New SS (ISHRA) : adhoore chhaa...part -2 ...26/7

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Hlo guys! I i hope u all are good. Today i m back with my story adhoore chhaa. I have kept it on hold but now every one is requesting me to continue it so here i m with new update. Lat thread was closed so i made new thread.

Part 1.

In a stormy weather a man in mid twenties was driving his car harshly looking out continuously. And was praying to god.


Raman: pta nhi kha chali gyi...... Areee shit usko kese pta chla in sb ke baree mein..... Un papers je bare mein..... Oh no.... Ab kahan dhoondo mein ishita ko pta nhi kis haal mein hogi...... Kitna careless kese ho skta hu mein...no.. I can't let her go like this sge us mine.... Mein usse khud se door nhi jane doonga.... I love her... I love her a lot..... Mein uske bina nhi ji sakta.... I know she must be angry on me but i will woo her.... Yes mujhe meri ishita ko dhoodna hoga kese bhi krke...


He was blabbering to himself when he saw some mens were troubling a girl. Raman got out off the car and went towards them. He got shock of his life when he saw ishita standing in middle of them and was crying and pleading them to let her go by clutching her saree pallu around herself tightly. And the Men were lusting over her curves as her curves were fully visible because of her drenched saree.


Ishita: please... Mujhe chod do... I m pregnant.....


She said crying bitterly while folding her hand in front of goons. Raman got another shock when he heard her that she is pregnant. He got happy hearing the same. He was in his trance which broke by goons laughter. They were laughing at her and started going towards her when one of them tried to clutch her pallu but suddenly raman caught his hand in mid and twisted his badly. Ishita hugged raman crying and raman also wrapped his arms around her.


Man1: aye... Hero.... Chla nikal yahaan se.....yrh hmara maal hai.... Agr jaan pyari hai toh nikal jaa....


Raman got angry and hide ishita behind: agar nahi gya toh....


Man2: agar nahi gya toh trri jaan jayegi.... Saying so he attacked on raman with knife. Raman clutched his hand in mid and kicked him. All goons attacked on him. Raman beat them blue and black. Goons ram away leaving ishita and raman alone. Raman turned to her and saw she was crying bitterly. She ran to him and hugged him. Raman caressed her hair while consoling her. After some time she broke the hug and looked at him for brief moment. She turned around saying thank you but raman hold her wrist and spoke


Raman: kahaan jaa rhi ho....


Ishita without turning: let me go Raman....


Raman with moist eyes: I love you ishita.... Please mat jao mujhe chodke....


Raman was pleading in front of his love his wife sorry ex-wife to give him a chance to mend his and her relationship but things were bitter in their relationship.


Raman came in front of her and cupped her face : ishita.... Please ishita..... Forgive me.....i know.. I know ...i m not worthy even to seek forgiveness from you for my deeds.... But try to understand me jaan i love you...... I love you unconditionally.....

Ishita jerks his hands off from her and spoke turning her face other side.

Ishita: you are right mr. Bhalla.... U r not even worthy to seek my forgiveness ....now u realise my place in your life and heart after destroying everything....you don't understand the pain i have gone through but not anymore now i don't need you in my life....

Raman clutched her hand in his spoke trying to make her understand: please jaan don't say like this... U r pregnant jaan please.... Lets go home....

Saying so he started going towards his car dragging her with him. But she pushed him away and spoke spitting fire on him.

Ishita: just stay away raman..... Apko samjh mein nah in ata..... I don't wanna go with you..... And don't try to claim this child...he is mine only mine....aur ab kyu mujhe apne sath le jana chahte ho khin iss bche ke karan mujhe pr taras toh nahi aa gya apko.... Agar esa hai toh please mujhe apki aur apke so called pyar ki jarurat nahi hai....


Raman again came towards her and spoke while covering her with his jacket: please ishita.... Don't say like this.... I know ....i was wrong that time.... I was fool to thought that you are not my type..... But now... Now i have realized my mistake but now i want to correct it.... And dekho.... U are shivering lets sit in car.... Chalo...


Ishita was staring at him without blinking her eyes when he spoke: ese kya dekh rhi ho chalo...


Ishita: dekh rhi hu... Ki aap aur kitna jhoot bol sakte ho.... Aur kitna drama kroge aap raman.... I know apki iss so called care ke piche bhi koi reason hoga tell me......


