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• "Yes power wealth get on Adham head but that's not reason 😊

• "Adham want's revenge on Angel of Death 😳

• "Both Jo Ja are unpredictable they both has plans to face the upcoming Circumstances (irrespective of favourable or unfavourable😳).

• "Yes BK equation isn't good with Abul Shah 😆 now he's more a employer than a adviser 😊

• "Though the information comes to AS made him take step against Adham by is that easy is that true? 🤔

Only time will tell 😆 what their plans are what will be outcome once they meet! When the truth will be out 😳

All will happen one by one but one thing is sure no one is ignorant to the happening all arw working one to straightening her Stand 😎other is genuinely trying solve the mystery and one again playing evil 😈

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Chapter 9 "Curse of Love"

"Smell of blood trace of fire!.

(Mumbled The men, Standing infront of Garden Entrance, which was deserted like it's not been taken care for long. The ruined plants, crushed dry leaves Grown up bushes, perhaps become hideout of Chemeleon Snakes other deadly Species the garden which was witnessed of the Pure bond as friendship was now a symbolic sign of ruined Relation)

"Jalal!.."We has 200 people in fort! They're Soldiers Cook and Cleaner included! What we are to do now?

(Coming out his thoughts, he wound his arm behind sigh inwardly rise to look up, then thought for minute about his plans, even if he doesn't Trust Adham he cannot ignore that they're on weak side, anytime Angel of death can match to attack and they won't be able to fight. He need use a strong bait to defend to plan his strategy).

"First start renovation of this fort!. I want it clean back to it's glorious form!

"what? Renovation are you serious? With the Angel of death ready to attack?

"She won't, if she wanted she would have, that Fool didn't think to take care Of the structure here which we could used as shield to protect!.

"Alright but with only 200 men? How we will?...

"Bring layout of it, I want information of every passage and tunnel leading us out!.Then Issued a decree! The Crown Prince has taken regain of Fort!.

(Aziz get's Confused sure they need more people, but they're not here to rule they're here to investigate and resturn with analysing report to present it to King Abul Shah. There's not enough men, to work or fight for them, with people deep down helping Angel of death is reason they can't rely on people. He will turn insane with the mysteries in state, and unpredictable move of Jalal).

"But you said to keep our Arrival in secret?

"Yes only from two people! As rest know!. Beside once they know it's me perhaps people will approach to help!..

(Said Jalal with amused grin on face in begining then seriousness. Aziz nodded, then stared at Jalal his back was facing him, he was sure the reason he gave aren't enough, there's more to it there's more a personal reason behind him but he didn't pushed to ask just stared at him).

"Greetings! Crown Prince, the necessity arrangment are made for your stay!.

(Jalal Nodded then started walking behind the scout boy, with Aziz by his side, if there's anyone he can rely on is Aziz only. He wished he taken Amir and Abdul along with him, but they were busy with his father. And he didn't wanted to let his father Stay among the pack of Wolves known to be the council minster at his absence).

"I'm not staying here!..

(Said Jalal at once standing outside the room of Former King, lost in thoughts he didn't realise when he reach the place where arrangment of his stay are made. But tripping of his foot over the carpet made him comes to present and he realised where he's standing).

"Past"

"Your majesty!.accept our sovereignty!. I Promise to help you!.

"Relation isn't formed seeing the standard! But it's makes Everyone Equal!.You never wish for that?.

(The Slow yet firm confident voice, was lashed with sarscam, surely how the situation change expecting King Bharamal to bahave humbly was out of questions, infact he expected to get silent treatment by him. But thankfully he speak though his words offend him).

"I'm surprised at your audacity of offending us and ignorance in regards of consequence!.

(King Bharamal raise his head to look up he was given a plain tent, with one Plain bed and Couch with no water or food anything at all. But outside various soldiers were guarding the tent. He could hear the mock conversation among the soldiers before the arrival of Jalal he knew it's Adham khan ways to psychologically torture him).

"Why you are here? To check how proud King I'm?

"No, I was here to help you, to know the truth! But you changed my decision!..

"A very Complex way to emerge out of Remoseful ocean by blaming the victim!.

"Enough King Bharamal! Till now I assume we are doing wrong but now! You will pay!.

