's no way he can go after her she won't like what I was even thinking? Holding her hand making decisions for her as if I has right on her wait what? I hold her hand? He thought with widened gaze staring at his hand by while he held her's, those Soft firm warm hands, he stared at his hand with sheepish smile on face ).

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"Later night"

"They're dead Faizal?.

(Ask a men in low whisper, as he inspected the unconscious body of women laying in the carriage they all were bind).

"No Adeel! but to maintain the secrecy of trade! We has sedated them!..

"Hm better!. "We can't risk of getting in Angel of Death eye!.

"Yes, though I told Afzal to not trade here! But he boosted me about his Beast Strength!..

"Yes that Wolf mind will invite our doom!..have you seen those Beast?

"No not yet,but I heard they're sent here from Arab!.

"Hm if they're huge and skilled as People claim then I'm sure they can defeat that Angel of death!

"There's only one issue they're not one to tame by People like us!.."you think we can bought them?.

"I hasn't thought about it, but first' let's see how they're and I'm sure Afzal will sell them to us if we present these beauties to him!..

(Grinning evilly, They proceed further while chatting among themselves. as their small Carvan proceed further it's comes in the sight of caves which were more like a grandeur arena hall. The sight of Men shackles in chain, dragged forward in the hall, by constant whip on back. Could Make anyone's heart ache with Pain. But not the people present in the Place, at one side a large cell bar was made, fill with women, shackled in chain to all were looking awfull. No one can say by their look hat they belonged to noble family only few days ago. One men start the bidding and soon the group roar of cheers with Loud bidding voice started prevailing the place like a market well indeed it was market not ordinary where noble or high elite people will go it was slave market. But two people standing near a wooden wrack nor bid neither made move to look at anywhere though their gaze speak of calmity but their way to stand was enough to convey they're not one people will like to messed with).

"Time for selling of Real and most important possession!. The "DEMONS HIRE" they can win any war single-handedly!. Credit to their Skill ,wit and Strength!.

(As soon the men announce, a big Carriage was pushed forward and group of not one but Five Gruesome Giant like Men stepped out they were shackled with heavy chains, their Size, their Look all of it was Enough to terrorised the people there. The arrival of DEMON'S HIRE caught the attention of two people who were least interested in the market till now. The Auctioner motion other men and they stepping forward used the Whip on The back of those five Giant, none of them flinch, people were amazed, then they used Spear and poked them on Various place, the poking cause them to flinch, but they didn't hissed in pain like any other person will do enduring the sharp blade).

"50Dam!.

"You are biding for DEMON'S HIRE? or Jewelry?.

"100Dam!.

"I expected more From you Lord Adeel!..

(One men stood to bid, but a firm hold on his hand made him sat back and he tilted his head mumbled slowly only audible to person besides him).

"Your grace?..

"Not yet Hukum Singh!.

"500Mohur!..

"You are General of King Abul Shah! Lord Fahad! Is that all you bid for mighty warriors?.

"1000Mohur!.

"Look at them they can Win you a losing battle!. By having them on your side you can rule the World! I won't brag let me show you!.

(The Auctioner signal his other men, they come dragging a cage, all the people assembled behind the wooden wrack. As the cage Curtain was pulled down there a lion was present, the men pull the gates down, as the lion step out flinching at the harsh Light of Lighted lamps).

"They don't mean to push them to fight the lion do they?

(Mumbled the men, as he glance back tk check the response but he was disappointed to see the focus only on "DEMON'S HIRE" relcuantly he focused on them to, and Saw The lion leap forward over one, but get hold by other over neck, the place echo's with the loud roar of Lion but then it concert into sheer silence as the one he jump over Gripped his mouth and riped him part).

"See the mighty strength!."fearless And quick wit!. Bid higher they're worth the wealth you put!.

"2000Mohur50dam!.

"5,000Mohur100Dam!.

"8,000Mohur300Dam!.

"10,000Mohur500Dam!..

(The bid was growing high between Hukum Singh and one men, no one was ready to back the Auctioner was eying both with greed in eye. Hukum Singh was pulled back after hearing the other bidder Bid, he heard Jodha words then spoke).

"12,000Mohur800Dam!..i can bid more but I'm not willing to Accept defeat from this Wealthy Snob!.

"You"!..

"The DEMONS HIRE are Strong, witty warrior"! They deserve to have Strong Lord!. Not only wealthy!.

"Why don't you step down, and see my strong capability?

"I agree with condition if I win they all are mine!.

(The bidder looked at Hukum Singh with Rage, then nodded where's the auctioner was willing to see fight, he wasn't ready to lose money).

"I agree to duel if the loser pay to?.

(Hukum Singh Nodded listening, the words Auctioner the bidder nodded as well, both stepped forward, drew their sword out. With lightning speed their sword clashed, made the the place echos with the sound of Thunderous bolt such was their agression of strikes when sensing his defeat while fighting he saw Saffron Thread tied on wrist of Hukum Singh and realizing who he's he yelled).

"Imposter!...

(Listening his yell, Jodha get's taken aback, but stood still and waited firmly to see consequence. The Auctioner motion his other men to move and attack on Hukum Singh. But before they reach down to him, he unarmed the bidder by pushing him down).

"Defeat or Death?

(The bidder mumbled a low, Defeat, making Hukum Singh to drew his Dagger out from waist and point towards the rest of Opponent approaching him. He stared at The DEMON'S HIRE and yelled).

"I win I owe you! My friend my foe are your friends and Foe! Fight them!..

