Akshan ff:tum ko paaya part 11 23/7/2020 updated - Page 3

hi dear update was good. but it was so short one.plz give long update na. ok stay safe.

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Part 9

Guddan was crying continuously she felt like she has no one in this world to love her

Aj came home

Dadi:lalla tu agaya

Aj:ma guddan kahan hai

Dadi:apni kamre par hai rorahi hogi ithna datta hai tu us bechari ko ab ja he mafi puch

Aj goes to upstairs

He opened the saw guddan lying on bed

Aj goes towards her

Aj:guddan I am sorry patha nahi kya hua tha muje I am really sorry galthi hogaya

But guddan didn’t respond

Aj :kuch tho bolo muj par chillauo galthi hogaya mujse

But he didn’t respond he make her turn towards him

He gets shocked blood in her hand he hold her hand one knife is lying there

Aj:guddannnn yeh kya kiya tumne he hold her hand and warp a towel around her waist

Aj scream maaa....

Dadi and others came running

Dadi:kya hua lalla but she gets shocked to saw vision infrond of her

Durga:yeh kya kiya isne ...,

Dadi:kishore Doctor ko phone karo

Doctor came there after sometime

Aj:Doctor guddan kaise hai???

Doctor:zyada bada chot nahi tho gehri nahi thi isliye gabrane ki zaroorath nahi vo teek hai mei ne da ayi diya hai ab sorahi hai

Everyone sign in relief

Dadi:khana ji ka lack lack Shula hai

Saru:yeh sab kya hai aj me ek bar datta tho suicide karne gaya

Lakshmi:vahi thi agar aisa karna hothi tho hum sab kithni bar suicide karthi

Durga:chup raho

Aj look at them

Dadi:lalla hum tumara gussa janthi hai par guddan aisa nahi nadan hai bachi hai use is duniya mei koyi nahi hai tumare Siwa shyd tum use dur jaugi yeh soch kar yeh kadam udaya hoga

Aj:maa mere aisa koyi irada nahi thi patha nahi kya hogaya tha muje is vakth or mei kabhi nahi socha guddan aisa kuch karugi

Dadi:chalo ab jo hogaya uske bare mei bolkar kya fayda par abse use hurt math karo or yeh hameesha yaad rakna usne apna sab kuch tumari vajah se koya hai ab use kush rakna tumara responsibility hai

Aj:mei sab samjathi hu ma

Dadi:chalo use samjauo jauo Ab tu bhi sojauo kal bath karthe hai

Aj goes to his room saw guddan sleeping he sit beside her he hold her hand which is injured

Aj softy kiss her wound

Aj:kudh ko kabhi hurt math karna tumara choti si chot bhi muje dard dethi hai apne apko chot dene ki bare mei socha bhi kaise tu mije datt thi mujse gussa krathi par ye tumne kya kiya aisa saza math do muje

He also sleep beside her holding her hand

Bahus where chating

Saru:bahuth sha Thur hai vo guddan kithna hum socha use bada shathir hai vo

Lakshmi:vo tho sach hai ab tho aj use kuch nahi bolugi

Durga:sahi kaha tumlog yeh sab udo natak h hoga varna kon aisa kartha hai

Saru:ab aj use kuch nahi bolugi na use dattugi ulta hame use kuch kiya tho hum par badakugi

Lakshmi:yes aj bahuth dar gaya hai ajj kya patha vo fir se aisa kuch kare agar aj datta tho

Durga:mei jaise socha vaise bewakoof nahi hai vo emotional black mail kar kar vo aj ko pasaugi

Lakshmi:pasaugi nahi aj this pas China hai uski chal mei

Saru:mei tho kehthi us din door nahi jis aj antra maji ka jagah ise dugi

Durga:hmm tu teek kehrahi hai aisa hi chala tho antra maji aj ki zindagi sr nikal kar fekugi

Lakshmi:sab kehthi hai is guddan sr kuch nahi hops the hai par mei tho kehthi jo 15 saal mei koyi nahi karvaya vo yeh karugi

Durga:kya???

Lakshmi:AJ KI ZINDAGI SE ANTRA MAJI KO NIKALNA.......,

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Part 10

At mid night guddan’s sleep get broke she woke up she saw aj near her she try to move akshat get up

Aj:Guddan kya hua tu teek hai

Guddan:hum teek hai jindal saab

Aj:yeh Kya Kiya Guddan tumne kuch hona this tho mera kya hothi he cup her face tears rolling from guddan’s eyes

Guddan:muje laga ap muje chod kar cahli gayi

Akshat hug her he protectively wrap her in his emabarsss

Aj:aisa din kabhi nahi augi guddan tumara jindal saab hameesha tumara saath hogi tu this janthi huna apni jindal saab ka gussa

Guddan:hm

Aj:fir aisa kyun kiya

Guddan didn’t say anything

Akshat hold her hand which have injured he

Aj:bahuth dard horahi hogina

Guddu:hm bahuth

One long tear escape from his eyes he kiss her wound

Aj:abhi bhi dard hai

Guddan:ap mere saath hai tho koyi dard hame nahi chugi

Aj hug her make her lay on bed aj try to get up Guddan hold his hand

Jindal saab muje ap chahiye meri samne

Akshat kiss her forehead tightly hold hug her th u sleep like that

Next morning Guddan woke up she saw aj aranged food for her he smiles

Guddan:good morning

Akshat:good morning

He make her get up

Guddan:hame wash room jana hai

Aj take her to wash room

Akshat put her in bathtub

Guddan:jindal saab mei kudh karugi

Aj:nahi tumari hath mei dard hogi mei karugi

She make he take bath and make her wear her dress dadi and bahu’s came to his room

They get shocked to see akshat try to make guddan comb her hair

Dadi smiles:va lalla tune tho sab seek liya

Guddu smiles akshat try to go

Guddan:mera makeup bhi Latina jindal saab Bahu’s get shock aj make her ready perfectly

Dadi:aj tho bahuth pyaari lagarahi hai meri guddu’s

Guddu smiles

Guddu:jindal saab ab ap jayiye office keliye late hogi maji muje khana dugi

Aj:par...