"Crown Prince Abul Fath Jalal-ud-din! Mark my words entire Empire, including you will pay gravely!

(Jalal stared at the Face of Haughty Proud King, before turning around to leave, as Prince he was trained to mask his emotion. However his words left a deep Ache in his heart, because it wasn't a threat it was curse a curse of Righteous King, curse of Loving father, cause of caring Husband, curse of Men who always been kind even to his enemies. But one thing he wasn't aware of was. It was curse of love).

Present

"I apologise but may I ask why? ..

(Ask the scout guard, he wasn't sure why the crown Prince will deny to stay at the most important secure and Grandeur Lavish room of Fort, it's kings room s chamber where The former king seek comfort of home and peace where he analysis his Next move, Day to day events it is said the king didn't shared the room with any of his queen. Hence the Guard was sure he won't reject the Plan, beside the people work so hard to make it worth staying of Crown Prince. His question bring Jalal out of his thoughts as he stared then spoke).

"I'm not obliged to explain my decision!..

(He then turn to roam further to decide where to stay in fort, when he come across a very familiar Corridor, he stared at right side the Forged window gave clear view of courtyard from where the Guest stepped inside. The window were designed in such way the people down Cannot see anyone standing at corridor but. The people standing inside corridor can see everything clearly stepping closer he placed his hand on the window the place where Jodha watched him arriving as well leaving it must have witness her curiousity Eagerness Joy and Sadness. He raise his hand in dismissing gesture making everyone to leave him alone).

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"My lord The crown Prince taken hold on fort!.. And you are deciding to obey him?

(Ask the men staring at Adham khan in confusion, he wasn't able to understand till yesterday, Adham khan resent Jalal so much he would have ripped him part. But the minute Jalal arrive he fall at his feet begging for mercy as if he surrender? The men at forts were confised to, some were glad by the arrival of Jalal).

"I was Capable to conquer Amer! Yet I used him as my weapon to win this state! Now I'm not so I need his aid!

(Replied Adham khan, just when he see all path being closed his options being crushed the Almighty bless him with one way to emerged out of trouble.Adham khan has no Ambition left to rule crush or win . he has only one desire which is to avenge he's living with extrem hatred in heart to take his revenge from Angel of Death. He want her humiliated, begging for mercy, dying bit by bit infront of him).

"He ask for fort Layout! Issued a decree seeking help from people to bring this palace to it's glorious form!.

"He started his work like I expected Khalid! make sure he Gets all the help he wants!..

"Sure! My lord and as per your word the Room of former king was cleaned up for his stay!..

"Make sure he lives there! That room is important!. And Is there any news about DEMON'S HIRE? Or her?

"No my lord there no information about her, and No Ali hasn't returned so I don't know about them!

"Alright is there anything else?

"Yes my Lord! The Crown Prince as he arrive we came to know he was staying with two women in forest!

"Women? In forest?

"Yes my Lord if you want I can sent men to get them here..

"No you fool! Just keep strict watch on him! Don't think of making move agsinst those women!..

(Yelled Adham out of sudden shocking Khalid to the core of his heart, what wrong he said? Didn't he wanted things and people related to Jalal always? He thought if he get those women then perhaps Adham will get a way to use a bait agsinst Jalal. But here he gets angry Ah he can never understand whicked person like Adham. Bowing to him once he walked out of the room leaving Adham alone with his thoughts).

"I didn't receive gllimpse of women and he enjoyed them as soon he arrive? What Fortunate Men!..

(Thought he with annoyance clutching on the blankets spread over bed, the leaned back inhaling sharply get lost in plotting).

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"Your highness!. thank heaven you return!..

(Yelled Kanika, holding rein of Jodha's horse, Making her stepped down from her horse, sensing concern stressed facials expression of Kanika. She asked in curiousity and concern then glanced behind her men were having unreadable expression on face but they look tensed to).

"What happen? Why you all are stressed?.

"The Crown Prince! He reach Fort!..

(Jodha gave a non-intrested look to Kanika, making everyone to sigh Inwardly, when was the last time they gave her a information and she paid interest? Never most of their concern turn out baseless and today to it was no expectation she started walking towards the cave).

"Your highness you can't act ignorant! What if That tyrrant Manipulated the Crown Prince against you?