Saying so she wiped her tears and spoke with determination: bolo kya chahiye apko mujhse.....let me guess..... Mere pass ab kuch raha toh kuch nhi khone ke liye....meri body chahiye.... Apne physical pleasure ke liye....


Thud!, raman slapped her for uttering those words. His eyes were red with anger. He clutched her jaw in his hand tightly and spoke gritting his teeth with anger


Raman: how dare you!.....how dare you to utter those filthy words for yourself....tumhe kya lgta hai.... Ki mai raman bhalla tumse pyaar sirf physical pleasure ke liye kiya.... No... No mrs. Ishita raman bhalla mera pyaar sacha hai aur uska proof tumhari womb mein saans le rha hai..... Aur rahi physical pleasure ki baat agar mujhe itna hi physical pleasure chahiye hota toh tum bhool rhi ho ki mai kon hu ...raman bhalla ko ladkiyon ki kami nahi hai..... Samjhi.....


Tears were trickling downher cheeks from her eyes. He released his hold and hugged her tightly spoke nuzzling her neck


Raman: am sorry ishita......please mujhe maaf kardo..... Pr tum manti kyu nhi.......i love you yaar....


Saying so he broke the hug and looked in her eyes they shared a beautiful eye lock. There were lots of emotions and love in their eyes. Raman broke the eye lock and caressed her cheek where he slapped her and asked her


Raman: jor se lga..... To which ishita nodded in yes he again asked her


Raman: where....


She kept her hand on her heart and said


Ishita crying bitterly: yahaan......apka dhoka lga raman boht jor se.....you have broken my trust raman.... You have broken me in zillion pieces...... Now I i don't have strength to trust anyone anymore please go and let me go..... I will handle myself....


Raman: ishita tumhe smajh mein nhi aa rha.... Ok... Tum mere liye naa sahi hamare bache ke liye chalo.... Dekho kitni baarish ho rhi hai.....tum bimaar ho jaogi aur yeh baby ke liye thik nhi hai....


Ishita with anger: don't you dare to say that this is our child.....yeh sirf mera bacha hai.... Sirf mera.... Samjhe....


Raman while calming her down: ok ....ok.... Mai manta hu ki eh bacha tumhara hai bs.... Ab chalo.....


Ishita turned around and started going towards opposite direction seeing her adamant hr got angry and pulled her towards himself with jerk, she landed on his chest he clutched her upper arms in his hand tightly and spoke gritting his teeth with anger


Raman: bs ishita.... Boht ho gya tumhara..... Tumhe jana toh mere sath hi higa chahe jo ho jaye....ab tumhe apne sath toh leke jaounga hi chahe isme tumhari will ho ya naa ho...


Saying so he scooped her up in his arms making her angry. Ishita started struggling to get out of his arm and spoke while hitting him with her soft hands


Ishita: what are you doing raman... Leave me.... I said leave me otherwise I....


Raman made her sit in car and spoke while ignited the engine: otherwise what..... What you will do mrs. Ishita raman bhalla.....


Ishita: why are you doing this to me..... What i had done...... You yourself gave me divorce..... Mene nhi diya tha.... And yes i m not mrs. Ishita raman kumar bhalla..... I m ishita iyer.....


Raman smiled hearing her and spoke while driving: you know what ishita.... Tum aaj bhi meri ho.... Meri....tum aaj bhi mrs. Ishita raman bhalla ho.....

Ps: i hope you all like it and please don't forget to comment below and share your view about the story. And hit the like button next update will be depend on your response.If i get proper response then i will update ext part soon. Byee to all take care.

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Sukhvi thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
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INDEX

PART 1 above

Part 2

Edited by Sukhvi - 5 years ago
suwathi78 thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very interesting and beautiful update

Emotional too yaar

Too good

Ishita is pregnant

She hate raman why???

Raman save her at right time

What happened between ishra ??

Eagerly waiting

Plz update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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A very nice update please update the next part soon to know more about the story

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Posted: 5 years ago
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superb update continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Congrats on ur new story

Intresting start waiting to see why raman divorced ishitha .

Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice! Do tell us what did raman do as the story unfolds!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting dude!! Continue soonish

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Congratulations for your new story dear

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Heyyy welcome back and I love the story a new creation of yours comeback soon with another update

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