Akshan ff:tum ko paaya part 11 23/7/2020 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
#11

Nice part ❤️❤️


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Waiting😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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waiting update soon dear.all ur stories are so good. if possible update daily one story .stay safe stay home.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 6

Akshat take guddan to beach they where siting on sand aj hold guddan’s hand protectively

Guddu:jindal saab yahan kithna shand haina

Aj:ha jab meri man mei kuch bhi dard hogi tho mei yaham athi hu acha lagugi

Guddu:papa mama himself ithna nafrath kyun karthi hai jindal saab mana ki hum unki kilaf jakar apse shadi kiya for bhi jan mei mouth we ladrahi thi vo kyun nahi aya hame milne kya hum ithna buri hai

Akshat:kabhi nahi tum is duniya ki sabse achi ladki hu jithna tum baharse kubusurath hai uthna andar bhi hai

Guddu:tho vo humse naraj kyun hai

Aj:meri galthi ki vajah se na mei tumari zindagi mei atha na yeh sab guddu stop him

Guddu:nahi jindal saab mana ki ap halath thi par yahan akar muje ek ma mila dadi mei jise muje hameesha it hazar thi ek family mila or sabse bad kar app mila

Aj:mei???

Guddu:zindagi pehle bar koyi muje ithna special feel mara rahi hai vo app hai ek rajkumari ki tharah raktha hai ap hame

Aj smiles :tum rajkumari hi hu jindal pariwar ki tume kabhi kisi chees ki kami nahi hogi

Guddu smiles and hug her jindal saab they where siting watching sea they so a couple fighting after sometime they patch up guddu look at aj

Aj:it’s normal hubby wife talk guddu smiles one old couple siting together

Guddu ask jindal saab kya hum bhi aisa bura hogi

Aj:zaroor vo tho hina hai Val bhi safed hogi he tease her

Guddu:par value safed hogi tho hamari kubusurathi chalijaugi na

Aj:tumari andar ki kubusurathi hameesha rahugi na

Guddu:kya hum bhi aisa hi budape mei bhi saath beech augi

Aj smiles hmmm par abhi de tumari jindal saab bura hogaya hai

Guddu:par ap tho handsome hai or hame poora yakeen hai hum saath rahugi poori jindagi aj smiles they so a couple with a small baby she is running and hug guddu aj guddu smiles and kiss her they chat with that couple and ply with baby girl after some time

Guddu:jindal saab kya hame bhi aisa princess hogi???????

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow

Amazing and lovely scence of akshan

Ending guddu ki lovely wish

Update soon waiting for next part

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Posted: 5 years ago
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it was so good dear .thanks for updating.

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Part 7

Aj smiles:zaroor hogi tum jaisa cute princess she smiled they go back to home

Dadi:lalla guddu teek hai

Guddu:ha dadi hum teek guddu sys her about their trip

Guddu:dadi vo baby bahuth cute thi

Dadi smiles meri guddu ko bhi aisa hu ek princess milugi akshat take good care of guddan she is know ok

Oneday aj doing his work guddu hug him

Guddu:jindal saab ap busy hu

Aj:nahi bolo kya chahiye tume

Guddu smiles app......

Aj:mei????

Guddan:ha app ap hamra saath vakth bithayiye

She shutdown his laptop and came to bed and side hug her

Aj:kya hua

Guddan:kuch nahi she kiss him he also kiss her

Aj:tum ab bahuth choti hu

Gudaaan:ithna bhi choti nahi hu hum

Guddan:apne kaha tha na is duniya mei mei kuch bhi puchugi ap muje dugi

Aj:ha kya chahiye tume

Guddan:app chahiye hame jindal saab kya ap dugi vo

Aj first close him yes and sys:tum ko bhi chahthi mei dugi

Guddan hug him she want him she want a family she want their princess akshat kiss her he felt his body temperature higher because it’s first a young girl touching him that too his wife he remove her dress she so beautiful she so delicious he take care not to hurt because for she is precious he don’t want to hurt her when entered inside her she scream akshattt....

Aj:dard horahi hai

Guddu:nahi. Ap hame kabhi dard nahi dugi they sleep hugging each other

Next morning

Guddu woke up she hug aj kiss him aj also woke up

Guddu:thank you for completing me

He smiled

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Part 7

Akshat and guddan came to breakfast guddu was blushing hard it’s noticed by bahu’s and dadi

Dadi:kya hua guddan beta ithni sharma rahi hai

Guddan:kuch nahi dadi Durga noticed aj s Hans which is on guddan’s hand after breakfast aj take guddan towards their room

Guddu:jindal saab kya kar rahi hai

Aj:kya kar rahi thi tum

Guddu:mei kya kiya

Aj:ithni sharama rahi hai tu mera ha karab horahi hai

He hug her

Guddu:jindal sab dadi aj push her ma...

Guddu ran

Aj:guddan ruk

Guddu:bye bye jindal saab

Aj smiles he go to office his sudden change noticed by everyone he is smiling

He is wearing color dresses and his closeness with guddan

Bahu’s get shocked because of this

Saru:Durga di yeh guddan aj ko apni jaws I mei pagan banaya hai

Lakshmi:aj ko dekho pagal hogaya poori tharah

Durga:ek dum chup aj antra maji ko kaise bul sakthi hai aisa nahi hoga

Akshan’s room

Guddu aj ki god par apni sar rak kar baita hai

Aj:kya hua kya soch rahi hu

Guddu:kuch nahi jindal saab aisa hi

Aj:aisa hi kya

Guddu:jindal saab mere liye ek story bolona

Aj:what story

Guddu:ha muje story suna hai

Aj agreed he tell her story

Guddu:mei ne apni ma ko kabhi nahi dekha par apmei muje apni ma papa dost sab mila ek pathi bhi

Aj smiled

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Lovely


Baki ke update kab tak milenge?



Waiting.............

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 8

It’s antra’s Bardo guddan pooja ki preparation kartha hai she sea aj was not talking with her he is in angry mode bahu’s prepare antra’s favorite Kheer they are serving this to poor children’s but because of guddan’s mistake kheer gurjatha hai

Durga:yeh tum kya kiya antra maji ki favorite kheer ko Gita diya dadi and aj came there aj get angry he shouted

Aj:gudannn

Guddan:jindal ap kyun chillarahi hai

Dadi pareshan hojatha hai because she know her son will not be in a good mood today

Aj:tumari himath kaise hua guddan

Guddan:jindal saab hame nahi patha tha kheer yaham rakha hai sorry

Aj:antra ki cheeson se dur rahi uski jagah lene ki koshish mar karo

Tears rolling from guddan’s eyes she ran to her room

Durga Lakshmi saru gar happy

Dadi:lalla yeh tune teek nahi kiya uske saath

He go to office

He can’t to any work because his eyes only showing guddan’s face her eyes which is filled with tears he call her but she didn’t respond

He call dadi

Aj:ma vo....

Dadi:kya lalla

Aj:ma guddan kaise hai

Dadi:jab tu gaya tab se room we bahar tak nahi aya na kuch kaya hai kya higaya tume lalla kyun is bechari ko datta ek galthi hogaya use

Aj:ma mei is vakth patha nahi kya hua

Dadi:lalla vo choti hai madam hai use aisa hurt math karo vo bachi apni family sab tumari vajah kiya or tu bhi uske saath behavior karugi tho toot jaugi vo

Aj become silent because his mom is right

Dadi:lalla antra kabhi vapas nahi augi or guddan kabhi antra nahi banugi guddan sirf guddan hai tumari gusse mei use hurt math karo

Aj :ma mei jaldi atha hu

He goes to home

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