"Doesn't matter! Just keep in mind we has another Enemy in cage!..

"That's impossible because the Crown Prince is on mission to bring the fort to it's glorious form!..

"WHAT?

(Snapped Jodha surprisingly, this is something she never expected Crown Prince or any of Abul Shah men to do, what they're trying? To buy loyalty and support of people? Or trying to find a way to meet me? Darn she hates Crown Prince more Than that Tyrrant Adham khan. What that demon did in past was still expected crediting to his Ambitious Whicked Personality. but what Crown Prince did broke her beyond repair).

"Yes he issued a decree instead of order he humbly requested people to approach and help him!..

"Hm! Anything else? Ajit Singh?

"Yes"! There's a message arrive from King Abul Shah for Adham to report to him!..or face wrath of Imperial army!.

(She ask to change the topic and compose herself but then reply of Ajit made her confused in past she would have ask him to deliver the message to Adham no message ever reach Adham or sent by Adham outside went without her inspection. To know the plans his plot she has to keep strict eye on him and his men. But now it's not Him in fort but crown Prince to, what she should do? He must have begin his job to manipulate Crown Prince more against me. Why it's bother you? Ask her mind making her clutch her dagger. I don't care what he think I care what he do further to Spoil my plan. The message wasn't Unexpected for her she anticipated Abul Shah to get charge up against Adham because she was the one to use voice of Ali, Adham khan's men to order Demon's hire to kill General Fahad. She didn't spared Ali either the men who wasn't loyal to his own master in fear of death. cannot gain her favour or her Shelter. Minute later she decided to do as she done before to check crown Prince Plan to).

"Deliver it to fort as usual!.. let's go Kanika!..

(Getting rid of her weapons, expect Dagger , she walked away with Kanika, to her usual Hut where she lives as Keeper of Forest and helper of Angel of death men's when holding the wooden bundle in hand Kanika spoke looking at Jodha).

"You should meet him once!.. perhaps conversation can!..

"I will meet him, "but not yet!..and don't think about mending the dead bonds!..

"They doesn't but we believe in reincarnation!.

"We do but we won't do anything to reincarnate dead relation!..

(Replied Jodha, in firm tone, this held finality and rage, but her mood didn't stayed sour for long, reaching the hut she get's surprise to see Veer trying to lit bonefire).

"People despise bidding farewell to love one! But only the return makes one love the farewell to!.

"Are you staying here to rub these poetic stuff on me?

"No! I'm here to see you return safe and healthy!..

(What's gotten on his head? Thought Jodha inwardly glancing around with her sharp cautious eyes, sensing the change in but she frowned then look back at Kanika who just let out a sheepish smile. She glared at the Fine wood work cot tables and shelf).

"What's all this? Who bought this?.

"I did! I'm working at fort, And!..

"Person known to snatch doesn't give gifts!

(Saying this she pushed the things decorated over the Wood shelf, then dragging the table and wooden Almirah threw them out of hut without listening him completely Kanika try to stop her to try to tell her something. But she refused to pay heed to her and yelled after pushing the cot outside hut as well he open his mouth to call her out when she hissed at him furiously).

"What did I told you? "Against us then go to hell!..

"But!..why? For her? Did you even think of questioning her?. "About her Evil Ambition?

(Jodha sared at him in rage, her lips quiver in Anger her eyes were blazing fire she was looking like Fire ready to turn everything to Ashe. But Jalal wasn't one to get scared he rebukuked her by asking again).

"She had him live like corpse!. If she despise him so much why not to end him at once on own?..Why? She's using you and all the people here?.on the basis of him tormenting everyone here?.

(He didn't realized while speaking how higher his tone grow, he appraoch her and holding her by shoulders by both hands ask shaking her a bit staring deep into her eyes).

"Come to your sense Radha! Try to to understand she's isn't what you all think of her!.

He anticipated a reply from her, a response even in anger but he found none. She said nothing just stared at him with unreadable expression. As if trying to analyse whether to laugh at his words , ignore him or slice his throat at once. But for present she jerk his hand off from her shoulder and retreated a step back from him. And heard Kanika voice who step beside her till now hearing him).

"You are right! She's isn't what everyone think of her!.Just like King Abul Shah and his son isn't what you think of them!.