(But the DEMON'S HIRE didn't move, they didn't blink in acknowledgement of his words forget about obeying him. Hukum Singh Gripped his sword tightly, then Made a charging Sign towards the people approaching him to fight, when the bidder down on ground drew his Dagger from foot, and raise to stab on his back but he swing his sword At wheel motion and behead him. Earning a loud gasp from the people present there).

"Win the bid Fairly, You has time to Keep your part of deal!..

"You kill our bidder"!.

"Act of self Defence! Kill or get killed is rule!.

(Retorted Hukum Singh, staring at the Auctioner, he was sure what could make him get in favour so he took out hold bag, and shake it a bit making him aware he has wealth. The Auctioner looked at them then to nodded no and about to motion his men to attack. Jodha who has enough of it jump out over floor and unseath her sword as well. And started fighting within many one time deadly strokes she killed many attackers everyone were astonished to see her skill).

"You has invite your doom the minute you mock my motherland Violates my people!. Now this will end!.

(Everyone get astonished to hear her voice words, a women there? A women kill their men like pro warrior? It hurt their ego and they all drew their weapon out. But this time the situation was reverse The DEMON'S HIRE were now standing as Shield around Jodha and Hukum Singh).

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"Same day"

"Crown Prince!..Mercy!.. mercy!..

(Yelled Adham apprehensivly staring down at the feet of Jalal, how he can even miss the look of prince whom he hate with all his might, he sent his men to hunt him down and here he come on own? where's Jalal who was standing at the courtyard of Fort was stunned to see Appearance of Adham).

"What has happened to you?..

(Ask Aziz sensing the mood of Jalal inwardly he was overjoyed to see Adham miserable condition. But pretend to be surprised as he was indeed shocked tk see him walking with the use crutches has only one eye, his half face was having charred scar while his arm was broken to).

"Mercy!..only you can help me! That Little vixen Angel of Death has conspire against us!.

"Really? You want us to believe?

"Why you won't?. Look at me my condition she did this to me!

"Hm if all the things happening here again us are done by her then how I was followed by your men?..

(Ask Jalal this time,as he clicked his finger making two soldier to stel holding an injured Men. He wasn't able to stand because of his injured foot).

"This is her doing I trust me, I never seen him! He's imposter!..

(Jalal was amused he didn't wanted to reveal his identity the moment he stepped inside the fort, but he didn't expected adham to recognise him at all. But he did things turn out pretty shocking. Before stepping in fort he made up his mind not to trust Adham khan no matter what. Because he's isn't worthy of his trust. But now his condition, And words were making it hard to see any wrong by him. Is it possible? That Angel of death wish to become Ruler? And that's why she's trying to manipulate the situation? If yes then poor Radha people like her are being used by the do called Angel of death. Or else if she really want justice why didn't killed adham? And wait if she wanted to rule she could have killed Adham and ruled here but she didn't so what's intention?. Is there more to Know or?. He thought where's Aziz heard Adham khan words).

"My lord she wants downfall of King Abul Shah Our Majesty I try to seek help"!.

"Then where's military aid? And treasure?

"She robbed them and killed all!. she manipulate the people against us!.

"You were brave general but it's hard to believe a girl defeat you!..

"Not girl your majesty her men attacked me!

(He was trying to save his image not knowing he gave a a lie if seed to Jalal and Aziz who smirked inwardly glancing at each other they continue hearing his lies and made their plan).

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"day later"

"Greetings Your Majesty! Sir Bairam Khan seek to meet you!..

(Without rising head to look, the king gave a curt nod a sign of permission granted. The soldier bow and walked out minute later Bairam khan stepped in the chamber, with two scroll).

"Greetings!..I thank you for your Time!.

"Proceed with matter concerning you!..

"Uh your Majesy, The absence of Crown Prince comes to our notice and it's matter of grave concern!..

"Anything else?...

"Your majesty, I'm aware I had fallen in your eye, but I wants you to know I always has the well being of empires in heart!.

"Hm I'm aware you has noble intention, but used Complex path!.

(Bairam khan stared at the King Abul Shah, but said nothing he try to get his eye on the scroll king Abul Shah going through when to his Horror he found a symbol of Amer on one scroll).

"You should get rid of your concern for Crown Prince he's capable more than any of us think!.

(Bairam khan nodded then without word get up bowed and was about to walk out of there but get stoped by the arrival of soldier who halted at entrance then breathlessly informed them).

"Fahad! General Fahad is dead!

"What who killed him?.

"DEMON'S HIRE!.

(Impossible, they can't kill his men, unless they're buy by other and ordered to kill, but who can order?. King Abul Shah raise his head to ask, but the soldier beat him to it hy answering before hand)

"They were ordered by Adham Khan's Men Ali!.

"Impossible! Adham seek help from us how he can dare to take step against our men?

"It's seems to me, providing him Millitary Aid and Wealth was huge mistake!

"Your majesty don't misunderstand your General he's!..

"Ambitious and wicked! He sure got strong wings now spreading them to cut our!.

"But your majesty what about Angel of!..

(Bairam Khan though not fond of Adham, he was surely trying to reason out with Abul Shah, but what bothe didn't knew was Truth, there's saying Know your past learn from it so you don't relate past mistake in present and suffer consequence because History has Ironical way to repeat. They both were barely aware about Past, learning or amending was far from their Mind).

"It could be Roumor spread by him to fool us!

"But we can't be sure!

"Sent him message to report here! Or face the wrath of imperial Army!...charge with treason!

(Saying this he raised his hand in dismissing gesture, it was sign to leave him alone Bairam khan was confused he was sure it's not Adham but then he was more concern about fact The DEMON'S HIRE could go out of their hold).

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