SS: SAATHIYA MERE part 3 updated

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Hi yrhpk fans,

I am Janu..I am new to this forum..

I am big big fan of shaheer and YRHPK...It is fresh and my favourite character is ofcourse AWWBIR...

In lockdown You all don't believe I had almost seen Mishbir scenes 10 times each..


So, now I couldn't resist myself to pendown my creative thoughts...so came up with this SS..

Actually I am a person who doesn't like seperations in life's..jho bhi ho milke face karna he..na family ke liye na khud keliye nahi kisi aur keliye alag nahi hona chahiye..

(Pls forgive my hindi grammar mistakes bcz iam from Hyderabad so, my hindi technically not that good so,mostly I will use mixed language of hindi and english)


So much introduction...I will directly go to story line::

This story starts from the dialogue where Meenu gives ultimatum to Abir to leave mishti..This is my take from there rather than seperation...Hope you enjoy....


PART 1:

Meenu: Mishti ko choddho Abiir..varna me Minakshi Rajvansh vada kartha hu ki Duniya ko batha dungi ki Kunal mera sothela beta hai..

Abir could not hear anything except "Mishti ko choddho" He is not able to breath properly...and thinking in mind: choddhooo..nahi..me e nahi karsaktha..par Kunal..nahi vo seh nahi payega...kya karoo..kya karoo...me Bigben ko jeeth nahi doongi..me ek ko choose nahi karsaktha..soch Abir soch..tum karsakthi ho...

He closed his eyes and saw brave mishti...got his courage and opened his eyes...

Abir: Tikhe maa me shaadi thoddungi..par aap vada karo ki Kunal ko kuch nahi bathayengi...

Meenu: vada he mera...

Parul: nahi benba esa math kariye...Abir ka dil tootjayega...

Abir: wo nahi samjhenge maasi chalo..

Abir leaves with Parul maasi...and while driving he is thinking...aap jeeth nahi sakte maa...mujhe aur Mishti ko alag nahi karsaktha..

By then mishti reached RvS and entered abir's room..

Mishti: Abir aaj me bahut khush hoo..and take her bag and take paper birds rainbow out and hang it in the room..

E khushiyo ki rainbow hai Abir..

That's all for today..will come up with part 2 ASAP...


Precap: Abir breakup with mishti....

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi and welcome to the forum. I liked the preview. I am waiting for the next part.

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Originally posted by: Dotslover22

Hi and welcome to the forum. I liked the preview. I am waiting for the next part.


Thank you..ya will update ASAP

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Originally posted by: Janu.301017


Thank you..ya will update ASAP

You are welcome
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi came up with part 2. Hope you enjoy it..

PART 2:

After hanging the khushiyon ki rainbow mishti went down to other family members and sat with them waiting for Abir..


By then Abir reached RVS and entered inside with a heavy heart..saw mishti and his eyes were filled with tears but composed himself and went to BP and BM took their blessings..and said

Abir: without seeing mishti..me thoda fresh hoke aathao BP

BP: Tike beta aap jao..hum intezaar katlenge

Mishti was confused about Abir..why he is not seeing me

Abir went to his room...sat on the bed..socho Abir..kya karoo..and saw mishtis khushiyon ki rainbow...Abir went and touched it..and thinking about her...he got an Idea...!!!

Abir takes one origami bird and write something on it and thinks e tho mishti thak pahunchna chayiye...kaise..

Abir: Jugnu...Jugnu..

Jugnu: ha bhayya..

Abir: Tum mera ek kaam karoge..??

Jugnu: kya hua bhayya..aap pareshaan lagrahi ho...?? Bathayiyena mujhe kya karna hoga??

Abir: ha me Tiku Jugnu..Bus e bird kisi na kisi thara mishti tak pahunchna hoga..kisi aur ko patha nahi chalna chahiye..

Jugnu: Tike bhayya..

Abir washed his face..which is so tired and went down..while seeing her maa..who is smiling...with a proud feel on her face

BM: Lo Abir bhi aagaya..chalo hum aarthi karthe dono ki..aau Abir yaha baitho..

Abir sat beside mishti...

Mishti: sab tike na ajeeb Rajvansh..??

Abir: Ha...

Mishti: nahi..bathao baath kya hai..tumare aakhe dekhe hi lagraha he..mujhse kuch chuparaheho..

Abir: (thinking..he has to give time for Jugnu..) Nahi mishti...me tik nahi hu..

All were shocked by abir's high tone

Mishti: kya hua Abir..

Abir: Dokha hua he mere saath (mishti is turned towards Abir)

Mishti: kesi dhokha aur kisne kiya??(Abir saw Jugnu..keeping the bird in mishtis bag,which is kept on the table behind mishti as all are concentrating on Abir nobody saw Jugnu near the bag aur Big Ben is busy in smiling )

Abir: tumne diya mishti mera bharosa thodke..

Mishti: kya bol rahi ho Abir..mene tumara trust todha??