"Don't you dare to speak about my fa his majesty!. he's father figure to me!..

"Same way we can't hear anything against Angel of death She's everything to us!.

"She's you come with me I will prove you she's isn't angel but Evil!. A demon in disguise!..

"Get here with evidence!. "Till then get out of here!.

(Shutting the door made of Bamboo wood, she turn around seething in rage while Jalal stood outside stunned to her strong reaction to mere things he bought. The rage, the hatred of her stunned him to the core of his heart. When she a mere commoner of Amer hates him this much then he can't imagine the intensity of hate the Angel of death has for him? Or hatred of Jodha If she would've been alive. But more than rage hate it was pain expressed through her trembling form, raged eyes. Pain of being humiliated but he fail to understand what he did which made her feel like she had been humiliated what pain she has? Why so much hatred? But now he has other thing to do mend his and his father's broken image Infront of people and unreveal the REALITY of Angel of Death. Fine I will return with evidence only. Thinking this he walked out of there).

"You think I would have accepted the present from Crown Prince? It's him, he worked on this with other!..

(Listening Kanika words Jodha open her eyes, the rage convert into surprise. She blinked and stared at Kanika silently speechless, where's Kanika who understood her just bent down placed her hands on her shoulder. "Who can blame her? Didn't she taken help from crown Prince? Formed bond of friendship? Gift him and gain present from him? Where it's lead her? Today she had no one either Than her people, her friend Kanika there's nothing left in her life she can call her own. Crediting to Crown Prince and his father that wicked Soul Adham. And today getting present from the wealth provided by those Demons seem like a slap of humiliation. Those who snatched everything from her dare to make shift in her place provide comfort?. How dare they, and how she can accept it as the proud daughter Fierce Rajput? No her blood won't let her embrace a single grain from those Demon no matter who is the medium to provide her comfort. She wants no association with them by anyways and this was known to Kanika as well however she assume something else).

"Kill your fear before it's kills you!..

"Emotion you assume my fear is my pride!.I wants nothing to do with the wealth those Demon posses!

"That wealth is solely our!..

"That's where you are wrong wealth position is traitorous it's belong to no one!.

"Alright! But you can't risk revealing yourself to anyone, how he will take your reaction?.

"He doesn't matter beside, it's time for real Battle!.

"I don't understand!..

"But he did he will and once he understand he will be the one paving way for my victory!.

(Kanika frowned in confusion, but didn't said anything just nodded calmly and went to set things for her stay while Jodha instead of staying inside walked out of the hut and looked at the wood work. Slowly she picked them up and drag the under the shed to prevent it from getting ruined by rain water. Then stared at the woodwork each one was Enchanting and alluring to sight. "He's really Excellent Craftsman! How unfortunate instead of applauding him I graced him with rage!. I should have heard him thought she with Grieved look on face. Then touched a little wooden box opening it she get astonish to see the Little wooden worked warrior women and Men facing each other with sword. She chuckled at the sight of it realizing it's how he put the image of their first meet. She couldn't help but Wonder when was the last time she laughed over something petty thing as such? But she didn't wondered much. Why he's so concern if what I think? Or do? Why it's bother him? If I get in danger? The flash of how he held her hand took her inside hut to stop her from going away. How he shakes her by having hold on her shoulder trying to make her see the reality of her only. Did it felt good? To see a person so easily showing his right over her unknowingly stepping over the basic courtesy?. Perhaps she replied to herself subconsciously she was aware the wonder he's doing but she didn't wants to pay heed to it).

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"Keep these bundle of grass here!..

(Instructed Aziz to the caretaker printing hand at right side while looking at horse in the temporary build Stable he exclaimed in sheer surprise then commanded in rageful tone gripping the neck of caregiver).

"what's this were you starving it?... Don't forget Sultan is his favourite!.. if anything happens to him you will be bricked alive!..

(He was about to continue but the sight of Enraged Jalal stepping through the entrance at fort walk-in in fast paced towards his chamber made him leave the caregiver and rush to Jalal in curious and concern).

"Jalal! What happened?..

"No now Aziz!.

(Instead of answering him he walked towards his chamber, and yelled while placing here and there where's Aziz followed him behind)

"I hate her!. just once I get her and solid evidence against her ,then I will show Radha that I was right!...