Dadi:tu ja lalla mei huna aj goes from there

Dadi giving food to guddan

Dadi:muje bulathi meri bachi ya apni bahuon ko bulathi madad keliye akele akele kyun sab kiya chot laga haina tume

Guddu:nahi maji vo tho jindal saab kiya na sab mei me kuch kam nahi kiya muje nahaya dressing karvaya hair bhi banaya but she stop when she understood what she tell dadi try to cover her smile

Bahu’s gets shocked aj????

Guddu:hmm dadi khana bahuth tasty hai apne banaya

Dadi:nahi tumari jindal saab. E

Guddan:dadi muje dard horahi hai mei toda sothi hu she act like sleeping dadi smiles and goes from there

At outside

Lakshmi:hu yeh mei kya suna aj or uske beech...

Saru:ab kuch nahi hosaktha Durga di jaldi hamareliye choti devar ya nanad augi...uska intzar karo

Lakshmi:hu bagwaan kaise samaj ko muh dikaugi hum

Durga:chup bait tum dono dimak math khayo

Saru:Durga di aj or Guddan ke beech physical relationship zaroor hai ab hum unhe alag Nahi Kar paugi

Durga:nahi aisa hone nahi desaktha hum kuch karna hoga

Part 11

At night aj came home he saw Guddan watching tv in hall she smiles at her he sit beside her

Guddan:jindal saab ap agaya

He happily hug aj

Dadi and bahu’s saw this bahu’s get angry dadi get happy

Aj:kaisa hu tum ab

Guddan:teek hu

Aj saw her her messed up after all she is Guddan 😉

Aj:yeh kya Hal banakar rakha hai apne apko cheeshe mei dekh

Guddan:vo mei tv dekrahi thina

Aj:tho??

Guddan:aise hi ptha nahi kaise hua

Aj smiles at her antics he make hair perfectly adjust

Guddan smiles put her head on his shoulder

Aj:kya dekrahi hu

Guddan:film

Aj:oh

Guddan:apko patha hai is movie bilcul hamari life jaisa hai

Aj:aisa kya hai

Guddan:hero ki pehle shadi hua tha uski pehli pathni margaya vo bhi apko tharah pehli pathni ko bahuth pyaar karthi hai fir vo dusari shadi ki undono ke beech pyaar hone vale thi ajanak pehle pathni agaya .......she pause.....Aj just look at her guddu tightly hug Aj

Dadi and bahu’s listening their talk

Aj:fir Kay hua movie mei

Guddu:vo apni pehle pathni ke saath chali gaya dusari pathni ko chod kar

Aj:vo use bahuth pyaar karthi hoga isliye uske saath gaya hoga

Guddu:tho kya ap bhi hame chodkar jaugi agar antra ji vapas agaya tho???????

He qustion shock everyone Aj was staring her

Aj understand her heart

Aj:Guddan marne vala kabhi vapas nahi atha vo sab sirf film mei hotha hai asal mei aisa kabhi nahi hoga

Guddan:suppose aisa hogaya tho ap hame chodugi kya??

Aj:Guddan kyun tum ithna sochthi hu kuch bhi hojaye mei tumara hath nahi chodugi

Guddan:sach

Aj:sachi

Guddan innocently ask pinky promise

Aj smiles at her pinky promise

Dadi goes from there smiling

Dadi:yeh gudiya bina pagal hai ......

Lakshmi:Durga ab kya sun na baki reh gaya antra maji we zyada Aj ise man rahi hai ab

Saru:yeh sab kya hai Durga di Aj aisa kaise badal use milkar kuch maheene hua hai saloon pehle pyaar Aj bulgaya

Durga:muje iuch samjmei nahi arahi hai Aj ise ithna importance kyun derahi hai

Lakshmi:vahitho antra maji ko bulgaya kya Aj???

Durga:patha nahi aisa bhi hosaktha hai curse vo kuch galath na kare isliye aj us de pyaar de bath kar rahi hai uski dare bath manrahi hai

Saru:muje aisa nahi lagtha

Lakshmi:muje tho lagtha hai Aj ko use pyaar hogaya

Durga:shut up aisa nahi hoga

At akshan’s room

Guddan is making a drawing

Aj:yeh kya hai

Guddu:Kuch Nahi aise hi bana rahi hai

Akshat smiles

Guddan:jindal saab mei apki god mei sar rak sakthi hu

Aj:kyun nahi

He make her lay on his lap

Aj:kya hua

Guddu:Jindal Saab ap bahuth achi hu saber achi meri kithni care karthi hu ap

Aj smiles

Guddu:Jindal Saab yeh dekiye meri drawing

Aj look at that yeh kya hai

Guddu:hum app or hamara baby

Aj look at her shockingly

Guddu:Jindal Saab hamari bhi was ek Guaita hona chahiye haina

Aj didn’t say anything she ask one more time

Aj:kyun nahi bilcul Guddan ki tharah

She smiles

Guddu:Jindal Saab par muje ap jaisa baby cahhiye

Aj :kyun??

Guddu:kyuki muje ap pasand hai

Aj smiles he make her sleep

Akshat:kya mei sahi kar rahi hu ?guddan mere saath ek jindagi chahthi hai kya mei use vo depaugi kya aisa hopayega??vo jo kushi chahthi hai kya mei use de payega..............