Abir: Ha mishti..tumne thoda..mera trust, mera dil...kyu..tume nahi patha baba ki bareme..nahi patha unke frauds ki bareme..nahi patha vo mujhe phasane ki koshish karta hi he???

Mishti: Ha.mabir patha he..par..

Abir: par var kuch nahi he..mujhe koi explanation nahi sunna..jis ladki ko insab se jyada apne engagement ki padi ho...uss ladki se me shaadi kese karsaktha hu..(Abir is not seeing mishtis eyes but everywhere..and both are at state of breakdown)

Mishti: nahi Abir...I love you..mene tumhari trust nahi thoda he Abir..mujhe explanation keliye ek moka tho do..

Abir: mujhe koi explanation nahi chayiye..Just leave..

Mishti: nahi Abeer...nahi...and broke down...

Abir could not take anymore and turned to cards and tore them and went to his room...started crying..sorry mishti mujhe esab bolna pada...

BM and BP were shocked to hell but consoled mishti and took her away..all left RVS with a heavy heart..

Kunal-kuhu are also shocked...

That's it for today..


Hope you enjoy it...


Pre-cap: Mishti ko vo bird milgaya..









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Hi guys..

Here comes part 3

PART 3:

Mishti is heart broken and went to her room..she is not crying..she just sat like a still rock..BM and kuhu came and saw her..

BM:Mishti..mishti..tum rolo beta aise darsh dabake rakhna nahi chayiye..

Kuhu: yes #cry heart out

Mishti: nahi BM me kyu rou..kuch tho baath he BM..Varna Abir mujhse ase baath nahi kartha...

Kuhu: # accept truth..

Mishti: nahi kuhu e truth nahi he..varna jis Abir hamare risthe ko yaha thak pahunchne keliye ek tapasya ki ho..vo esa kabi nahi karega...kuch tho baath he..

BM: mujhe bhi viswaas nahi horaha he beta..par jo usne kaha..hum vo bhi taal nahi sakte he na..

Mishti kept silent thinking: kya hua ajeeb Rajvansh...mujhe tumse baath karni he..

Mishti: BM and kuhu mujhe kuch der keliye akela chhod do..me khud bahar aakar sabse millungi..

BM,kuhu: ok and left..

Mishti: mera phone..??? Kaha he..mujhe vusse baath karni he....she looks for phone in bag..then she get the origami bird.

Mishti: e tho...mene rainbow me lagaya tha...and opens..there Abir wrote:

Mishti aaj me tumhari dil dukhane wala hoon..par ek baat dhyaan se suno..me jo bhi tume bura bhala kahungi..tum apne mann par math lagana..meri ek majboori ki vajase..me e karrahahoo..par iss mushkil ko hum saath me paar karungi...but before taking any decision I want to meet u..so aaj raath 12 baje hamari hideout pe aana..me intazaar karunga tumhare...love tumhara Abir..

Mishti: just hugged the bird..mujhe patha tha koina koi baath jaroor he...I love you too Abir..me aaungi..zaroor..

BP is so angry about Abir...BM is trying to console him...Ji suniye jaroor kuch hua he..varna abir asa kaise..

BM: vahitho..agar ye baath Kunal kahi hothi hum samajthe par Abir se e umeed nahi thi mujhe...shayad hum Abir ko pehchanne me galthi tho nahi ki...??

Mishti listened..Abir ko galat nahi samajna chayiye...and goes to BM and BP

BP: aao na..beta..bhool ja beta..jo kuch bhi..

Mishti: nahi bade papa..aap Abir ko galat samajh rahe ho..

BP: Aap abhi usse support karrahe ho??

Mishti: mene kahana badi maaa koi vaja he...dekho na..e Abir ne kya likha he..( shows the bird to BP and BM)

BM: E sab kya he mishti..esa kyu kiya Abir ne...asa kya vaja hogi??

BP: Patanahi..asi koiso baath he..again kuch Meenakshi ki vaja se tho nahi kiya??

Mishti: patha nahi BP..Abir se milne ki baad bathadungi aapko puri baat..ab aaplog araamse sojao..jho bhi problem ho..hum dono milke solve karenge..

BP: hume tum per poora bharosa hey...

Meanwhile Kunal confronts Abir:

Kunal: bhai aapko kya hua..?

Abir: kya hua Kunal...I am fine everything is awesome..when you are near..

Kunal: nahi bhai aap mishti se ese baath kese ki??

Abir: kyu Kunal thum shuru se hi e sab chahtithi..aaj hua..kush ho jao..

Kunal: ha bhai you are right..I don't want this rishtha happen..but you always argued and stood by her..but aaj asa kya hua..aap..directly rishtha toda...??

Abir: saw Parul maasi who is crying and seeing them..kuch nahi Kunal..me baad me baath karthi hoo.iss bare me..I am tiered I will go and sleep you also go..kal baath karthe..

That's all for today..

Hope you enjoyed this part


Pre cap: Mishbir emotional hug...with lights in the background

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