"Then to no benefit!. Women rather embrace death than their mistake!.

(Stated Aziz with amused grin on face Jalal looked at him in narrowed gaze, which made him laugh out loud the look convert into Glare as Aziz try to hold onto his laughter than spoke minute later).

"There's to much to do here! We haven't earned anything here yet! Not even full knowledge!. Hence it's sheer foolishness to impose our half baked analysis on people believed so religiously at!..

"Hm than what I should do? I she um she ask me to meet when I have evidence against her!..

"First drink this, then get on work for few days! Let her rage cool down!. Then meet her and Accept you are wrong!..

"What? You want me to say I'm wrong Abul Faith Jalal ud-Mohammad is wrong? How dare you!..

"See that's what I say in matter of heart ego should be kicked under foot sole!.. you want her to help us!. She won't help until you gain her Favour!.

"Hm you are right I shouldn't forget my goal! She's key to unlock the Angel of Death secret!.. and to have the key I need to mellow down!.

(Exclaimed Jalal pnacing his palm on Aziz shoulder who was being lord of fort taking charge of everything to best way. The wonder of Aziz sugary words and humbleness of him touched the people very much they're willing to work for him willing to serve him best way and coming with more people. A move at time thought he but his gaze fall on top of shoe sole frowning then glaring furiously he plucked his dagger out and shot at left side behind earning a loud yelp of men, Aziz who get astonish by Jalal move immidately rush to caught the men).

"Khalid!. You!. How dare you spy on Crown Prince!..

(Holding him by neck Aziz dragged him Infront of Jalal and asked in Rage as well curiousty instead of answering Aziz Khalid fall on feet of Jalal and started to beg for mercy. Who in response just glared down at him).

"From time I arrive here you and your master is doing nothing either than begging for mercy!

(Khalid looked down in rage of humiliation but look up in fear and humbleness as if it went unnoticed by Jalal who sense his change of posture of body language. But he choose to ignore interested to hear what he has to say in his defence. But before he could say anything a soldier rush inside with bow head, holding a scroll in hand).

"Your Grace a message by His majesty for Subedar Adham khan!.

(Jalal nodded and motion the soldier to handover the royal scroll to him. Taking it in hand he unfolded the Scroll and read the message from beginning to end as he read his expression change from curiousty to shock and in last smirk. "Finally got way!. "Now two of my enemy will be down at once!. Thinking this he clear his throat and spoke in commanding tone).

"Get Adham Khan here!. And Aziz! Speed up the work of fort renovation we have very little time!..

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Amazing chappy

Want to truth to come out soon

Want to see them together

But first forgiveness

It's really curse of love

Update soon

Thanks for Pm

Thank you Kavya 🤗

I'm glad you enjoyed ☺️

"Yes it will be out soon! 😳

"Forgiveness I don't think there's any place for forgiveness yet 😆

"Yeah you are right! It's indeed curse of love 😒

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"Thank you 🤗 for lovely review ♥️

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Loved it dear

Awesome part

Hope truth is out soon & things are settled

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

The story's going on. Everyone has their own plan. I like your lines about the garden. for him, it's a symbolic sign of their ruined relation. Think he wants renovation of the fort because in memory of their past relation and his guilt about his role in Adhams evil play. He's lost in old memories of Jodha.

Past part beetween Jalal and Bharmal speak of the deep entanglements.

Interesting how Adham play his game further. His admission that he used Jalal... and his annoncement of importance of King Bharmals room... certainly he has something in his evil mind. Despite his current situation. he's eaten away by his hatred and revenge. Maybe he again try to use Jalal to gain his goal.

In Veers conversation with Jodha he almost gave his disguise away. Jodha calls for evidence against Angel of Death and kick him out. There's so much hatred in her tormented soul. All because of treason, power and desire of others. What a plot. Great! She also wants to use Jalal to gain her goal. But I think deep inside of her there are feelings for him. the thin line beetween love and hatred... but she doesn't want to admit it to herself. too hurt by his supposed actions

On the other side Jalal also wants to use her to gain his goal. everyone tries to take advantage of the other in this triangle relation.

Hope, the truth will come to light. Let's see how they find together. This part truely deserves the title curse of love

awesome part. waiting for continuation

thanks for pm Avika 💖💖

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